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Morgen Holborn (Captain Morgen)
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Member Since 10/19/2007
Last Online 10/06/2008
Connections 12
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About Myself: I'm just a normal girl (or so I like to think so) who likes to write. Plan to be a writer...don't plan to make money doing it but I'm not gonna lie, that would be nice. Currently a University drop out...the life just wasn't for me. Going into an online creative writing course, hopefully that works out better.



Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Sep 27, 2008Pretty ChinaPoetry 68
Sep 3, 2008For as you judge, you will be judgedMiscellaneous Stories 172
Jul 21, 2008Logical thinking and the stupidity of emotionPoetry 275

Comments

Title article: Spirited Psychosis
Date: 2008-04-04 18:11:07

sweet. I love rhyming poems :)

Title article: just a letter
Date: 2008-04-04 18:05:44

umm...

Title article: Drops Of Rain.
Date: 2008-04-03 19:38:48
Well written
feels to me like it should be part of a novel because of the extensive description of little details. Is it simply an excerp from a bigger piece? I love this line "It's the single ones that would leave you sprawled out on their lawn and turn the soap opera volume up." hehe. so true :P  
I like.

Title article: Don't Cheat on a Southern Girl!
Date: 2008-03-31 15:19:48

funny little tale and a good rhythm. I like it a lot

Title article: My Diseased Childhood
Date: 2008-03-23 17:47:21
Well done
Wow. I've never heard of anything like that...really shed some light on an issue that most people don't hear about. It was sick, but sincere. Just a few minor spelling errors and I think "cool" was used a little too much, but overall, very well written. Thanks for that.

Title article: Alcohol
Date: 2008-03-23 17:36:38

*sorry got a little spelling error in there...eek. It should be "there are some extra words in there that if removed" ...and so on. :)

Title article: Alcohol
Date: 2008-03-23 17:34:56

I think you have some really great ideas in there...spoken truly and honestly...but I agree with cooking wine, there are some extra words in there at if removed, could help the overall sound and experience of reading it.

Title article: Light Bringer
Date: 2008-03-17 16:37:44

Wow. best story I've read in a long time...I love the illusions to the bible...an interesting concept to name Lucifer as Light Bringer.

Title article: Return to Sender
Date: 2008-03-14 14:16:07
Good story
i signed up to be an organ donor...

Title article: Winter of my discontent
Date: 2008-03-07 18:55:01

well written...reminds me of my SAD (seasonal affective disorder)

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08/06/2008 12:41:33Vince Weiguang Li,Off-Topic62
01/05/2008 01:51:04Re:back to schoolOff-Topic3566
01/02/2008 01:56:27Re:back to schoolOff-Topic3566
12/23/2007 03:13:25Re:what's your favorite book?Off-Topic14898

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Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)

Created On: 08/06/2008 05:40:32

Yeah, I figured you saved them, but when they're not here what good does that do me? I'm just whining. I appreciate your feeling to make a fresh start. I feel like deleting a punch of my stories sometimes, too. And only saving the ones I really, really think are solid. I experiment a lot and sometimes I write mediocre stuff that way. I should just be sticking to mystery, disturbing and crime type stuff. That seems to be my forte. I'm just trying to verify that, I guess. We're all learning.

Speaking of learning, I'll be a father very, very soon. My wife is due in two weeks, but we might have it early... depends on what the doctor. We have a son coming, name of Aidyn Drake Weaver. It's pretty hectic and exciting around the Weaver household these days.

Well, hurry up and get back to publishing, then. I need my Captain Morgen fix.

Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)

Created On: 08/05/2008 07:15:47

You deleted all your stories?!?!?!!? BWAH!

Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)

Created On: 06/10/2008 09:07:56

When do we get the rest of the "Treasure in the Backyard"? The suspense is killing me. Laters.

Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)

Created On: 05/19/2008 05:22:21

Yeah, I let it slip my mind last week. It was a nutsy week, interviewed for a new job and such. Plus, Dirk was waiting on my signal and I was waiting on your completion. Silly me. We've posted now. Mine is "Money - Town without Pity" and Dirk's entry is "A Life's Worth." Exciting... now I just gotta read.

Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)

Created On: 02/18/2008 06:47:56

I finished "Rose's Thorn", you should finish reading it. I'd love to hear the feedback. I looked at "The Glass Castle" on Amazon. They had a video with the author and her mom in it. The mom was showing off some of her paintings. I was also able to read the first chapter there... now I want to read it. It's really interesting and yes, even that one chapter and its narrative reminded me of Rose. It was odd and in a way nice. Makes me feel better about what I've written. ANYWAY... laters.

Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)

Created On: 02/14/2008 18:26:38

"Please, sir... may I have some more?"

Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)

Created On: 02/05/2008 14:11:13

Please keep up the writing. I enjoy checking out your stories, though the stripper one caught me off guard... YIKES.

Seriously, though, keep up the good work. You're very talented and I hope you do make a career of it.
Feedback from Morgen Holborn (Captain Morgen): Wow, thank you! I hope I am able to make it my career, just as long as things go as planned

Mugen (Dirkin)

Created On: 01/08/2008 04:26:19

Hello! I like your stories =)
Feedback from Morgen Holborn (Captain Morgen): Oh thanks I appreciate it

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