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Member Since	10/04/2007
Last Online	01/07/2009
Connections	95
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Website/Blog:	mychainsawenema.wordpress.com/
About Myself:	I ain't no goddamn son of a bitch.

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Jan 1, 2009	Plague, Chapter 2	Horror	65
Dec 28, 2008	Plague, Chapter 1	Horror	131
Sep 24, 2008	They are the Dead	Poetry	509
Aug 25, 2008	Trained to Kill	Poetry	308
Aug 13, 2008	Suburban Hell	Mystery	443
Aug 12, 2008	Panhandling Scum	Poetry	288
Aug 11, 2008	Tears from a Burnt Cigar	Poetry	308
Aug 9, 2008	Twelve Step Madness	Poetry	302
Aug 8, 2008	My Secret Spot	Non-Fiction	408
Aug 8, 2008	Just a Tease	Romance	742
Jul 20, 2008	1961	Horror	803
Jul 13, 2008	War On Earth	Poetry	556
Jun 29, 2008	The Root of all Evil	Horror	348
May 27, 2008	Monster	Horror	423
May 1, 2008	Pain	Horror	730
Dec 17, 2007	DOG	Horror	855
Nov 19, 2007	The Thanksgiving Hustle	Humor	1326

Comments

Title article: Rookie, Chapter 21
Date: 2009-01-01 14:57:34

Rookie, Chapter 21
Amazing imagery! The details were phenomenal. Great chapter all in all. Awesome job.

Title article: Rookie, Chapter 20
Date: 2009-01-01 14:10:44

Rookie, Chapter 20
Man, this just doesn't let up, does it? What the hell is going to happen next? This story is soooooo good. Really, once you finish this you NEED to send it into some publishers. More people need to read this.

Title article: Rookie, Chapter 19
Date: 2009-01-01 13:58:08

Rookie, Chapter 19
Yeah, Alec sure is getting cold. Okay, maybe he's a little beyond that point.

A couple things real fast: there was quite a few typos in this, as well as the other previous chapters. But I haven't really said anything cause this is still the first draft, right? Just pointin' it out to ya.

Also, I kind of felt that this chapter went by too fast. Let me specify: to me, it felt as if they left the factory and went to the skateboarding scene a little too quick. I was kind of expecting something else to happen in between then.

Otherwise, yeah, this is a great addition to the story. I'm really enjoying it.

Title article: Rookie, Chapter 18
Date: 2009-01-01 13:39:18

Rookie, Chapter 18
Whoa ... let me catch my breath here. That was one hell of a chapter, man! I wasn't even reading it, I was watching it. I was in the factory with them, viewing their fighting, their destruction. It literally pulled me into the story. Great job. This is just fantastic.

Title article: Rookie, Chapter 17
Date: 2009-01-01 02:24:11

Rookie, Chapter 17
Yeah, I agree with Janet. You're doing an excellent job developing your characters, especially Alec. It's amazing how much he has changed since the first chapter. He's starting to turn. Also, I'm glad this chapter was short. I was in the mood to read, but too tired to read something long. So, this was perfect. Thanks for the entertaining story!

Title article: A New Year
Date: 2008-12-31 23:43:00

A New Year
It starts off pretty good, keeps a good rhythm. The only suggestion is to expand a little. Otherwise good poem. I like your choice of words.

Title article: Happy New Year
Date: 2008-12-31 12:19:22

Well, this was horrible.
Oh my God, where should I begin? This story makes no sense. You list characters and then never mention them again..at all! There wasn't even a story here. Just a bunch of rambling on about thanks and whatnot. What exactly were you going for? Not a story, not a poem, barely even a prose. What the hell.

I suggest a re-write.

And then re-write it again.

Might be best to do a re-write after that once more.

Better luck next time...

Oh yeah, Happy New Year, Lori!

Title article: Took Us Away
Date: 2008-12-28 11:14:23

Took Us Away
Very melancholic, Cody. I really dug the rhymes and flow of this one. I loved the imagery behind this. I really liked the line about the crows and dove. All in all, the poem is very easy to visualize. Great job, man.

Title article: Choice
Date: 2008-12-28 11:06:44

Choice
Things to think about. Your poem makes the reader question themself, which is the sign of a very good poem. And that's exactly what this is.

The flow is good, fits perfectly for subject matter I think. You don't waste words, that's for sure. Each one gives more meaning to the verse.

Also, I particulary liked this line: "Insanity for the lack of anything better"

Good 'un.

Title article: Rookie, Chapter 16
Date: 2008-12-28 10:26:37

Rookie, Chapter 16
Yes, I agree with Jason. These chapters are just great. It's one of the better novels I've read in a while. Also, the whole part with Zeke and the Halloween pictures were pretty funny.

Man, it feels good to read this again. It's such a good story.

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Forum

Last 10 Forum Posts

Date	Subject	Category	Hits
01/07/2009 18:09:28	Shooting in California	Off-Topic	4
01/05/2009 20:03:28	Re:Sequel to the Nightmare Before Christmas?	Off-Topic	329
01/05/2009 08:50:02	Re:Sequel to the Nightmare Before Christmas?	Off-Topic	329
01/04/2009 10:47:10	Re:The Rookie	Off-Topic	219
01/04/2009 09:01:34	Re:Rant	Off-Topic	367
01/04/2009 09:00:48	Re:Sequel to the Nightmare Before Christmas?	Off-Topic	329
01/02/2009 00:19:06	Re:Rant	Off-Topic	367
12/31/2008 22:03:02	Welcome to 2009. Now get out! (or not)	Off-Topic	184
12/31/2008 16:55:59	Re:The Rookie	Off-Topic	219
12/31/2008 16:37:17	Re:The Rookie	Off-Topic	219

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Guestbook

Name	Entry
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)	Created On: 01/06/2009 13:29:30 Yeah I like it a lot. Some people I've pushed to it aren't as enthusiastic but you should give it a try. Its got Larry David the cocreator of Seinfield.
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)	Created On: 01/06/2009 13:11:33 lol You lazy bastard! Yeah I thought it had something to do with Cambell. Probably going to have to rent it next month. You ever watch Curb Your Enthusiasm?
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)	Created On: 01/06/2009 12:52:41 What's it about? Sounds slightly familiar...
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)	Created On: 01/02/2009 20:37:35 What a kooky comic. You have too much free time on your hands. I just bought a game boy advance SP today. I can now bring video games to work! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)	Created On: 01/01/2009 15:33:26 So is your liver still itching? Mine's screaming out in pain and agony. I might have to shut him up with some rum if he doesn't start acting right. In response to your 2009 theories I actually was at Obama's party last night and my car did in fact fly on my way home. Its a brave new world Max.
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)	Created On: 12/30/2008 19:30:44 My liver can't feel anything anymore. I suggest that you swallow a handful of thumb tacks and see how that does ya. If that doesn't work tape some razor blades to a strip of sandpaper and take orally.
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)	Created On: 12/30/2008 18:28:04 Fable II is awesome! Started playing it yesterday and just love it. I got drunk last night and ended up chopping wood for half an hour. Sounds boring right? Well I guess I already mentioned that I was drunk. So after all that I put in my GTA 4 disc and started playing when all of a sudden the xbox can't read it! AAAHHHHH!!!! It was only $20 more if I'd of bought it new too! Damn used games with their marketable lower prices. I just hope that cleaning the disc will bring the game back to me. If not.....I'll just have to play Fable II. Yep........so that was pointless!
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)	Created On: 12/28/2008 01:35:56 lol that sounds great. Poor Indy. They never should have made that movie.
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)	Created On: 12/28/2008 01:10:49 I consider it more of a sequel or a revamp than a remake. But yeah they are going crazy visiting and updating older franchises. If you ever got a hold of $10 you could get it yourself shit stick. Have you seen the new SouthPark where George Lucas and S.S. are raping Indiana Jones in movie parodies? My friend told me about it and now I really want to see it. Sounds hilarious.
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)	Created On: 12/28/2008 00:43:46 Where'd you put my sharks at you son of a bitch. I swear to God I'll kill you someday. I got the special edition of Serial Mom yesterday. So tastey. The new Friday the 13th is coming out in February I'm pretty sure. Should be entertaining. I mean. All you have to do is wear a mask and kill people. Bring it!