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Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Oct 9, 2008	Teddy	Horror	207
Oct 7, 2008	The Purple Beneath, Chapter 4	Mystery	131
Sep 27, 2008	The Purple Beneath, Chapter 3	Mystery	112
Sep 27, 2008	The Purple Beneath, Chapter 2	Mystery	127
Sep 24, 2008	They are the Dead	Poetry	310
Sep 22, 2008	The Purple Beneath, Chapter 1	Mystery	272
Sep 19, 2008	Jericho, Chapter 15	Miscellaneous Stories	180
Sep 10, 2008	Jericho, Chapter 14	Miscellaneous Stories	149
Sep 5, 2008	Jericho, Chapter 13	Miscellaneous Stories	144
Sep 4, 2008	Jericho, Chapter 12	Miscellaneous Stories	170
Sep 2, 2008	Jericho, Chapter 11	Miscellaneous Stories	149
Sep 1, 2008	Jericho, Chapter 10	Miscellaneous Stories	313
Aug 30, 2008	Jericho, Chapter 9	Miscellaneous Stories	175
Aug 27, 2008	Pretty Fly for a Russian Guy	Humor	1140
Aug 26, 2008	Jericho, Chapter 8	Miscellaneous Stories	171
Aug 25, 2008	Trained to Kill	Poetry	224
Aug 25, 2008	Jericho, Chapter 7	Miscellaneous Stories	173
Aug 22, 2008	Jericho, Chapter 6	Miscellaneous Stories	212
Aug 19, 2008	Jericho, Chapter 5	Miscellaneous Stories	194
Aug 16, 2008	Jericho, Chapter 4	Miscellaneous Stories	197

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Comments

Total number of comments: 1366

Title article: Through the Eyes of Death
Date: 2008-10-11 18:45:46

Through the Eyes of Death
I just love these types of stories -- the kind taking place in the Middle Ages and such -- and I wish there were more like this on here. Maybe I'll write one ... okay, that is besides the point. Your story is what we're talking about here. I thought it was written pretty well, and the choice of words was just awesome -- nice vocabulary! Like somebody else already said, though, maybe consider breaking it up into shorter paragraphs. It makes it easier to read on a computer screen. But it's your story really, so if you don't want to then no biggie. Great writing and an enjoyable story!

Title article: Her Magic Touch, Chapter 5
Date: 2008-10-11 18:11:50

Her Magic Touch, Chapter 5
You sly fox; the author commentary in this chapter (along with the rest of the story, of course) is absolutely hilarious. It is what practically makes your tale of magic touches and clever dialogue. Keep poppin' these out ... I'll keep readin' them. I'm quite curious just how exactly you plan on taking this, though.

Cheers!

Title article: To Become A Master
Date: 2008-10-11 15:33:47

To Become A Master
The lesson you teach in this is so true. The more the challenge, the more satisfied we are. We're human, after all, and we want people to be proud of us -- want to be proud of ourselves really. And a difficult task is much more fulfilling than a mediocre one.

But anyways ... I thought this story was pretty good. It's written well and has its entertainment. Pretty relatable actually.

As the topics Potter has already mentioned, this also has similarities to that excalibur tale, which is just plain awesome to have that in a story. I really liked the different way you presented the 'sword in the stone' emblem. Very creative.

My only critique, though, is in the beginning of your tale I think you may have used the word 'Master' a little too many times. It kind of makes it feel a little awkward.

But other than that I enjoyed your story quite some bit.

Cheers!

Title article: It's a Matter of Importance
Date: 2008-10-10 17:17:00

It's a Matter of Importance
Yeah, darcknyt pretty much expressed my thoughts on the story. It was definetly well worded ... way better than some of the shit porn posted on here by a couple people I could name, but they choose to remain anonymous (ha!). But yeah...good piece of flash fiction you have here. The story flowed quite well.

Title article: Feast Of Worms, Chapter 7
Date: 2008-10-10 05:34:12

Feast Of Worms (Final?), Chapter 7
Alright, dude ... you have to continue. I don't know how it's possible, but this could be so much more awesome than it already is. Yeah, I really like this chapter -- one of my favorites of the story, but there are so many possibilities you could spin this into. One that comes to mind is similar to this graphic novel, 30 Days of Night; the basic premise is a small group of survivals are trapped in this town, being held hostage by (in this case) sadistic eyeless Dobermans and strange humanoid worm type of creatures. I would definetly read each chapter...

Well, if you decide to end it here let me just say this was a really cool awesomely detailed story that I really enjoyed.

Congrats on a job well done, man.

Title article: The World Next Door
Date: 2008-10-09 19:44:18

The World Next Door
I have one word ... wow. I mean...well shit, just wow! I really wish I could write the review that this Poem deserves, but I wouldn't know where to start on this one. Literally every line was phenomenal. How long did this one take you? It seems so epic, but so short and unfolding at the same time. Now I'm in the mood to write a poem ... thanks. Oh yeah, not really sure how I helped with the title ... but oh well. Yer welcome.

Title article: Dank Pasta
Date: 2008-10-09 10:05:58

Dank Pasta
Yeah, wasn't too humorous but it did had it's amusing parts -- but it's okay since it's not under humor. I'm not really sure I want to know the outcome of the moldy sauce, do I?

Good 'adventure' story, it has some great descriptions as always. I enjoyed it, and that's all that matters, doesn't it?

Odd thing about pasta, all of it -- any kind -- always smells like bleach to me.

Title article: Palin Fever
Date: 2008-10-09 00:11:46

Palin Fever
Ha! Good stuff. These conversation pieces are awesome, and you always pull them off well. I almost suspected when he mentioned McCain that he would think John McClane from Die Hard.......I always get the two mixed up at least.

Title article: The Nag
Date: 2008-10-08 18:56:24

The Nag
Weird, it was silly, that's for sure. The details are amazing and the end is so silly, (especially the last line). I always love a story with a cannibal in it ... just ask somebody called Lemon, she'll tell ya ;)

Title article: Her Magic Touch, Chapter 4
Date: 2008-10-08 18:39:29

Her Magic Touch, Chapter 4
The whole story's kind of farfetched, but that what makes it funny to me. A little quirky. Anyways, you started sliding on this chapter, though. You're rushing, aren't you? Calm down and don't hurry the story. It'll finish itself when it's tired of being cut open. The stiches will heal at the right time. Just be careful. Anyways, of course this one had its funny moments, too. Just this is the least effective chapter. Still looking forward for the next installment, though.

Cheers!

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Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)	Created On: 10/08/2008 20:51:31 How its done, I will deny, unrepentant, everybodies girl, throw that world away, the ballad of vadge moore, one time only, pimp, the crusifixion is now, river city, over you, way out, we must have blood, deadly eye, I want you to die, Johnny on the spot, accelerator, production value, act like you know Download those.
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)	Created On: 10/08/2008 20:28:05 If that's true then I work a lot. So have you checked out the Dwarves yet chuckles?
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)	Created On: 10/08/2008 20:01:55 You want psychological thrillers? Go watch your parents wedding tape. I just submitted the first costume that popped into my head. Bunny rabbit with rabies. Yeah Memento was a good movie. I haven't watched that in years! It's funny, I tried not to drink today so I could get some sleep and what happens at 11 this morning? A friend of mine with a cast on his foot walks over to our house and bangs on the door until we wake up proclaiming it 'drinking time.' He bought the beer which was cool but when it came time for pizza I was throwing out money I don't even have. Which leaves me questioning, how do I get money that I don't even have?
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)	Created On: 10/08/2008 19:36:19 lol Is your picture from some kind of site where you can throw different shit on the base? I thought we had until the 9th for costumes......shit I have no idea still. Guess I better just pick something random. Good! Because that first sentence needed fixing! I felt insulted just reading it. You son of a bitch.
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)	Created On: 10/07/2008 19:50:48 I know I said that I was posting Palin Fever today but I keep getting distracted by my boss so I'm going to post it along with Dank Pasta tomorrow night. I'm just saying this because I'm bored and waiting for pilots. I know you don't care. Fuck you. P.S. I have banannas.
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)	Created On: 10/07/2008 15:35:17 You've asked me this before and the answer is yes, I've seen the Idiocracy. But not recently. As I've been living in depravity and obscurity not wanting to see the captivity that comes with Idiocracy. Yeah. Your moms a whore.
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)	Created On: 10/07/2008 15:09:30 Movie Magic. Maybe your mom is doing something naughty on the side that you don't know about........like getting some 'hot coffee.' She gave me some once. But it tasted aged and bitter. Maybe he's adding creamer to it. lol I'm such a pervert.
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)	Created On: 10/07/2008 14:51:07 Wow. That is extreme. I think I saw it fucking YEARS ago but I don't remember much about it. Maybe I'll rent it sometime. It's crazy the clerk at LSD (Lincoln Sound & Disc) gave us our last six movies free along with some used cds. Its cool getting free shit. Hey Max, give me a dollar.
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)	Created On: 10/07/2008 14:23:47 Yeah they kind of made me think of the dirty assholes in Toxic Avenger. It'll be so EXTREME you won't know what to do with your.....oh wait. No it won't. It'll just be two people talking......bummer.
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)	Created On: 10/07/2008 14:10:45 Yeah its a conversation piece. lol Epic? I'm not to sure about that. I do know though that it'll be EXTREME!!!