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Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)
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Member Since 10/04/2007
Last Online 08/21/2008
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Website/Blog: Click me! Click Me! Click Me!
About Myself: It's okay. I'm just admiring the shape of your skull.

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Jul 20, 20081961Horror 586
Jul 12, 2008A Poetic ResponsePoetry 296
Dec 17, 2007DOGHorror 727
Jun 25, 2008Drunk as a SkunkHumor 562
May 8, 2008Fairy Tales From Hell Presents: Hansel and GretelHorror 605
May 9, 2008Fairy Tales From Hell Presents: RumpelstiltskinHorror 409
May 11, 2008Fairy Tales From Hell Presents: The Three Little PigsHorror 337
Jul 13, 2008FrustrationPoetry 167
Aug 8, 2008Here I Am, WorldPoetry 100
May 27, 2008HitchhikingHumor 249
Aug 11, 2008Jericho, Chapter 0Miscellaneous Stories 323
Aug 12, 2008Jericho, Chapter 1Miscellaneous Stories 274
Aug 13, 2008Jericho, Chapter 2Miscellaneous Stories 147
Aug 14, 2008Jericho, Chapter 3Miscellaneous Stories 133
Aug 16, 2008Jericho, Chapter 4Miscellaneous Stories 105
Aug 19, 2008Jericho, Chapter 5Miscellaneous Stories 79
Aug 8, 2008Just a TeaseRomance 372
May 27, 2008mOnStErHorror 278
Jun 27, 2008My Own Personal HellPoetry 437
Aug 8, 2008My Secret SpotNon-Fiction 218
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Comments

Total number of comments: 1127

Title article: "The Lesson"
Date: 2008-08-21 16:06:31

hahaha i just saw that same fucking comment on 'crazytyme' 
 
chaabuk you sad, sad comment whore. i hope you burn for this treason!

Title article: Darkening, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-08-20 22:18:55
Darkening, Chapter 1
First off, that is one badass picture. What is it from? 
 
Um ... there were a lot of typos (i.e a couple times you used 'loose' instead of 'lose', etc ...). I think maybe this would be better if you had shorter sentences, some of them were really long and kind of took away the greatness of the chapter.  
 
Another suggestion, and it's only a suggestion, mind you, is maybe have chapter 0 in the beginning of this instead of as a seperate chapter. it's so short it'd fit perfectly in the beginning in like italics or something. 
 
 
Okay ... sorry about that. 
 
But for the good stuff, this was an action-packed, eye bulging thriller. I'm wondering if this mysterious 'chaser' is the main character's split personality maybe? All will be unfolded in the preceding chapters i guess, though. Great chapter, looking forward for more! 
 
Cheers, 
 
Max

Title article: Darkening, Chapter 0
Date: 2008-08-20 22:03:18

oh yeah i remember this. pretty weird but leaves you curious for more. on to the next ... hopefully i finish tonight.

Title article: "The Wolfen"
Date: 2008-08-20 21:06:56

can i be an Eggman, too? 
 
e-even a Wolfen? *eyes sparkle*

Title article: Her Face -- A Haiku
Date: 2008-08-20 04:23:23
Her Face -- A Hakiu
I do not have a clue on what a filigree is but nonetheless you were able to paint a picture in my head. 
 
I saw a girl with long brown hair on a swing set by an apple tree, and a glare of light from the sun is shiny through the leaves and branches of the apple tree and onto her face. 
 
Cheers, 
 
Max

Title article: HENPECKED HUSBAND
Date: 2008-08-20 03:16:28

This sucks more ass then Fall Out Boy

Title article: A Poem Only For You
Date: 2008-08-19 22:08:56
A Poem Only For You
*imagine applauding right here* 
 
Bravo, dude! Really happy for you. This one of your best verses yet, man.  
 
Wait a minute ... you're not gonna start getting all soft on us, are you? hehe 
 
Cheers! 
 
Max

Title article: Crash
Date: 2008-08-19 19:07:06
Crash
ha! awesome twist. the only negative about this story was you kept switching from past and present tense, other then that this was a great piece of flash fiction. but, i think you should expand on this. write more! like from the alien's point of view, how he's in this mysterious, dreadful prison. it's be a pretty kickass story, man. Expand! 
 
Cheers, 
 
Max

Title article: Love From a Twelve Year Old
Date: 2008-08-18 21:48:19

Dude, this is fucking creepy.

Title article: Odour Of A Clown
Date: 2008-08-18 21:39:25
Odour Of A Clown
Wtf? oh wow that was really funny. fookin out there, but all the same hilarious. you sure do have a wacky, fun style. It's really enjoyable to say the least. Will be reading the rest of your stories ... 
 
Cheers, 
 
Max

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Amie Kerlin (lemon)

 Created On: 08/21/2008 19:05:15
Ok Max. you need some lyrics on your page too.

Sick boy, in his faded blue jeans
sick boy, black leather jacket scene
sick boy, he's always in trouble with the law
doncha know

Sick boy, he carries a switch blade knife
sick boy, likes to get into fights
sick boy, he'll go out drinkin
with the boys all night long
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 08/21/2008 14:57:53
We're just talking about how old Green Day was good and how new Green Day needs to just stop making music.
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 08/21/2008 14:38:44
You know he did offer to sell me a car when he was SON OF A BITCH! I let a communist stick a finger in my skull! I feel so dirty.........
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 08/21/2008 14:16:17
Edited By Jason Haugh (Something Indecent) On: 08/21/2008 14:21:22
You don't have to pay but you can only have up to 10 stories posted on your profile. I totally like this site better. It's more efficient and open.

Ok I think only my left eye is going blind. I've been doing some very extensive tests and that's been the consensus of the group. That's right. I have a group of scientists and we're all experimenting on my eyes. HHhhmmmmm now that I think about it it doesn't seem like such a good idea...........

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 08/21/2008 13:42:41
I'm setting up a writing.com account. You ever use that site?

P.S. You're a hanging carcass in a DETROIT subway. Ooooooooo burn.




I think.............
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 08/21/2008 11:34:50
He will never make another movie again.

The reason I think I'm going blind is because I think I'm going blind.
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 08/19/2008 19:03:41
No........no it wasn't.

I think I'm going blind.

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 08/19/2008 18:38:19



Hey I'm not the one filled with tricks and lies. You tricking liar.
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 08/19/2008 17:52:35
OH NO!!! NOT MCKULLY!!!
Hey, go fuck yourself.
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 08/19/2008 17:22:57
I don't know. I just remembered only seeing up to ch. 4 on your profile so I assumed that it wasn't up. So there, the explanation has been revealed! I should probably go read that though...
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