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DateTitleCategoryHits
Oct 7, 2008The Purple Beneath, Chapter 4Mystery 31
Sep 27, 2008The Purple Beneath, Chapter 3Mystery 86
Sep 27, 2008The Purple Beneath, Chapter 2Mystery 120
Sep 24, 2008They are the DeadPoetry 296
Sep 22, 2008The Purple Beneath, Chapter 1Mystery 256
Sep 19, 2008Jericho, Chapter 15Miscellaneous Stories 155
Sep 10, 2008Jericho, Chapter 14Miscellaneous Stories 139
Sep 5, 2008Jericho, Chapter 13Miscellaneous Stories 134
Sep 4, 2008Jericho, Chapter 12Miscellaneous Stories 165
Sep 2, 2008Jericho, Chapter 11Miscellaneous Stories 146
Sep 1, 2008Jericho, Chapter 10Miscellaneous Stories 310
Aug 30, 2008Jericho, Chapter 9Miscellaneous Stories 171
Aug 27, 2008Pretty Fly for a Russian GuyHumor 1123
Aug 26, 2008Jericho, Chapter 8Miscellaneous Stories 165
Aug 25, 2008Trained to KillPoetry 215
Aug 25, 2008Jericho, Chapter 7Miscellaneous Stories 169
Aug 22, 2008Jericho, Chapter 6Miscellaneous Stories 205
Aug 19, 2008Jericho, Chapter 5Miscellaneous Stories 188
Aug 16, 2008Jericho, Chapter 4Miscellaneous Stories 193
Aug 14, 2008Jericho, Chapter 3Miscellaneous Stories 223
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Title article: Feast Of Worms, Chapter 5
Date: 2008-10-07 06:53:23
Feast Of Worms, Chapter 5
Holy shit this is an awesome story, one of the most well written ones I've ever read on this site. Honesty, it is really that good. I can't wait for the next chapter. Also, it is very realistic how he still feels the leg connected to his body. That how it really would be, too. I wonder, though, how long does it take for phantom pain to kick in? I'm not sure if it's right away or not ... 
 
Another thing, the maggots falling out of his flesh was a very cool touch. I just love these descriptions, man. I could totally see this as a movie. 
 
Now, bring on chapter 6!

Title article: Feast Of Worms, Chapter 4
Date: 2008-10-06 11:38:55
Feast Of Worms, Chapter 4
As Scooby said, this was slightly comical -- but a very understandable realistic stream of consciencness.  
 
I'm kind of bummed that this chapter was so short, too.  
 
I wanted some of those terrific detials describing the leg amputation. That would have been pretty sweet -- but, I suppose not saying it can be more horrifying then just being blunt about it, right?  
 
Good stuff, nonetheless. I'm really digging this story. 
 
I'm wondering just exactly who this dark dude is, and why is he terrorizing Samuel of all people. I need to read more.  
 
I have to ask you one thing, though. 
 
When is the next chapter coming out?

Title article: Feast Of Worms, Chapter 3
Date: 2008-10-06 11:27:12
Feast Of Worms, Chapter 3
Damnit, I was going to quote the first paragraph, but it looks like Synchronicity beat me to the punch. But yeah, dude....that was an AMAZING description. It blew me away. Truely marvelous. 
 
That phone call scene was pretty intense, too. I could feel Samuel begging for his wife to stay put. Crying even. 
 
And the last part with the maggots on his ankle made me squirm. A little off topic, but the other day I saw this show, 'true ER tales', on TV, and this one homeless guy came in and his ankle all the way to the bottom of his knee was literally covered in maggots. It was pretty disgusting, but also really cool looking.  
 
Alright! I've babbled on long enough. Time to read the next chapter ...

Title article: Feast Of Worms, Chapter 2
Date: 2008-10-06 11:08:25
Feast Of Worms, Chapter 2
I had to take a double take at the end there, with the part of the worm-socketed Doberman. Very orginal and creepy.  
 
I'm really digging this story, man. It's by far my favorite one by you. These descriptions are beyond amazing. This has the marks of a true professional.  
 
I'm really excited to find out what is going to happen next.  
 
This 'dark man' is also pretty cool and ominous. I like the way you portrayed him -- very easy to visualize.  
 
Okay, onto the next ...

Title article: Feast Of Worms, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-10-06 10:47:42
Feast Of Worms, Chapter 1
Well, I have to agree with the other commenters. These descriptions are without a doubt phenomenal. I could literally picture everything you wrote. It was as if I was Samuel and the story was being played out right in front of my eyes.  
 
By the way, the title you have chosen is really cool.  
 
Also, I like how you start this off a tiny bit slow, getting to know the character a little bit, but you gave a vauge hint of the trouble that probably awaits our main character. The shadows. What could they be? Super fast giant worms? Probably not...but hey, this is fiction. There are no rules here. 
 
Anxiously onto the next chapter ...

Title article: Through
Date: 2008-10-05 09:26:31
Through
Maybe it's because I'm really into the guitar lately, but I could see this as a song. The whole time reading this I was tapping my foot against the carpet and slowly rocking my head back and forth, quietly singing the poem. Not much into the whole romance scene, though, but I can dig this 'un, cause it as a deeper meaning than just the boring cliche Hollywood romances. Good stuff indeed, 'Anna.  
 
As the Romans say, keep on keepin' on. (It was the Romans who said that, right? Oh, I'm so confused.) 
 
Cheers!

Title article: Attack of the Networked Wireless Plans!
Date: 2008-10-05 05:29:55
Attack of the Networked Wireless Plans!
Great satire! 
 
Loved almost every moment of it, held a smile throughout. At first, though, I thought this was going to be a little TOO MUCH like Stephen King's Cell, but it ended up being quite humorous and distinct in it's own way. I think this is pretty funny, man. There were a lot of things I laughed at, some being the 'taking-a-phone-call-during- sex part' and the ending 'it's for you' line. All of it, really, was HIGHLY entertaining. I think your writing here is very clean and professional, which makes me want to read more of your work. So, that's what I'm probably going to be reading today. I hope your other writing is in this sort of style, cause it's pretty good. Also, great story. 
 
Cheers!

Title article: Ashes To Ashes
Date: 2008-10-05 01:32:26
Ashes To Ashes
Damnit, read this one before too. What are you trying to do to me, David??  
 
Anyways, this was a great story before and a terrific story now that you have rewrote it. As the first time I read it, though, I sort of wished there was more to it, cause I was really getting into the story and then -- over. But, I suppose the way you ended it was perfect -- just perhaps missing something. Not sure what, though. 
 
Good 'un, Sir Mugwump. 
 
Cheers!

Title article: There Is Only One Star - It Ends At The Beginning
Date: 2008-10-03 20:19:33
There Is Only One Star
Fantastic story, Sir Mugwump! 
 
Loved it on the first read and loved it even more the second time around.  
 
Truely a magnificant piece of literature that everybody should read at least once.  
 
It has the signs of a real classic. 
 
Cheers! 
 
(btw i'm still waiting for Pugswallow 2! i know, i know...don't rush a masterpiece......but i'm beginning to grow impatient!"

Title article: Misery
Date: 2008-10-03 20:14:21
Misery
You know something, this would be a kickass song. Something maybe Metallica would play. I can seriously hear it playing out in my head, now i'm going to go sing that with the guitar. That's right, I'm stealing your poem for my own selfish deeds. I'll send you ten percent of all profits i make. Thanks! 
 
oh yeah, i agree with others about expansion.  
 
Let's hope next week is better, eh? Because you know .... I can't keep hugging my laptop. People are going to start to talk......

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Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 10/07/2008 15:35:17
You've asked me this before and the answer is yes, I've seen the Idiocracy. But not recently. As I've been living in depravity and obscurity not wanting to see the captivity that comes with Idiocracy.

Yeah. Your moms a whore.

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 10/07/2008 15:09:30
Movie Magic.

Maybe your mom is doing something naughty on the side that you don't know about........like getting some 'hot coffee.' She gave me some once. But it tasted aged and bitter. Maybe he's adding creamer to it. lol I'm such a pervert.
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 10/07/2008 14:51:07
Wow. That is extreme.

I think I saw it fucking YEARS ago but I don't remember much about it. Maybe I'll rent it sometime. It's crazy the clerk at LSD (Lincoln Sound & Disc) gave us our last six movies free along with some used cds. Its cool getting free shit. Hey Max, give me a dollar.

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 10/07/2008 14:23:47
Yeah they kind of made me think of the dirty assholes in Toxic Avenger.

It'll be so EXTREME you won't know what to do with your.....oh wait. No it won't. It'll just be two people talking......bummer.

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 10/07/2008 14:10:45
Yeah its a conversation piece.

lol Epic? I'm not to sure about that. I do know though that it'll be EXTREME!!!
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 10/07/2008 13:52:11
Yeah they got some good stuff. Black Christmas is a good one. They already remade that one.

I think the blind guy just came for the love.......of demons. They do seem like deadites. I wonder what it'd be like to have sex with one.......

I gotta get my mind out of the gutter and on Palin.....which is still in the gutter. Damn this thing is deep. I can't seem to find my way out.
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 10/07/2008 13:35:53
Yeah but I made my own milk.



The boss is gone for now.......freedom reigns.
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 10/07/2008 12:49:21
It might be English dub. Then again it might not.

Well if you missed it so much then you'd've remembered to get it instead of............not getting it! HA! Take that.

I had a dream last night where I couldn't stop masterbating. It was crazy. So can you guess what the first was that I did today?

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 10/07/2008 12:27:33
lol I forgot about that. What game did you end up getting?
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 10/07/2008 12:17:42
Hells yeah I'm going to do it! I just have to wait for the boss to leave.
Why? Because I got Palin Fever baby!


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