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Member Since	10/07/2007
Last Online	12/18/2008
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Website/Blog:

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About Myself:

My love for writing
Emcompasses the
Deepest of thoughts
Beyond the realm of
The conscious.

I see through my
Own eyes as they
Pierce through the
Mirror that binds
Me from myself,
Separating the life
That once bloomed
Within me.

Oh, where did it go?
I have found it...
In my pen.

Hello, my name is August. I'm eighteen. I am fond of cemeteries because I think they are beautiful. I also loves woods and natural surroundings. I hate mosquitoes and gnats, not that I think there is someone that likes them. I've been told that I have somewhat of an atmospheric tone to my writing, like missing key points that make it confusing, mysterious, and weird. I'm not so sure myself, though. I omit a lot of necessary sections in my writing (because I am constantly idle, of course), hence the name "Eclipsis" which means "omission or suppression of parts of words or sentences." As another treat, it sounds like "eclipse" and I love astronomical terminology. It was a delight to have come up with that name, though I most certainly experience pleasant flashbacks when I recall my previous pennames. I am undecisive, I've perhaps changed my penname around 3 times within one month. I hope I haven't confused anyone with my quirkish behavior...

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Sep 15, 2008	When The Sun Falls	Poetry	120
Aug 5, 2008	Human Nature	Poetry	183
Jul 31, 2008	My Sweet Black Rose	Poetry	203
Jul 22, 2008	You Can Eat Now	Horror	531
Jul 21, 2008	I Remember	Miscellaneous Stories	203
Jul 12, 2008	A Bright Light Pierces	Poetry	199
Jul 4, 2008	Tsuki To Akai Yukata	Poetry	212
Jul 2, 2008	Living Among the Demons	Miscellaneous Stories	174
Jun 30, 2008	Rose Liquid	Poetry	178
Jun 30, 2008	The Leaving Heart	Poetry	139
Jun 27, 2008	July Wind	Poetry	187
Jun 27, 2008	Black Bird	Poetry	135
Jun 23, 2008	Britney Spears: A Biography	Humor	294
Jun 23, 2008	Listening to The Wind	Poetry	168
Jun 21, 2008	Happiness at Last	Poetry	186
Jun 21, 2008	The Maple Tree	Poetry	161
Jun 19, 2008	Strive	Poetry	156
Jun 19, 2008	Darkness of the Night	Poetry	164
Jun 17, 2008	Constance, Chapter 6	Horror	122
Jun 17, 2008	The Letter of Waiting	Romance	262

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Title article: Once upon a Twilight Past
Date: 2008-07-15 14:59:49

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I liked it a lot. And I know that you don't necessarily need to understand a poem. It was very well written, I must say. You used a lot of vocabulary (something I lack) and your choice of words was rather beautiful.

Title article: The Spark
Date: 2008-07-15 14:42:50

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I liked it a lot. It does give a sense of panic up towards the end, as philneale 1952 stated. I think you did a wonderful job on your poem. It was great.

Title article: Love Ends
Date: 2008-07-15 14:33:58

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I absolutely loved this story! It kept me interested from the beginning. I thought it was superb. The imagery was superb, especially the mentioning of the night's sky. The drama was perfect and the suspense grew stronger with every word. Great job!!

Title article: Just Wait...
Date: 2008-07-15 14:18:40

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It can be quite a challenge to be young. I just turned eighteen myself, but I don't really care whether I get a man or not. It just depends on the person, I guess. When I'm down, I write. It really soothes me out.

Title article: Is
Date: 2008-07-15 12:26:37

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brilliantly done! I think you did an excellent job, for sure. I hope you'll continue writing, since you are getting better and better each time I read!
Great job!

Title article: This Internal Poison
Date: 2008-07-15 12:25:01

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From the very beginning of the poem, I felt drawn into it. I believe it was your style of writing, but it may also be the subject matter. I think this is truly something many of us can relate to.

Title article: Stop Pretending!
Date: 2008-07-15 12:22:12

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Very uplifting! Many times, it can be pretty difficult to write uplifting things in poetry, as it is quite often that people create cheezy ones. However, I felt that, nevertheless, you were able to create something I would think as a great example to those who wish to write something uplifting and yet rich. Great job!

Title article: Sailing Away
Date: 2008-07-15 12:18:44

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Very lovely combination of words. Although I wasn't necessarily fond of your style, I still felt as though it was very well written. Keep on writing!

Title article: Why
Date: 2008-07-15 12:11:15

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I thought this was brilliantly done! The imagery was superb! I absolutely loved it. This is the type of poem I love. Confusing, yet it gives the right feelings to the atmosphere, making it unique. Imagery is always very important and the more complex that imagery is, the better.

Title article: Apples and Crows
Date: 2008-07-15 12:07:49

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I agree with Zombie Punk. Your poem does have a nice rythm to it. I like it quite a lot. Nevertheless, I felt as though you repeated the first phrases quite too often. I would suggest that you, at the end, try to twist that whole phrase and to give it a sense that it ended. You're poem felt like it was cut off in the middle.

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Egoist (Egoist)	Created On: 03/09/2008 18:38:07 Thought you might want a signing in here. I really enjoy your stories, they're very unique. I really can't wait to read all of them, and once I'm done, I know I'm going to want more. You're an excellent writer and your imagery is outstanding.