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Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)
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Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Aug 19, 2008Jericho, Chapter 5Miscellaneous Stories 79
Aug 16, 2008Jericho, Chapter 4Miscellaneous Stories 105
Aug 14, 2008Jericho, Chapter 3Miscellaneous Stories 133
Aug 13, 2008Suburban HellMystery 177
Aug 13, 2008Jericho, Chapter 2Miscellaneous Stories 147
Aug 12, 2008Panhandling ScumPoetry 119
Aug 12, 2008Jericho, Chapter 1Miscellaneous Stories 274
Aug 11, 2008Tears from a Burnt CigarPoetry 133
Aug 11, 2008Jericho, Chapter 0Miscellaneous Stories 323
Aug 10, 2008The Book CellarHorror 372
Aug 9, 2008Twelve Step MadnessPoetry 160
Aug 8, 2008My Secret SpotNon-Fiction 218
Aug 8, 2008Just a TeaseRomance 372
Aug 8, 2008Here I Am, WorldPoetry 100
Jul 20, 20081961Horror 586
Jul 13, 2008War On EarthPoetry 413
Jul 13, 2008FrustrationPoetry 167
Jul 12, 2008A Poetic ResponsePoetry 296
Jul 9, 2008ShePoetry 714
Jul 7, 2008Sheep in a Slaughter HousePoetry 215
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Comments

Total number of comments: 1127

Title article: "The Lesson"
Date: 2008-08-21 16:06:31

hahaha i just saw that same fucking comment on 'crazytyme' 
 
chaabuk you sad, sad comment whore. i hope you burn for this treason!

Title article: Darkening, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-08-20 22:18:55
Darkening, Chapter 1
First off, that is one badass picture. What is it from? 
 
Um ... there were a lot of typos (i.e a couple times you used 'loose' instead of 'lose', etc ...). I think maybe this would be better if you had shorter sentences, some of them were really long and kind of took away the greatness of the chapter.  
 
Another suggestion, and it's only a suggestion, mind you, is maybe have chapter 0 in the beginning of this instead of as a seperate chapter. it's so short it'd fit perfectly in the beginning in like italics or something. 
 
 
Okay ... sorry about that. 
 
But for the good stuff, this was an action-packed, eye bulging thriller. I'm wondering if this mysterious 'chaser' is the main character's split personality maybe? All will be unfolded in the preceding chapters i guess, though. Great chapter, looking forward for more! 
 
Cheers, 
 
Max

Title article: Darkening, Chapter 0
Date: 2008-08-20 22:03:18

oh yeah i remember this. pretty weird but leaves you curious for more. on to the next ... hopefully i finish tonight.

Title article: "The Wolfen"
Date: 2008-08-20 21:06:56

can i be an Eggman, too? 
 
e-even a Wolfen? *eyes sparkle*

Title article: Her Face -- A Haiku
Date: 2008-08-20 04:23:23
Her Face -- A Hakiu
I do not have a clue on what a filigree is but nonetheless you were able to paint a picture in my head. 
 
I saw a girl with long brown hair on a swing set by an apple tree, and a glare of light from the sun is shiny through the leaves and branches of the apple tree and onto her face. 
 
Cheers, 
 
Max

Title article: HENPECKED HUSBAND
Date: 2008-08-20 03:16:28

This sucks more ass then Fall Out Boy

Title article: A Poem Only For You
Date: 2008-08-19 22:08:56
A Poem Only For You
*imagine applauding right here* 
 
Bravo, dude! Really happy for you. This one of your best verses yet, man.  
 
Wait a minute ... you're not gonna start getting all soft on us, are you? hehe 
 
Cheers! 
 
Max

Title article: Crash
Date: 2008-08-19 19:07:06
Crash
ha! awesome twist. the only negative about this story was you kept switching from past and present tense, other then that this was a great piece of flash fiction. but, i think you should expand on this. write more! like from the alien's point of view, how he's in this mysterious, dreadful prison. it's be a pretty kickass story, man. Expand! 
 
Cheers, 
 
Max

Title article: Love From a Twelve Year Old
Date: 2008-08-18 21:48:19

Dude, this is fucking creepy.

Title article: Odour Of A Clown
Date: 2008-08-18 21:39:25
Odour Of A Clown
Wtf? oh wow that was really funny. fookin out there, but all the same hilarious. you sure do have a wacky, fun style. It's really enjoyable to say the least. Will be reading the rest of your stories ... 
 
Cheers, 
 
Max

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Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 08/19/2008 16:38:38
My fingernails are long, dirty, and thirsty for blood.

Let's do this.

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 08/19/2008 12:16:48
How about you give me some money and then I'll give you some. Really. You can trust me.

Okokokokokok how about this. We kill a bunch of people......that's all I got.
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 08/19/2008 11:54:29
No...............no I have not. What is it?

Nonononononono I don't think you got it. Max. Give. Me. Money.
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 08/19/2008 11:44:03
My moms hot. I'm surprised I don't have more siblings.

I'm so broke. That started put a knife through my wallet bleeding it of any monitary value as it screamed up to the hot sun, "Spare me a bill!!" But alas, no bill was saved.

Give me money.

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 08/18/2008 08:36:51
Damn how old are your parents? Did they just take a break before they had you? *whispers* Were you an accident?

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 08/18/2008 08:24:14
I'm 55 minus 30 divided by 2 plus 12.

I'm way older than you bitch.

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 08/18/2008 08:11:34
He's 22. He looks like he's 16 but he's not. He cuts meat at Sams Club. You should hear him sometimes. If we look up at the clouds he'll say which ones look like what parts of a cow. He sees rocks and he thinks roast. He has a lot of knives and I know that someday......he's gonna want to experiment on people.
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 08/18/2008 08:01:55
He thinks he can kick my ass now that he's been working out and I'm all soft and squishy. He's going to get a surprise though when I see him later. He just bought a grill and wants to cook later today. I'll play nice until its heated up. Then I'll scream out, "Kick my ass huh!?" Before grabbing his face and slamming it on the grill. Then we'll all laugh, eat some burgers, and call a plastic surgeon.

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 08/18/2008 07:51:04
Maybe its my browser at work. It doesn't let me open up some sites. Stupid corporation limiting my internet while they pay me.

I might have to sit on my little brother today. He's starting shit. And he's like......a twig.
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 08/18/2008 07:29:25
Its not letting me open it. You didn't put any Satan in it did you? Cuz that could be the problem.

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