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Member Since	10/07/2007
Last Online	10/03/2008
Connections	19
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Website/Blog:

www.fictionpress.com/u/585901/

About Myself:

My love for writing
Emcompasses the
Deepest of thoughts
Beyond the realm of
The conscious.

I see through my
Own eyes as they
Pierce through the
Mirror that binds
Me from myself,
Separating the life
That once bloomed
Within me.

Oh, where did it go?
I have found it...
In my pen.

Hello, my name is August. I'm eighteen. I am fond of cemeteries because I think they are beautiful. I also loves woods and natural surroundings. I hate mosquitoes and gnats, not that I think there is someone that likes them. I've been told that I have somewhat of an atmospheric tone to my writing, like missing key points that make it confusing, mysterious, and weird. I'm not so sure myself, though. I omit a lot of necessary sections in my writing (because I am constantly idle, of course), hence the name "Eclipsis" which means "omission or suppression of parts of words or sentences." As another treat, it sounds like "eclipse" and I love astronomical terminology. It was a delight to have come up with that name, though I most certainly experience pleasant flashbacks when I recall my previous pennames. I am undecisive, I've perhaps changed my penname around 3 times within one month. I hope I haven't confused anyone with my quirkish behavior...

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Sep 15, 2008	When The Sun Falls	Poetry	84
Aug 5, 2008	Human Nature	Poetry	115
Jul 31, 2008	My Sweet Black Rose	Poetry	156
Jul 22, 2008	You Can Eat Now	Horror	489
Jul 21, 2008	I Remember	Miscellaneous Stories	168
Jul 12, 2008	A Bright Light Pierces	Poetry	155
Jul 4, 2008	Tsuki To Akai Yukata	Poetry	175
Jul 2, 2008	Living Among the Demons	Miscellaneous Stories	136
Jun 30, 2008	Rose Liquid	Poetry	153
Jun 30, 2008	The Leaving Heart	Poetry	106
Jun 27, 2008	July Wind	Poetry	162
Jun 27, 2008	Black Bird	Poetry	105
Jun 23, 2008	Britney Spears: A Biography	Humor	226
Jun 23, 2008	Listening to The Wind	Poetry	133
Jun 21, 2008	Happiness at Last	Poetry	149
Jun 21, 2008	The Maple Tree	Poetry	133
Jun 19, 2008	Strive	Poetry	128
Jun 19, 2008	Darkness of the Night	Poetry	139
Jun 17, 2008	Constance, Chapter 6	Horror	99
Jun 17, 2008	The Letter of Waiting	Romance	227

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Comments

Title article: Just Wait...
Date: 2008-07-15 14:18:40

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It can be quite a challenge to be young. I just turned eighteen myself, but I don't really care whether I get a man or not. It just depends on the person, I guess. When I'm down, I write. It really soothes me out.

Title article: Frustration
Date: 2008-07-15 12:29:05

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Hmmm...Phantom pain, eh? That's a very interesting wway to put it. Anyway, I think this was well done even though it was pretty short. It was strong and very relatable. Great job!

Title article: Is
Date: 2008-07-15 12:26:37

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brilliantly done! I think you did an excellent job, for sure. I hope you'll continue writing, since you are getting better and better each time I read!
Great job!

Title article: This Internal Poison
Date: 2008-07-15 12:25:01

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From the very beginning of the poem, I felt drawn into it. I believe it was your style of writing, but it may also be the subject matter. I think this is truly something many of us can relate to.

Title article: Stop Pretending!
Date: 2008-07-15 12:22:12

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Very uplifting! Many times, it can be pretty difficult to write uplifting things in poetry, as it is quite often that people create cheezy ones. However, I felt that, nevertheless, you were able to create something I would think as a great example to those who wish to write something uplifting and yet rich. Great job!

Title article: Sailing Away
Date: 2008-07-15 12:18:44

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Very lovely combination of words. Although I wasn't necessarily fond of your style, I still felt as though it was very well written. Keep on writing!

Title article: Back at Me
Date: 2008-07-15 12:15:10

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Hi, Anna! This was brilliantly done and I felt that I was able to relate to it. How often does it seem as though we are tormented by the thoughts that scurry about in the most complex ways and prompt us to the chase them? It does feel sad that it becomes hard to remember the times in which we can pace ourselves and slowly observe the beautiful things of this world.

Title article: Why
Date: 2008-07-15 12:11:15

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I thought this was brilliantly done! The imagery was superb! I absolutely loved it. This is the type of poem I love. Confusing, yet it gives the right feelings to the atmosphere, making it unique. Imagery is always very important and the more complex that imagery is, the better.

Title article: Apples and Crows
Date: 2008-07-15 12:07:49

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I agree with Zombie Punk. Your poem does have a nice rythm to it. I like it quite a lot. Nevertheless, I felt as though you repeated the first phrases quite too often. I would suggest that you, at the end, try to twist that whole phrase and to give it a sense that it ended. You're poem felt like it was cut off in the middle.

Title article: Imagination Encircles The World
Date: 2008-07-14 18:29:19

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I thought this was brilliantly done! I, myself, being a musician, was able to relate to all this. Playing classical music isn't play. It forces you to face emotions hidden deep within you that you do not want to come in contact with. I'm sure there are many people who feel that way. Music is the purest form of expression and it exists in all cultures and perhaps even within the animal kingdom as well.
Any way, the imagery was absolutely wonderful. That is truly how a poem should be.

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Egoist (Egoist)	Created On: 03/09/2008 16:38:07 Thought you might want a signing in here. I really enjoy your stories, they're very unique. I really can't wait to read all of them, and once I'm done, I know I'm going to want more. You're an excellent writer and your imagery is outstanding.