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Morgen Holborn (Captain Morgen)
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Member Since 10/19/2007
Last Online 01/06/2009
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About Myself: I'm just a normal girl (or so I like to think so) who likes to write. Plan to be a writer...don't plan to make money doing it but I'm not gonna lie, that would be nice. Currently a University drop out...the life just wasn't for me. Going into an online creative writing course, hopefully that works out better.



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Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Nov 4, 2008The Meeting of Two MenMiscellaneous Stories 190
Sep 27, 2008Pretty ChinaPoetry 142
Sep 3, 2008For as you judge, you will be judgedMiscellaneous Stories 251
Jul 21, 2008Logical thinking and the stupidity of emotionPoetry 350

Comments

Total number of comments: 133

Title article: The Meeting of Two Men
Date: 2008-11-05 18:05:00

Nope! Sorry, you're right!

Title article: The Meeting of Two Men
Date: 2008-11-05 17:50:34

they are supposed to be on the outside! :P

Title article: The Meeting of Two Men
Date: 2008-11-04 20:34:49

I'll leave it as a mystery...Alex and Aby may be the same person, perhaps not.

Title article: Child of Balaam, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-11-04 11:20:27

Oh, I like this one! My favourite of your stuff so far....is your picture of your new child? Just wondered. :)

Title article: BUTTERFLY KISSES
Date: 2008-11-04 10:01:41

to be honest, when I read the title I thought this piece of work was going to be just a big hunk of sh*t....you proved me wrong. It's well written. I like the emotion shown.

Title article: The Wine Wins Again
Date: 2008-11-04 09:52:48

Nicely done. It's cute, short, to the point. Not overdone, not underdone. You cooked this baby just right! haha 
It seems to imply that this person is on the path to becoming a wine-o...she is still in the stage of "feeling" in control of her problem because she likes its effects and control over her. Once she no longer likes being controlled by it, well then she'll be a full-fledged abuser...anyways. I should stop.. well done

Title article: Bad Religion
Date: 2008-09-04 05:39:30

These types of churches have become known as "dead" churches, and precisely for this reason. Well done!

Title article: Approaching Storm
Date: 2008-09-03 12:06:37

Holy! haha. Good job, I like the originality with this poem. Is it your first of this type?  
It is nice to see something different on here every so often. 
Well done

Title article: Lover -- A Haiku
Date: 2008-07-26 19:38:15

they are really short poems. Traditionally a japanese poem. I got this definition from answers.com: "A Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons".

Title article: The Appointment: a micro-fiction
Date: 2008-07-24 13:24:01

I love micro fiction...its difficult to write correctly since every single word counts! I can see that that is guy not her boyfriend, but not a stalker. This is made obvious by his observation of the conversations going on around him. You have done an excellent job with character, I can see in my mind what (I think) this guy looks like, and its not the blue eyes, brown hair type of description. Well done. Short and sweet.

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12/23/2007 02:13:25Re:what's your favorite book?Off-Topic16636

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Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)

Created On: 11/04/2008 14:47:14

Yep, that's the little man--Aidyn Drake Weaver. He's just a little over 2 months now. Crazy, crazy. Weird stuff. I see you have a new story... gotta get busy.

Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)

Created On: 08/06/2008 07:40:32

Yeah, I figured you saved them, but when they're not here what good does that do me? I'm just whining. I appreciate your feeling to make a fresh start. I feel like deleting a punch of my stories sometimes, too. And only saving the ones I really, really think are solid. I experiment a lot and sometimes I write mediocre stuff that way. I should just be sticking to mystery, disturbing and crime type stuff. That seems to be my forte. I'm just trying to verify that, I guess. We're all learning.

Speaking of learning, I'll be a father very, very soon. My wife is due in two weeks, but we might have it early... depends on what the doctor. We have a son coming, name of Aidyn Drake Weaver. It's pretty hectic and exciting around the Weaver household these days.

Well, hurry up and get back to publishing, then. I need my Captain Morgen fix.

Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)

Created On: 08/05/2008 09:15:47

You deleted all your stories?!?!?!!? BWAH!

Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)

Created On: 06/10/2008 11:07:56

When do we get the rest of the "Treasure in the Backyard"? The suspense is killing me. Laters.

Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)

Created On: 05/19/2008 07:22:21

Yeah, I let it slip my mind last week. It was a nutsy week, interviewed for a new job and such. Plus, Dirk was waiting on my signal and I was waiting on your completion. Silly me. We've posted now. Mine is "Money - Town without Pity" and Dirk's entry is "A Life's Worth." Exciting... now I just gotta read.

Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)

Created On: 02/18/2008 08:47:56

I finished "Rose's Thorn", you should finish reading it. I'd love to hear the feedback. I looked at "The Glass Castle" on Amazon. They had a video with the author and her mom in it. The mom was showing off some of her paintings. I was also able to read the first chapter there... now I want to read it. It's really interesting and yes, even that one chapter and its narrative reminded me of Rose. It was odd and in a way nice. Makes me feel better about what I've written. ANYWAY... laters.

Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)

Created On: 02/14/2008 20:26:38

"Please, sir... may I have some more?"

Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)

Created On: 02/05/2008 16:11:13

Please keep up the writing. I enjoy checking out your stories, though the stripper one caught me off guard... YIKES.

Seriously, though, keep up the good work. You're very talented and I hope you do make a career of it.
Feedback from Morgen Holborn (Captain Morgen): Wow, thank you! I hope I am able to make it my career, just as long as things go as planned

Mugen (Dirkin)

Created On: 01/08/2008 06:26:19

Hello! I like your stories =)
Feedback from Morgen Holborn (Captain Morgen): Oh thanks I appreciate it

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