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Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)
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Website/Blog: www.myspace.com/onyxdragonfilms
About Myself: Well, I'm not a big fan of writing about myself. Nonetheless, here goes... I work full-time at the Missouri University of Science and Technology as a Video Production Specialist in relation to Distance Education. When I'm not doing that I'm working with our independent production company (Onyx Dragon Productions, LLC). We've filmed many short films, worked on a few TV shows, filmed one full-length film (which is still in post production) and working on my first full-length, filmed a few weddings, commercials, worked with SIDEKICK Sketch Comedy of The Skinny Improv of Springfield, Missouri and many, many other projects.

When I'm not doing those types of things, I'm usually working with church matters and when I'm not doing that I'm usually relaxing... or writing.

Writing is one of my fondest passions. Though I think I have developed better into a script writer (rather than a short story or novel writer), short stories is where I started and I still enjoy them so.

Keep up the good works, peeps.

UPDATES-- (10-07-08)
1. Uploaded "He Comes Upon a Wish" chapter 2.

2. Uploaded "Lawless" chapter 1. This piece is a western, but with a different touch--it's got plenty of vampire folklore.

3. Also recently uploaded "The Fall of Babylon" chapter 2. This story is going to be amazing for me, because it's my final story in my Babylon collection. Most of my stories on here are of that collection. A great deal of my characters are overlapping in "The Fall of Babylon." For example: David Spencer, Jason Richard Wright, Morgan (from Jason's story), Johnny & Mercedes Masterson (from "NOIR") and others. I may cry by the time I finish this one, because I'll be putting away so many characters. Many I've grown to love. I know I was teary eyed when I finished "Rose's Thorn." It's hard when you know you've reached the end of a character. That's tough stuff.

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Oct 7, 2008Lawless, Chapter 1Adventure 38
Oct 6, 2008He Comes upon a Wish, Chapter 2Horror 58
Oct 1, 2008The Fall of Babylon, Chapter 2Mystery 52
Sep 29, 2008Jason Richard Wright: Lacey AnnMystery 91
Sep 23, 2008Whitechapel, Chapter 1Mystery 83
Sep 15, 2008He Comes Upon a Wish, Chapter 1Horror 87
Aug 11, 2008The Rolling Stone & Wicked Annabelle, Chapter 2Mystery 116
Aug 7, 2008You, as I see It, Chapter 3Miscellaneous Stories 86
Aug 6, 2008Obsession, Chapter 1Mystery 143
Aug 4, 2008You as I see It, Chapter 2Miscellaneous Stories 94
Jul 1, 2008You, as I see It, Chapter 1Miscellaneous Stories 144
Jun 23, 2008An Agent's ThangMystery 135
Jun 23, 2008The WesternerAdventure 120
Jun 18, 2008The Fall of Babylon, Chapter 1Mystery 169
Jun 16, 2008DeliveranceMystery 134
Jun 12, 2008Will Work for Story, Chapter 1Mystery 118
Jun 11, 2008Inbox 2Horror 124
Jun 11, 2008InboxHorror 117
Jun 10, 2008ParapraxisHorror 272
May 22, 2008The Rolling Stone & Wicked Annabelle, Chapter 1Mystery 230
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Comments

Title article: Parapraxis
Date: 2008-06-10 14:34:27
Response
Hey, FutureWriter, thanks for the comments. You really made me think. I went back and reread what I had written and I still stand pretty firm by what I wrote. The ending is a reflection of Rob's Theory. Consider that before she even knew it was Rob and that he was going to do anything harmful to her, she was ready to inflict harm on him (the thought of the pepper spray represents this). Also, the thought, "Don't be him" could also be considered a double-edged comment ("Don't be him in the car" or "Don't become him"). In essence, she was presented with a perfect scenario to "finish the job" and probably get away with it and her instinct was to take it--just as Rob theorized. Her reasons (though not discussed) could be because she figured him for a serial killer, because his theory is more than a theory it is a belief. A code by which he lives, to get asleep at night. In the end, Rob is laughing at her because she is living out his theory. 
And I wrote/published at once... sorry

Title article: She Don't Want To
Date: 2008-05-22 09:01:23
country song?
Eew... no, that was not what I was going for at all. I'm glad you could see that was not what I was going for. Not much of a country fan. Mostly hate it, with exceptions of classic stuff.

Title article: Money - Town without Pity
Date: 2008-05-19 10:45:35
Trivia
1. Based on a true story 
 
2. Title, "Town without Pity", comes from a classic Gene Pitney song, "How can we keep love alive? How can anything survive when these little minds tear you in two? What a town without pity can do."

Title article: Money: A life's worth
Date: 2008-05-19 06:06:32
Nice...
That was awesome good. Nicely done.... whew... good story.

Title article: An Agent's Song
Date: 2008-05-06 08:59:32
Thanks
For the comments... I'm working on the fifth installment. It's promises to be a "revealing" installment.

Title article: Put the Lime in the Coconut
Date: 2008-05-05 07:59:08
...
There actually is something cohesive happening in this mess of a story. I'm curious if anyone picks up on it.  
 
And yes, I wrote this to the Muppets singing "Put the Lime in the Coconut."

Title article: The Longest Walk
Date: 2008-05-05 07:55:56
Thanks, Egoist
I really appreciated the comments. I'm a big fan of ending on a thought, idea, concept or question. I find it more stimulating to the brain... and I don't mean that in a "I wonder if Mike Meyer will ever come back to terrorize us again" sort of way. :)

Title article: Jason Richard Wright: Samantha
Date: 2008-04-15 09:24:35
2 previous chapters...
Just fyi.

Title article: Screaming Banshees
Date: 2008-03-24 06:30:05
Hmm...
Yeah, I realize the ending didn't resolve or explain anything. I was thinking of writing some more.

Title article: The Longest Walk
Date: 2008-03-20 17:42:39
Trivia
Loosely based on a true story involving a good friend of ours. The true parts: 
 
1. She was walking to her car, from a theatre and everything described about the environment is real. 
 
2. Man following her and coming up behind her quickly, her thinking to grab her cell phone and fein a conversation with her mom (though her mom is very much living).  
 
3. He did stand and stare at her for a moment, ridiculously close and then walk away. Then she got in her car and left.

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OFFLINE Anna DeVine (Sad Sara)
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OFFLINE Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)
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Michelle Huff (allmine)

hmmm....
Created On: 10/07/2008 14:12:34

The baby is so adorable.....

Morgen Holborn (Captain Morgen)

Created On: 08/06/2008 10:37:04

Oh wow! that is soo awesome congrats to you and your wife!

Yeah, I wrote those stories a long while ago. I'm going to clean them up and maybe post them again. Since I'm learning new skills all the time, my old writing seems terrible to me when I look back on it. I guess thats just the way it works, though

Morgen Holborn (Captain Morgen)

Created On: 08/06/2008 01:28:03

I still saved them in my portfolio they just aren't on the site anymore

Morgen Holborn (Captain Morgen)

Created On: 05/17/2008 11:43:25

Hey! I posted my story...now where is yours?

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