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DateTitleCategoryHits
Oct 9, 2008TeddyHorror 223
Oct 7, 2008The Purple Beneath, Chapter 4Mystery 131
Sep 27, 2008The Purple Beneath, Chapter 3Mystery 112
Sep 27, 2008The Purple Beneath, Chapter 2Mystery 131
Sep 24, 2008They are the DeadPoetry 311
Sep 22, 2008The Purple Beneath, Chapter 1Mystery 277
Sep 19, 2008Jericho, Chapter 15Miscellaneous Stories 180
Sep 10, 2008Jericho, Chapter 14Miscellaneous Stories 151
Sep 5, 2008Jericho, Chapter 13Miscellaneous Stories 144
Sep 4, 2008Jericho, Chapter 12Miscellaneous Stories 170
Sep 2, 2008Jericho, Chapter 11Miscellaneous Stories 149
Sep 1, 2008Jericho, Chapter 10Miscellaneous Stories 313
Aug 30, 2008Jericho, Chapter 9Miscellaneous Stories 175
Aug 27, 2008Pretty Fly for a Russian GuyHumor 1141
Aug 26, 2008Jericho, Chapter 8Miscellaneous Stories 171
Aug 25, 2008Trained to KillPoetry 225
Aug 25, 2008Jericho, Chapter 7Miscellaneous Stories 173
Aug 22, 2008Jericho, Chapter 6Miscellaneous Stories 212
Aug 19, 2008Jericho, Chapter 5Miscellaneous Stories 194
Aug 16, 2008Jericho, Chapter 4Miscellaneous Stories 197
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Total number of comments: 1366

Title article: Through the Eyes of Death
Date: 2008-10-11 18:45:46
Through the Eyes of Death
I just love these types of stories -- the kind taking place in the Middle Ages and such -- and I wish there were more like this on here. Maybe I'll write one ... okay, that is besides the point. Your story is what we're talking about here. I thought it was written pretty well, and the choice of words was just awesome -- nice vocabulary! Like somebody else already said, though, maybe consider breaking it up into shorter paragraphs. It makes it easier to read on a computer screen. But it's your story really, so if you don't want to then no biggie. Great writing and an enjoyable story!

Title article: Her Magic Touch, Chapter 5
Date: 2008-10-11 18:11:50
Her Magic Touch, Chapter 5
You sly fox; the author commentary in this chapter (along with the rest of the story, of course) is absolutely hilarious. It is what practically makes your tale of magic touches and clever dialogue. Keep poppin' these out ... I'll keep readin' them. I'm quite curious just how exactly you plan on taking this, though.  
 
Cheers!

Title article: To Become A Master
Date: 2008-10-11 15:33:47
To Become A Master
The lesson you teach in this is so true. The more the challenge, the more satisfied we are. We're human, after all, and we want people to be proud of us -- want to be proud of ourselves really. And a difficult task is much more fulfilling than a mediocre one. 
 
But anyways ... I thought this story was pretty good. It's written well and has its entertainment. Pretty relatable actually. 
 
As the topics Potter has already mentioned, this also has similarities to that excalibur tale, which is just plain awesome to have that in a story. I really liked the different way you presented the 'sword in the stone' emblem. Very creative. 
 
My only critique, though, is in the beginning of your tale I think you may have used the word 'Master' a little too many times. It kind of makes it feel a little awkward. 
 
But other than that I enjoyed your story quite some bit. 
 
Cheers!

Title article: It's a Matter of Importance
Date: 2008-10-10 17:17:00
It's a Matter of Importance
Yeah, darcknyt pretty much expressed my thoughts on the story. It was definetly well worded ... way better than some of the shit porn posted on here by a couple people I could name, but they choose to remain anonymous (ha!). But yeah...good piece of flash fiction you have here. The story flowed quite well.

Title article: Feast Of Worms, Chapter 7
Date: 2008-10-10 05:34:12
Feast Of Worms (Final?), Chapter 7
Alright, dude ... you have to continue. I don't know how it's possible, but this could be so much more awesome than it already is. Yeah, I really like this chapter -- one of my favorites of the story, but there are so many possibilities you could spin this into. One that comes to mind is similar to this graphic novel, 30 Days of Night; the basic premise is a small group of survivals are trapped in this town, being held hostage by (in this case) sadistic eyeless Dobermans and strange humanoid worm type of creatures. I would definetly read each chapter... 
 
Well, if you decide to end it here let me just say this was a really cool awesomely detailed story that I really enjoyed. 
 
Congrats on a job well done, man.

Title article: The World Next Door
Date: 2008-10-09 19:44:18
The World Next Door
I have one word ... wow. I mean...well shit, just wow! I really wish I could write the review that this Poem deserves, but I wouldn't know where to start on this one. Literally every line was phenomenal. How long did this one take you? It seems so epic, but so short and unfolding at the same time. Now I'm in the mood to write a poem ... thanks. Oh yeah, not really sure how I helped with the title ... but oh well. Yer welcome.

Title article: Dank Pasta
Date: 2008-10-09 10:05:58
Dank Pasta
Yeah, wasn't too humorous but it did had it's amusing parts -- but it's okay since it's not under humor. I'm not really sure I want to know the outcome of the moldy sauce, do I?  
 
Good 'adventure' story, it has some great descriptions as always. I enjoyed it, and that's all that matters, doesn't it?  
 
Odd thing about pasta, all of it -- any kind -- always smells like bleach to me.

Title article: Palin Fever
Date: 2008-10-09 00:11:46
Palin Fever
Ha! Good stuff. These conversation pieces are awesome, and you always pull them off well. I almost suspected when he mentioned McCain that he would think John McClane from Die Hard.......I always get the two mixed up at least.

Title article: The Nag
Date: 2008-10-08 18:56:24
The Nag
Weird, it was silly, that's for sure. The details are amazing and the end is so silly, (especially the last line). I always love a story with a cannibal in it ... just ask somebody called Lemon, she'll tell ya ;)

Title article: Her Magic Touch, Chapter 4
Date: 2008-10-08 18:39:29
Her Magic Touch, Chapter 4
The whole story's kind of farfetched, but that what makes it funny to me. A little quirky. Anyways, you started sliding on this chapter, though. You're rushing, aren't you? Calm down and don't hurry the story. It'll finish itself when it's tired of being cut open. The stiches will heal at the right time. Just be careful. Anyways, of course this one had its funny moments, too. Just this is the least effective chapter. Still looking forward for the next installment, though. 
 
Cheers!

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Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 10/13/2008 03:26:50
Pizza, pizza, pizza, pizza, pizza, pizza, pizza, pizza, pizza, pizza, pizza, pizza, pizza, pizza, pizza, pizza, pIzza, pizZa, PiZza, piZzA, pIzZa, breadsticks!!!

I have a coupon.

Amie Kerlin (lemon)

 Created On: 10/12/2008 14:01:05
yeah like patty hearst. I think it will be interesting. I'm doing the research now.

dude. thats so NOT a suit. I thought i'd finally put my pic up. now you're going to make me cry little lemon juice tears.

Amie Kerlin (lemon)

 Created On: 10/12/2008 08:59:12
Yo, wassup with you?

i've been SO freaking busy lately.. doesnt give me much time for writing. I was thinking about doing a story about a robbery and some people with stockholm syndrome. whaddaya think?

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 10/11/2008 19:47:29
Its kerouacsack@yahoo.com

You fucked Lumburgh!? Hey that's greaaaat.
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 10/10/2008 20:30:50
Hey if you could e-mail me that prologue outside of the attachment that'd be greaaaaat. Thanks a bunch Milton.

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 10/09/2008 02:48:10
HA! For once YOUR internet sucks. Or computer. Whatever. I'm ruining my own moment.
Later.
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 10/09/2008 02:14:25
I don't think it's that funny but its a nonfiction piece. I don't know. I think I'll post it before I get off so I don't have to retype it. Then later today I'll work on sharpening it.

Haven't you been writing that thing all night? Aren't you done yet addict? You're slacking.

I'll have to give it a read during my 9 1/2 hour shift.
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 10/09/2008 01:47:06
Yeah it's totally going to be a rape van. Take out the back seat, put in some bonds and a gag, and tint the windows. Nobody would be the wiser.

Oh come on Max I know you like N'Sync. You practice the dances when nobody's in the room don't you?
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 10/09/2008 01:31:24
They're going slow. We haven't done 'em in a while. I should make it a point to do it this weekend. Dan's getting a minivan on saturday. We're gonna beat the shit out of that ride!

Let me guess. You're listening to........N'Sync? Oh I love those guys.

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 10/09/2008 01:10:16
Oh I've had her for 10 years. I took her to a school dance and got our picture in the yearbook.

I got in a fight and the cops showed up so I had to do community service. I chose Salvation Army and when our eyes made contact I was hers. And for $17.86 she was mine.
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