An unexpected gift, Chapter 1

(Author's note: It's the first chapter to an attempt...

Broken Glass

The first thing Pamela noticed when she opened her...
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Morgen Holborn (Captain Morgen)
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Member Since 10/19/2007
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About Myself: I'm just a normal girl (or so I like to think so) who likes to write. Plan to be a writer...don't plan to make money doing it but I'm not gonna lie, that would be nice. Currently a University drop out...the life just wasn't for me. Going into an online creative writing course, hopefully that works out better.

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Nov 4, 2008The Meeting of Two MenMiscellaneous Stories 190
Sep 27, 2008Pretty ChinaPoetry 142
Sep 3, 2008For as you judge, you will be judgedMiscellaneous Stories 251
Jul 21, 2008Logical thinking and the stupidity of emotionPoetry 350

Comments

Title article: Hard Man
Date: 2008-02-05 17:52:49

McDonald's thighs...havn't heard that one. Good comparison.

Title article: The Burden
Date: 2008-02-05 15:59:18

Faces used as masks to hide our true feelings and desires. Definitely a thought provoker. Well done.

Title article: Life-Altering Night
Date: 2008-02-01 20:27:41

I didn't know tornados could go up mountains :0...interesting story and I like how he hid in the bathtub. good job

Title article: The Creep
Date: 2008-02-01 20:11:00

hmm...i identify with the loner part since I'm kind of a loner myself but the stalker part is certainly not me...I don't think :P hehe 
 
Good poem, its a wonderful portrayal of the stalking/misunderstood type

Title article: A True Story About a very Young and Naive Nathan Weaver
Date: 2008-01-29 16:09:01

haha...brings back memories of my own childhood. Except, I can say I was on the receiving end of a few underwear encounters...Amusing story, I like your writing style

Title article: Rose's Thorn: Rise and Fall of a Hero [complete]
Date: 2008-01-29 15:39:05

Good story...it feels like a battle between god and satan represented by the characters fighting and the inner conflicts among each. Some parts were a little confusing, but then again its not finished so i assumed they were meant as foreshadowing. Reminds me of a memoir I'm reading right now The Glass Castle by Jeanette Walls. I highly recommend it.

Title article: Red Hair
Date: 2008-01-21 18:26:47
good job
i absolutely LOVE this story. So passionate, so realistic. A 5 star in my mind.

Title article: The Hunt
Date: 2008-01-18 20:04:07
Good
The concept of the story is good, and I like the storyline...however the !!! and ??? don't really add good effect. Maybe try replacing them with descriptive words. Hope that helps

Title article: Buffy The Vampire Slayer: Diaries; Issue 1; Dark Willow
Date: 2008-01-11 16:26:25

I've watched one buffy episode in the entirety of my life...so i really can't be much use comment wise...good writing though :P

Title article: Singles Only
Date: 2008-01-11 13:04:23

i've never read a story about a speed dating service. really interesting, I'd like to see a sequel. And being a loner myself I feel i could identify with the character

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12/23/2007 02:13:25Re:what's your favorite book?Off-Topic16636

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Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)

 Created On: 11/04/2008 14:47:14
Yep, that's the little man--Aidyn Drake Weaver. He's just a little over 2 months now. Crazy, crazy. Weird stuff. I see you have a new story... gotta get busy.

Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)

 Created On: 08/06/2008 07:40:32
Yeah, I figured you saved them, but when they're not here what good does that do me? I'm just whining. I appreciate your feeling to make a fresh start. I feel like deleting a punch of my stories sometimes, too. And only saving the ones I really, really think are solid. I experiment a lot and sometimes I write mediocre stuff that way. I should just be sticking to mystery, disturbing and crime type stuff. That seems to be my forte. I'm just trying to verify that, I guess. We're all learning.

Speaking of learning, I'll be a father very, very soon. My wife is due in two weeks, but we might have it early... depends on what the doctor. We have a son coming, name of Aidyn Drake Weaver. It's pretty hectic and exciting around the Weaver household these days.

Well, hurry up and get back to publishing, then. I need my Captain Morgen fix.
Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)

 Created On: 08/05/2008 09:15:47
You deleted all your stories?!?!?!!? BWAH!
Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)

 Created On: 06/10/2008 11:07:56
When do we get the rest of the "Treasure in the Backyard"? The suspense is killing me. Laters.
Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)

 Created On: 05/19/2008 07:22:21
Yeah, I let it slip my mind last week. It was a nutsy week, interviewed for a new job and such. Plus, Dirk was waiting on my signal and I was waiting on your completion. Silly me. We've posted now. Mine is "Money - Town without Pity" and Dirk's entry is "A Life's Worth." Exciting... now I just gotta read.

Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)

 Created On: 02/18/2008 08:47:56
I finished "Rose's Thorn", you should finish reading it. I'd love to hear the feedback. I looked at "The Glass Castle" on Amazon. They had a video with the author and her mom in it. The mom was showing off some of her paintings. I was also able to read the first chapter there... now I want to read it. It's really interesting and yes, even that one chapter and its narrative reminded me of Rose. It was odd and in a way nice. Makes me feel better about what I've written. ANYWAY... laters.
Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)

 Created On: 02/14/2008 20:26:38
"Please, sir... may I have some more?"
Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)

 Created On: 02/05/2008 16:11:13
Please keep up the writing. I enjoy checking out your stories, though the stripper one caught me off guard... YIKES.

Seriously, though, keep up the good work. You're very talented and I hope you do make a career of it.
Feedback from Morgen Holborn (Captain Morgen): Wow, thank you! I hope I am able to make it my career, just as long as things go as planned

Mugen (Dirkin)

 Created On: 01/08/2008 06:26:19
Hello! I like your stories =)
Feedback from Morgen Holborn (Captain Morgen): Oh thanks I appreciate it

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