Awakening of Minds (Part One)

So there I was, looking once more at the device on the...

Darkening, Chapter 1

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About Myself: I'm just a normal girl (or so I like to think so) who likes to write. Graduated this year. Going to university to take my Bachelor of Arts in English in the fall. Plan to be a writer...don't plan to make money doing it but I'm not gonna lie, that would be nice.


I've deleted all of my stories. I need a fresh start. Thanx guys

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Jul 21, 2008Logical thinking and the stupidity of emotionPoetry 221

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Title article: Jason Richard Wright: Cassie
Date: 2008-02-07 17:52:36

wow. that is kind of twisted and disturbing, but cool. I like.

Title article: Jason Richard Wright: Morgan
Date: 2008-02-07 17:45:37

aww sad. I feel bad for the poor guy! the girl reminds me of me; probably cus i have the same name (dif. spelling) Good story :)

Title article: Avoid Transgression
Date: 2008-02-07 17:31:31

"Time to bake up"...is that in reference to getting stoned? Just wondering :P Good poem

Title article: A Little About Myself
Date: 2008-02-06 17:42:43

I really liked reading this. It gave me a whole new perspective on you as a person.  
In addition, I have a cousin who was diagnosed with Asperger's Syndrome. So I have a small understanding of it.  
Good writing

Title article: Im Not Liking Love
Date: 2008-02-05 18:16:24

Firstly I'd like to say that women do not have "inefficent ideas" such as relationships. Yes we are sometimes (ok, most of the time) overly emotional, but that is what makes us women and that is a perfectly normal thing. and I hate to break this to you but it is not the mans "instinct" to look for the most capable of bearing young. *cough* homosexual men *cough*. Thank you. But yes, I agree with you that it usually ends in a struggle with someone having to compromise. 
 
This piece is definitely a good starting to an emotional meltdown...however I think it would have served better as a journal entry.  
 
There are some wrought emotions there that I think most women (and some men) have felt. That tinge of jealousy, the feelings of being rejected, or not being good enough. Some further detail and explaination of the event that brought on the emotion would be fitting.

Title article: Hard Man
Date: 2008-02-05 17:52:49

McDonald's thighs...havn't heard that one. Good comparison.

Title article: The Burden
Date: 2008-02-05 15:59:18

Faces used as masks to hide our true feelings and desires. Definitely a thought provoker. Well done.

Title article: Life-Altering Night
Date: 2008-02-01 20:27:41

I didn't know tornados could go up mountains :0...interesting story and I like how he hid in the bathtub. good job

Title article: The Creep
Date: 2008-02-01 20:11:00

hmm...i identify with the loner part since I'm kind of a loner myself but the stalker part is certainly not me...I don't think :P hehe 
 
Good poem, its a wonderful portrayal of the stalking/misunderstood type

Title article: A True Story About a very Young and Naive Nathan Weaver
Date: 2008-01-29 16:09:01

haha...brings back memories of my own childhood. Except, I can say I was on the receiving end of a few underwear encounters...Amusing story, I like your writing style

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Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)

 Created On: 08/06/2008 05:40:32
Yeah, I figured you saved them, but when they're not here what good does that do me? I'm just whining. I appreciate your feeling to make a fresh start. I feel like deleting a punch of my stories sometimes, too. And only saving the ones I really, really think are solid. I experiment a lot and sometimes I write mediocre stuff that way. I should just be sticking to mystery, disturbing and crime type stuff. That seems to be my forte. I'm just trying to verify that, I guess. We're all learning.

Speaking of learning, I'll be a father very, very soon. My wife is due in two weeks, but we might have it early... depends on what the doctor. We have a son coming, name of Aidyn Drake Weaver. It's pretty hectic and exciting around the Weaver household these days.

Well, hurry up and get back to publishing, then. I need my Captain Morgen fix.
Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)

 Created On: 08/05/2008 07:15:47
You deleted all your stories?!?!?!!? BWAH!
Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)

 Created On: 06/10/2008 09:07:56
When do we get the rest of the "Treasure in the Backyard"? The suspense is killing me. Laters.
Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)

 Created On: 05/19/2008 05:22:21
Yeah, I let it slip my mind last week. It was a nutsy week, interviewed for a new job and such. Plus, Dirk was waiting on my signal and I was waiting on your completion. Silly me. We've posted now. Mine is "Money - Town without Pity" and Dirk's entry is "A Life's Worth." Exciting... now I just gotta read.

Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)

 Created On: 02/18/2008 06:47:56
I finished "Rose's Thorn", you should finish reading it. I'd love to hear the feedback. I looked at "The Glass Castle" on Amazon. They had a video with the author and her mom in it. The mom was showing off some of her paintings. I was also able to read the first chapter there... now I want to read it. It's really interesting and yes, even that one chapter and its narrative reminded me of Rose. It was odd and in a way nice. Makes me feel better about what I've written. ANYWAY... laters.
Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)

 Created On: 02/14/2008 18:26:38
"Please, sir... may I have some more?"
Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)

 Created On: 02/05/2008 14:11:13
Please keep up the writing. I enjoy checking out your stories, though the stripper one caught me off guard... YIKES.

Seriously, though, keep up the good work. You're very talented and I hope you do make a career of it.
Feedback from Morgen Holborn (Captain Morgen): Wow, thank you! I hope I am able to make it my career, just as long as things go as planned

Mugen (Dirkin)

 Created On: 01/08/2008 04:26:19
Hello! I like your stories =)
Feedback from Morgen Holborn (Captain Morgen): Oh thanks I appreciate it

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