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Morgen Holborn (Captain Morgen)
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Member Since 10/19/2007
Last Online 09/05/2008
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About Myself: I'm just a normal girl (or so I like to think so) who likes to write. Currently in university to take my Bachelor of Arts in English. Plan to be a writer...don't plan to make money doing it but I'm not gonna lie, that would be nice.


I've deleted all of my stories. I need a fresh start. Thanx guys

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Sep 3, 2008For as you judge, you will be judgedMiscellaneous Stories 102
Jul 21, 2008Logical thinking and the stupidity of emotionPoetry 235

Comments

Total number of comments: 127

Title article: Bad Religion
Date: 2008-09-04 05:39:30

These types of churches have become known as "dead" churches, and precisely for this reason. Well done!

Title article: Approaching Storm
Date: 2008-09-03 12:06:37

Holy! haha. Good job, I like the originality with this poem. Is it your first of this type?  
It is nice to see something different on here every so often. 
Well done

Title article: Pretty Fly for a Russian Guy
Date: 2008-09-03 12:02:38

Very good story...absolutely disgusting and funny at the same time. I met a Russian guy just last night. He didn't get his ass ripped open, but he was full of himself just like this guy! hahahaha. The youtube parasite, hilarious!

Title article: Lover -- A Haiku
Date: 2008-07-26 19:38:15

they are really short poems. Traditionally a japanese poem. I got this definition from answers.com: "A Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons".

Title article: The Appointment: a micro-fiction
Date: 2008-07-24 13:24:01

I love micro fiction...its difficult to write correctly since every single word counts! I can see that that is guy not her boyfriend, but not a stalker. This is made obvious by his observation of the conversations going on around him. You have done an excellent job with character, I can see in my mind what (I think) this guy looks like, and its not the blue eyes, brown hair type of description. Well done. Short and sweet.

Title article: WHY must I write
Date: 2008-07-24 09:59:51

Well said. I agree with what you are getting across here. Simple, but simplicity can be the most beautiful. I like the gap in the middle there, it leaves a nice pause in the poem. 
however, the "it comes for my heart" is a cliché, and should be avoided.

Title article: Logical thinking and the stupidity of emotion
Date: 2008-07-24 09:52:42

Thanks for pointing that out! haha, I made a spelling error in the process of transferring it :P

Title article: Flowers on the Wall
Date: 2008-07-22 21:09:40

Basically anything that tastefully uses biblical imagery, I love. I read the bible a lot for inspiration, and I get this feeling that you know a little about the bible? Good job. I don't see the flowers on the wall as evil, necessarily. This reminds me of the relationship between the vine and the branch discussed in the bible. The branches cannot survive without help from the vine. The branches represent the flesh of people whereas the vine represents God. I don't know if this is what you meant by this poem, but it has given me inspiration. Well done!

Title article: I Remember
Date: 2008-07-21 20:44:06

I thoroughly enjoy your writing style. It is easy to read because it flows so well. This story reminds of a mixture between little house on the prairie and the glass castle. Nicely done.

Title article: The Beast and the Wicked Witch
Date: 2008-07-21 15:46:59

The idea of the story is quite good. However, I found that it could have been written a little better. There are some subject-verb agreement conflicts and some areas don't make sense unless read twice. There is definite potential here. Keep on writing :)

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08/06/2008 12:41:33Vince Weiguang Li,Off-Topic40
01/05/2008 01:51:04Re:back to schoolOff-Topic3377
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12/23/2007 03:13:25Re:what's your favorite book?Off-Topic13787

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Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)

 Created On: 08/06/2008 05:40:32
Yeah, I figured you saved them, but when they're not here what good does that do me? I'm just whining. I appreciate your feeling to make a fresh start. I feel like deleting a punch of my stories sometimes, too. And only saving the ones I really, really think are solid. I experiment a lot and sometimes I write mediocre stuff that way. I should just be sticking to mystery, disturbing and crime type stuff. That seems to be my forte. I'm just trying to verify that, I guess. We're all learning.

Speaking of learning, I'll be a father very, very soon. My wife is due in two weeks, but we might have it early... depends on what the doctor. We have a son coming, name of Aidyn Drake Weaver. It's pretty hectic and exciting around the Weaver household these days.

Well, hurry up and get back to publishing, then. I need my Captain Morgen fix.
Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)

 Created On: 08/05/2008 07:15:47
You deleted all your stories?!?!?!!? BWAH!
Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)

 Created On: 06/10/2008 09:07:56
When do we get the rest of the "Treasure in the Backyard"? The suspense is killing me. Laters.
Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)

 Created On: 05/19/2008 05:22:21
Yeah, I let it slip my mind last week. It was a nutsy week, interviewed for a new job and such. Plus, Dirk was waiting on my signal and I was waiting on your completion. Silly me. We've posted now. Mine is "Money - Town without Pity" and Dirk's entry is "A Life's Worth." Exciting... now I just gotta read.

Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)

 Created On: 02/18/2008 06:47:56
I finished "Rose's Thorn", you should finish reading it. I'd love to hear the feedback. I looked at "The Glass Castle" on Amazon. They had a video with the author and her mom in it. The mom was showing off some of her paintings. I was also able to read the first chapter there... now I want to read it. It's really interesting and yes, even that one chapter and its narrative reminded me of Rose. It was odd and in a way nice. Makes me feel better about what I've written. ANYWAY... laters.
Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)

 Created On: 02/14/2008 18:26:38
"Please, sir... may I have some more?"
Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)

 Created On: 02/05/2008 14:11:13
Please keep up the writing. I enjoy checking out your stories, though the stripper one caught me off guard... YIKES.

Seriously, though, keep up the good work. You're very talented and I hope you do make a career of it.
Feedback from Morgen Holborn (Captain Morgen): Wow, thank you! I hope I am able to make it my career, just as long as things go as planned

Mugen (Dirkin)

 Created On: 01/08/2008 04:26:19
Hello! I like your stories =)
Feedback from Morgen Holborn (Captain Morgen): Oh thanks I appreciate it

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