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Morgen Holborn (Captain Morgen)
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Member Since 10/19/2007
Last Online 10/06/2008
Connections 12
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About Myself: I'm just a normal girl (or so I like to think so) who likes to write. Plan to be a writer...don't plan to make money doing it but I'm not gonna lie, that would be nice. Currently a University drop out...the life just wasn't for me. Going into an online creative writing course, hopefully that works out better.



Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Sep 27, 2008Pretty ChinaPoetry 68
Sep 3, 2008For as you judge, you will be judgedMiscellaneous Stories 172
Jul 21, 2008Logical thinking and the stupidity of emotionPoetry 275

Comments

Title article: Fag Ramblings
Date: 2008-07-21 10:44:49

I like the social phobia part :p Good little writing exercise.

Title article: The Exorcism of Oprah Winfrey
Date: 2008-07-21 10:37:28

hahaha. that was a good read, and very original! Good description

Title article: Stalker Shopping
Date: 2008-07-19 14:28:03
hahahhaha....haha
Oh my god, that was hilarious. One of the funniest stories I've ever read. Though i agree there should be more mention of the stalked girl, or omit her entirely.

Title article: Growth
Date: 2008-07-19 14:08:46

Good job man. I thoroughly enjoyed this story, even with all the gore (which isn't usually my style). Nice

Title article: Money: A life's worth
Date: 2008-05-19 12:32:07

That was an amazing story. It really hit home for me in a lot of ways actually... 
 
well done

Title article: Money - Town without Pity
Date: 2008-05-19 11:30:27
good story
hahaha, i like this part: "Miserable small town cronies. A stranger passes through and suddenly it’s the end of the world" 
 
Good job; we've got to do another group of these themed stories :)

Title article: Bad Habits
Date: 2008-04-25 21:06:01
thumbs up
a little repetitive but overall pretty good

Title article: The Boy Behind the Mirror Chapter 1
Date: 2008-04-04 18:36:18
sweet
"Her teeth were white as usual. But, her mouth didn't stink. That was pretty unusual." hahahaha. sorry. that made me laugh out loud. I'll shut up now.

Title article: Back There
Date: 2008-04-04 18:31:19

Its well written and the idea is definitely original. Though it doesn't seem like it has actually ended. Just a little more clarification is need in the last line. Just a suggestion though.

Title article: Letters from a Love: The Past
Date: 2008-04-04 18:26:26

First, I'd suggest not mention the first six pages in the title...you are going to scare ppl away :P 
 
But it is an excellent story. Very original...and I like the part about them waiting for marriage to be together, that is so cute!

Forum


Last 10 Forum Posts
DateSubjectCategoryHits
08/06/2008 12:41:33Vince Weiguang Li,Off-Topic62
01/05/2008 01:51:04Re:back to schoolOff-Topic3566
01/02/2008 01:56:27Re:back to schoolOff-Topic3566
12/23/2007 03:13:25Re:what's your favorite book?Off-Topic14898

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OFFLINE Robert Quintin Penn (1800)
OFFLINE Brian Miller (sloth45891)
OFFLINE Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)
OFFLINE Mugen (Dirkin)
OFFLINE cody brinkman (fresh ta deff) (Cody Brinkman)
OFFLINE David Neve (Tarhead Mugwump)
OFFLINE J.L. (the Processor)
 
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Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)

Created On: 08/06/2008 05:40:32

Yeah, I figured you saved them, but when they're not here what good does that do me? I'm just whining. I appreciate your feeling to make a fresh start. I feel like deleting a punch of my stories sometimes, too. And only saving the ones I really, really think are solid. I experiment a lot and sometimes I write mediocre stuff that way. I should just be sticking to mystery, disturbing and crime type stuff. That seems to be my forte. I'm just trying to verify that, I guess. We're all learning.

Speaking of learning, I'll be a father very, very soon. My wife is due in two weeks, but we might have it early... depends on what the doctor. We have a son coming, name of Aidyn Drake Weaver. It's pretty hectic and exciting around the Weaver household these days.

Well, hurry up and get back to publishing, then. I need my Captain Morgen fix.

Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)

Created On: 08/05/2008 07:15:47

You deleted all your stories?!?!?!!? BWAH!

Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)

Created On: 06/10/2008 09:07:56

When do we get the rest of the "Treasure in the Backyard"? The suspense is killing me. Laters.

Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)

Created On: 05/19/2008 05:22:21

Yeah, I let it slip my mind last week. It was a nutsy week, interviewed for a new job and such. Plus, Dirk was waiting on my signal and I was waiting on your completion. Silly me. We've posted now. Mine is "Money - Town without Pity" and Dirk's entry is "A Life's Worth." Exciting... now I just gotta read.

Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)

Created On: 02/18/2008 06:47:56

I finished "Rose's Thorn", you should finish reading it. I'd love to hear the feedback. I looked at "The Glass Castle" on Amazon. They had a video with the author and her mom in it. The mom was showing off some of her paintings. I was also able to read the first chapter there... now I want to read it. It's really interesting and yes, even that one chapter and its narrative reminded me of Rose. It was odd and in a way nice. Makes me feel better about what I've written. ANYWAY... laters.

Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)

Created On: 02/14/2008 18:26:38

"Please, sir... may I have some more?"

Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)

Created On: 02/05/2008 14:11:13

Please keep up the writing. I enjoy checking out your stories, though the stripper one caught me off guard... YIKES.

Seriously, though, keep up the good work. You're very talented and I hope you do make a career of it.
Feedback from Morgen Holborn (Captain Morgen): Wow, thank you! I hope I am able to make it my career, just as long as things go as planned

Mugen (Dirkin)

Created On: 01/08/2008 04:26:19

Hello! I like your stories =)
Feedback from Morgen Holborn (Captain Morgen): Oh thanks I appreciate it

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