Awakening of Minds (Part One)

So there I was, looking once more at the device on the...

What Kind Of God?

WHAT KIND OF GOD? By Jon Stalk...
Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon) Profile Page
Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)
Hits 4056
Online Status OFFLINE
Member Since 10/22/2007
Last Online 08/27/2008
Connections 13
Avg Profile Rating
 
Website/Blog: www.myspace.com/onyxdragonfilms
About Myself: Well, I'm not a big fan of writing about myself. Nonetheless, here goes... I work full-time at the University of Missouri-Rolla as a Video Production Specialist in relation to Distance Education. When I'm not doing that I'm working with our independent production company (Onyx Dragon Productions, LLC). We've filmed many short films, worked on a few TV shows, filmed one full-length film (which is still in post production) and working on my first full-length, filmed a few weddings, commercials, worked with SIDEKICK Sketch Comedy of The Skinny Improv of Springfield, Missouri and many, many other projects.

When I'm not doing those types of things, I'm usually working with church matters and when I'm not doing that I'm usually relaxing... or writing.

Writing is one of my fondest passions. Though I think I have developed better into a script writer (rather than a short story or novel writer), short stories is where I started and I still enjoy them so.

Keep up the good works, peeps.

UPDATES-- (8-12-08)
1. Just uploaded chapter 2 of "The Rolling Stone & Wicked Annabelle." Still have the itch, probably going to finish chapter 3 soon. Chapter 3 will introduce Teen Wolf... stay tuned. (that sounds soo absurd)

2. I am currently working on Chapter 2 of "The Fall of Babylon." Almost got it wrapped up, the chapter not the story.

3. Working on a prequel of "Exit to Nowhere" entitled "Entrance to Somewhere."

4. Obsessing over "Obsession."

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Apr 17, 2008The Night Jaymie was ExorcisedHumor 168
Mar 6, 2008Two Hosts and a Model: Sara's Diary [new entries 3/17]Humor 255
Feb 21, 2008The Barefoot and the BigfootHumor 320
Feb 13, 2008Nathan Weaver and the Time he RolledHumor 270
Feb 11, 2008Rejection for DummiesHumor 375
Feb 11, 2008Nathan Weaver and the First ImpressionHumor 349
Nov 8, 2007A True Story About a very Young and Naive Nathan WeaverHumor 625
Feb 11, 2008Midnight Train to Georgia [1/2]Romance 310
Jun 23, 2008The WesternerAdventure 93
Aug 11, 2008The Rolling Stone & Wicked Annabelle, Chapter 2Mystery 83
Aug 6, 2008Obsession, Chapter 1Mystery 100
Jun 23, 2008An Agent's ThangMystery 110
Jun 18, 2008The Fall of Babylon, Chapter 1Mystery 130
Jun 16, 2008DeliveranceMystery 103
Jun 12, 2008Will Work for Story, Chapter 1Mystery 99
May 22, 2008The Rolling Stone & Wicked Annabelle, Chapter 1Mystery 201
May 19, 2008Money - Town without PityMystery 200
Apr 16, 2008An Agent's SongMystery 178
Mar 19, 2008An Agent's ValentineMystery 249
Mar 19, 2008Agency LessonsMystery 223
<< Start < Prev [1] 2 3 Next > End >>

Comments

Total number of comments: 104

Title article: Parapraxis
Date: 2008-08-26 16:36:28
Re: Dirkin
Regarding the passage, I wrote it that way because I didn't want to reveal her intentions through the subject. I realize it is kind of like "huh"? I may have to reconsider it though, it seems most people didn't seem to understand or appreciate the passage the way it was. 
 
I believe her actions were based upon adrenaline, instinct and the theory Rob discussed with her. That since she was presented with an opportunity to "be done with him" and probably get away with it, she was going to take it. This would be the basic human instinct that Rob eluded to. This was kind of the idea of the story... I'm not saying it's my best. 
 
One of these days I'll actually write the true story, in its complete form. It's actually better than this version, based loosely on the real event. Once I find time, I'll have to go through an interview with the person and put it together. Any rate... 
 
It is interesting to me how this story seems to hit and miss so easily.

Title article: The Rolling Stone & Wicked Annabelle, Chapter 2
Date: 2008-08-12 08:26:41
Trivia
1. Had a list of possible character names, one was Lucy in the Skye. Figured, naturally, that I would use it for a female character. When I began to write this chapter, I realized I didn't have a name for the neighbor and looked to my list--the only name remaining was Lucy in the Skye. I liked it, and used it. 
 
2. The Rolling Stone is the first character I've ever written that smokes cigarettes. I found this tidbit odd. Never realized I had not included smokers in my stories until I decided he was going to get some cigarettes from Lucy... found myself thinking, "Hey, wait... this is a first." It took over 10 years of writing for me to write in a cigarette. Strange.

Title article: Project 30, Chapter 2
Date: 2008-08-11 15:09:06
Excellent execution
Jason has written an excellent story here. It is a formidable addition to the project, I must say. I've never read anything so exquisite on this site. 
 
Best story ever... I mean, this is like the "Citizen Kane" of short stories. 
 
Hmph... slacker. :) 
 
And what's this nonsense of cats? Sounds puuuurty weird. LAME. Had to get my lame pun in, too.

Title article: Project 30, Chapter 3
Date: 2008-08-11 07:48:02
Guilty?
Well, I haven't finished reading the rest of the chapters... I think I stopped at 5 or 6 before the weekend hit. I hope I'm not guilty... yikes! 
 
Yeah, I took some liberties that I weren't sure would play out, like talking about someone noticing me not drinking the wine and obviously telling Davidson. I was afraid it might cause conflicts, but I took the chance. I figured Max and Huff would scold me if I messed up the masterpiece. :)

Title article: Project 30, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-08-08 13:34:18
Scandalous
This was a dirty chapter. Tisk, tisk. Good writing, though. 
 
We are off to a great start to this story, me thinks.

Title article: Project 30, Chapter 4
Date: 2008-08-08 13:32:33
Oh, my...
You wrote in script form? Lucky, I think I'm better writing in script form. I liked. Good job. Had to drag Stephen King into, too, I see. Oh, my... ironic.

Title article: You, as I see It, Chapter 3
Date: 2008-08-08 08:33:38
Trivia
1. The homeless man incident actually happened to me the other day. There was something very surreal about it. I did think he was flipping me off at first, but he wasn't. It was quite creepy. Though, I didn't call him a "dumb hobo", that's just mean. He obviously wasn't all there. 
 
2. The older brother incident is a reference to Alfred Hitchcock's "Spellbound." 
 
3. I washed dishes as a delivery driver at Pizza Hut for 2 years, and it pretty much makes you feel this way sometimes. To get the number 3,018 I multiplied 365 days by 10 years, then subtracted 100 days and then 532 days. So, Link has been washing dishes anywhere between 8 to 10 years.

Title article: You as I see It, Chapter 2
Date: 2008-08-08 08:23:38
Map
No map, yet. I would say it's more of an essay, than story at this point. The idea is that the character is expressing himself and in the end, perhaps a story will have been told. I kind of make it up as I go and am constantly looking for ways to confuse the method. More than anything it started as an homage or tip of the hat to Chuck Palahniuk (author of "Fight Club"). 
 
Perhaps we could call it Link's Madlibs. Eventually, there will be some "revelation" to it all, but I'm not sure yet what that is. I'm trying not to think too much about it, so it remains fresh and distorted.

Title article: Hopelessness
Date: 2008-08-07 09:48:54

Again, really liked your poem. It was very true in a lot of ways, the feeling I thought was described very well. 
 
I really liked the flow of the poem as well, it slipped through my lips as oxygen... effortlessly. Thanks for the poem, well done.

Title article: Mortality
Date: 2008-08-07 09:45:38
Nice
Well, well written and very touching and reminiscent. Not that I've lost a lot of friends in my day or have had the pleasure of knowing when I was going to lose one up front. It's a hard thing to say goodbye, whether upfront or after the fact. 
 
I really, really appreciated the sentiments of this poem. Excellent.

<< Start < Prev [1] 2 3 4 5 6 ... 11 Next > End >>

Forum


Last 10 Forum Posts
DateSubjectCategoryHits
08/26/2008 16:58:51Re:How Do You?Off-Topic1325
08/20/2008 13:16:28Re:pinky and the brainOff-Topic400
08/13/2008 09:18:49Re:Funny LyricsOff-Topic261
08/13/2008 09:08:39Re:Funny LyricsOff-Topic261
08/11/2008 15:29:33Re:whats on your mp3 player RIGHT NOW?Off-Topic1566
08/11/2008 08:17:50Re:whats on your mp3 player RIGHT NOW?Off-Topic1566
06/25/2008 18:58:13Re:Storiesville = hours squandered away onlineOff-Topic292
06/25/2008 18:41:04Re:MusicOff-Topic3512
06/23/2008 07:13:07Re:Favourite Films/StarsOff-Topic5093
06/18/2008 13:01:02Re:Quick questionOff-Topic199

Connection

Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)'s connections

OFFLINE Project 30 (Project 30)
ONLINE Philip Neale (philneale1952)
ONLINE Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)
OFFLINE Billy (Vango)
OFFLINE Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)
OFFLINE Christian Wright (The 13th)
OFFLINE Robert Quintin Penn (1800)
OFFLINE David Neve (Tarhead Mugwump)
OFFLINE Morgen Holborn (Captain Morgen)
OFFLINE Mugen (Dirkin)
 
<< Start < Prev [1] 2 Next > End >>

Guestbook


Name Entry
Morgen Holborn (Captain Morgen)

 Created On: 08/06/2008 10:37:04
Oh wow! that is soo awesome congrats to you and your wife!

Yeah, I wrote those stories a long while ago. I'm going to clean them up and maybe post them again. Since I'm learning new skills all the time, my old writing seems terrible to me when I look back on it. I guess thats just the way it works, though

Morgen Holborn (Captain Morgen)

 Created On: 08/06/2008 01:28:03
I still saved them in my portfolio they just aren't on the site anymore
Morgen Holborn (Captain Morgen)

 Created On: 05/17/2008 11:43:25
Hey! I posted my story...now where is yours?

Pictures

Picture/Images uploaded by the member

Sup.
Bebe Danie...



Babylon



The Wife a...



Two Hosts ...



Kings 2



 
<< Start < Prev [1] 2 Next > End >>
 

Remove Ads