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Member Since	10/07/2007
Last Online	10/03/2008
Connections	19
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Website/Blog:

www.fictionpress.com/u/585901/

About Myself:

My love for writing
Emcompasses the
Deepest of thoughts
Beyond the realm of
The conscious.

I see through my
Own eyes as they
Pierce through the
Mirror that binds
Me from myself,
Separating the life
That once bloomed
Within me.

Oh, where did it go?
I have found it...
In my pen.

Hello, my name is August. I'm eighteen. I am fond of cemeteries because I think they are beautiful. I also loves woods and natural surroundings. I hate mosquitoes and gnats, not that I think there is someone that likes them. I've been told that I have somewhat of an atmospheric tone to my writing, like missing key points that make it confusing, mysterious, and weird. I'm not so sure myself, though. I omit a lot of necessary sections in my writing (because I am constantly idle, of course), hence the name "Eclipsis" which means "omission or suppression of parts of words or sentences." As another treat, it sounds like "eclipse" and I love astronomical terminology. It was a delight to have come up with that name, though I most certainly experience pleasant flashbacks when I recall my previous pennames. I am undecisive, I've perhaps changed my penname around 3 times within one month. I hope I haven't confused anyone with my quirkish behavior...

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Sep 15, 2008	When The Sun Falls	Poetry	83
Aug 5, 2008	Human Nature	Poetry	113
Jul 31, 2008	My Sweet Black Rose	Poetry	155
Jul 22, 2008	You Can Eat Now	Horror	483
Jul 21, 2008	I Remember	Miscellaneous Stories	166
Jul 12, 2008	A Bright Light Pierces	Poetry	153
Jul 4, 2008	Tsuki To Akai Yukata	Poetry	172
Jul 2, 2008	Living Among the Demons	Miscellaneous Stories	133
Jun 30, 2008	Rose Liquid	Poetry	152
Jun 30, 2008	The Leaving Heart	Poetry	105
Jun 27, 2008	July Wind	Poetry	161
Jun 27, 2008	Black Bird	Poetry	104
Jun 23, 2008	Britney Spears: A Biography	Humor	221
Jun 23, 2008	Listening to The Wind	Poetry	132
Jun 21, 2008	Happiness at Last	Poetry	147
Jun 21, 2008	The Maple Tree	Poetry	130
Jun 19, 2008	Strive	Poetry	128
Jun 19, 2008	Darkness of the Night	Poetry	135
Jun 17, 2008	Constance, Chapter 6	Horror	97
Jun 17, 2008	The Letter of Waiting	Romance	225

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Comments

Title article: Obscure
Date: 2008-08-17 13:26:36

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I thought it was fine. Of course, it needs more character development, but I thought that it was quite suspenseful and entertaining.

Title article: Project 30, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-08-17 11:32:53

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wow. You are a true master in the art of words! I really enjoyed and found it to not only flow very smoothly, but also to catch my curiosity.

Title article: You Can Eat Now
Date: 2008-08-17 11:28:58

Thanks
Thank you for all your comments. I realy appreciate them. Usually, I plan out my stories, but I didn't for this one. I guess I'm one of those people who rant around and miss the points. Lol. Anyway, thanks for your advice.

Title article: Project 30, Chapter 0
Date: 2008-08-17 11:27:18

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Hehehe. I wanted to be a part of this, but I guess I'll have to wait for next time. Still, I think I'd be no good for this. Hmmm...I wonder...can it be a story I already posted? Haha, I'm too afraid of the enormous talent this thing must require.

Title article: AUNTy NO BRAIN
Date: 2008-08-13 08:52:54

Lol
Your poems are so amusing. You make my day :)

Haha, they named her Jane. I don't know why I laughed at that. It was just so random and yet really suggestive that they found her real name to be unsuitable.

Title article: Plagiarism
Date: 2008-08-13 08:48:52

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Yes, originality is getting quite rare. I believe it's because we come into contact with one another too often and that the media is affecting us too much. If you want something original, listen to someone who has lived an isolated lifestyle, like a hermit or something like that. I wonder what that would be like...

And yet it is so strange that we actually enjoy listening and reading the same type of stuff over and over again.

Humans are surely strange an intriguing beings.

Title article: He made a difference
Date: 2008-08-13 08:44:34

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While this was well written, be careful of what subject matter you use to put your point forward. Religion is a very sensitive subject and when placing your main focus onto it, it may be difficult to communicate to those who are not of your faith.
When writing poetry for this website, try searching for something we can all relate to as human beings. That way, it would be much easier to be able to communicate.

Title article: Satan Called Me To You
Date: 2008-08-13 08:40:41

Very Deep
I thought it was very deep indeed. Absolutely well done!
Though I have one word of advice, you could work on the flow. Each line seems a little too long and draggy. If you could cut these lines into smaller pieces and work on placing them in positions that would make them more dramatic, that would be nice.

Title article: Panhandling Scum
Date: 2008-08-13 08:37:14

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It was very straight forward, which I actually like. It's actually pretty hard to pull off writing straightforward, but you did a very nice job.

Title article: Your Big Day
Date: 2008-08-11 08:38:37

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It really feels like you meant it. Loved it, really. But maybe you should change "once" to "ones". Other than that, I really liked it.

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Egoist (Egoist)	Created On: 03/09/2008 16:38:07 Thought you might want a signing in here. I really enjoy your stories, they're very unique. I really can't wait to read all of them, and once I'm done, I know I'm going to want more. You're an excellent writer and your imagery is outstanding.