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Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)
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About Myself: FREAKY!

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DateTitleCategoryHits
Jul 20, 20081961Horror 680
Jul 12, 2008A Poetic ResponsePoetry 342
Dec 17, 2007DOGHorror 770
Jun 25, 2008Drunk as a SkunkHumor 663
May 8, 2008Fairy Tales From Hell Presents: Hansel and GretelHorror 736
May 9, 2008Fairy Tales From Hell Presents: RumpelstiltskinHorror 462
May 11, 2008Fairy Tales From Hell Presents: The Three Little PigsHorror 410
Jul 13, 2008FrustrationPoetry 218
May 27, 2008HitchhikingHumor 288
Aug 11, 2008Jericho, Chapter 0Miscellaneous Stories 481
Aug 12, 2008Jericho, Chapter 1Miscellaneous Stories 422
Sep 1, 2008Jericho, Chapter 10Miscellaneous Stories 310
Sep 2, 2008Jericho, Chapter 11Miscellaneous Stories 146
Sep 4, 2008Jericho, Chapter 12Miscellaneous Stories 164
Sep 5, 2008Jericho, Chapter 13Miscellaneous Stories 134
Sep 10, 2008Jericho, Chapter 14Miscellaneous Stories 139
Sep 19, 2008Jericho, Chapter 15Miscellaneous Stories 154
Aug 13, 2008Jericho, Chapter 2Miscellaneous Stories 230
Aug 14, 2008Jericho, Chapter 3Miscellaneous Stories 223
Aug 16, 2008Jericho, Chapter 4Miscellaneous Stories 193
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Total number of comments: 1345

Title article: Feast Of Worms, Chapter 4
Date: 2008-10-06 11:38:55
Feast Of Worms, Chapter 4
As Scooby said, this was slightly comical -- but a very understandable realistic stream of consciencness.  
 
I'm kind of bummed that this chapter was so short, too.  
 
I wanted some of those terrific detials describing the leg amputation. That would have been pretty sweet -- but, I suppose not saying it can be more horrifying then just being blunt about it, right?  
 
Good stuff, nonetheless. I'm really digging this story. 
 
I'm wondering just exactly who this dark dude is, and why is he terrorizing Samuel of all people. I need to read more.  
 
I have to ask you one thing, though. 
 
When is the next chapter coming out?

Title article: Feast Of Worms, Chapter 3
Date: 2008-10-06 11:27:12
Feast Of Worms, Chapter 3
Damnit, I was going to quote the first paragraph, but it looks like Synchronicity beat me to the punch. But yeah, dude....that was an AMAZING description. It blew me away. Truely marvelous. 
 
That phone call scene was pretty intense, too. I could feel Samuel begging for his wife to stay put. Crying even. 
 
And the last part with the maggots on his ankle made me squirm. A little off topic, but the other day I saw this show, 'true ER tales', on TV, and this one homeless guy came in and his ankle all the way to the bottom of his knee was literally covered in maggots. It was pretty disgusting, but also really cool looking.  
 
Alright! I've babbled on long enough. Time to read the next chapter ...

Title article: Feast Of Worms, Chapter 2
Date: 2008-10-06 11:08:25
Feast Of Worms, Chapter 2
I had to take a double take at the end there, with the part of the worm-socketed Doberman. Very orginal and creepy.  
 
I'm really digging this story, man. It's by far my favorite one by you. These descriptions are beyond amazing. This has the marks of a true professional.  
 
I'm really excited to find out what is going to happen next.  
 
This 'dark man' is also pretty cool and ominous. I like the way you portrayed him -- very easy to visualize.  
 
Okay, onto the next ...

Title article: Feast Of Worms, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-10-06 10:47:42
Feast Of Worms, Chapter 1
Well, I have to agree with the other commenters. These descriptions are without a doubt phenomenal. I could literally picture everything you wrote. It was as if I was Samuel and the story was being played out right in front of my eyes.  
 
By the way, the title you have chosen is really cool.  
 
Also, I like how you start this off a tiny bit slow, getting to know the character a little bit, but you gave a vauge hint of the trouble that probably awaits our main character. The shadows. What could they be? Super fast giant worms? Probably not...but hey, this is fiction. There are no rules here. 
 
Anxiously onto the next chapter ...

Title article: Through
Date: 2008-10-05 09:26:31
Through
Maybe it's because I'm really into the guitar lately, but I could see this as a song. The whole time reading this I was tapping my foot against the carpet and slowly rocking my head back and forth, quietly singing the poem. Not much into the whole romance scene, though, but I can dig this 'un, cause it as a deeper meaning than just the boring cliche Hollywood romances. Good stuff indeed, 'Anna.  
 
As the Romans say, keep on keepin' on. (It was the Romans who said that, right? Oh, I'm so confused.) 
 
Cheers!

Title article: Attack of the Networked Wireless Plans!
Date: 2008-10-05 05:29:55
Attack of the Networked Wireless Plans!
Great satire! 
 
Loved almost every moment of it, held a smile throughout. At first, though, I thought this was going to be a little TOO MUCH like Stephen King's Cell, but it ended up being quite humorous and distinct in it's own way. I think this is pretty funny, man. There were a lot of things I laughed at, some being the 'taking-a-phone-call-during- sex part' and the ending 'it's for you' line. All of it, really, was HIGHLY entertaining. I think your writing here is very clean and professional, which makes me want to read more of your work. So, that's what I'm probably going to be reading today. I hope your other writing is in this sort of style, cause it's pretty good. Also, great story. 
 
Cheers!

Title article: Ashes To Ashes
Date: 2008-10-05 01:32:26
Ashes To Ashes
Damnit, read this one before too. What are you trying to do to me, David??  
 
Anyways, this was a great story before and a terrific story now that you have rewrote it. As the first time I read it, though, I sort of wished there was more to it, cause I was really getting into the story and then -- over. But, I suppose the way you ended it was perfect -- just perhaps missing something. Not sure what, though. 
 
Good 'un, Sir Mugwump. 
 
Cheers!

Title article: There Is Only One Star - It Ends At The Beginning
Date: 2008-10-03 20:19:33
There Is Only One Star
Fantastic story, Sir Mugwump! 
 
Loved it on the first read and loved it even more the second time around.  
 
Truely a magnificant piece of literature that everybody should read at least once.  
 
It has the signs of a real classic. 
 
Cheers! 
 
(btw i'm still waiting for Pugswallow 2! i know, i know...don't rush a masterpiece......but i'm beginning to grow impatient!"

Title article: Misery
Date: 2008-10-03 20:14:21
Misery
You know something, this would be a kickass song. Something maybe Metallica would play. I can seriously hear it playing out in my head, now i'm going to go sing that with the guitar. That's right, I'm stealing your poem for my own selfish deeds. I'll send you ten percent of all profits i make. Thanks! 
 
oh yeah, i agree with others about expansion.  
 
Let's hope next week is better, eh? Because you know .... I can't keep hugging my laptop. People are going to start to talk......

Title article: Resurgence
Date: 2008-10-02 20:03:56
Resurgence
"as the sea and sky continue to deny one another"--thought provoking line, 'Anna.  
 
This poem is very easy to visualize; you've painted quite the detailed picture. Also, good job with the second to last stanza. There's something about it that i really like. I don't know, maybe it's because I think the word 'alas' should be in every poem. I do not know.  
 
Anyways, good poem full of great lines, such as "just the beautiful unity of elementals". Great stuff for sure.  
 
Glad to read another magnificant poem by you. I'm already jonesing for my next Polly-etic fix. 
 
Cheers!

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Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 10/06/2008 07:03:18
Yeah well I'll just have to point our your pathetic........uuuuhhhhh face! Yes I covered that up nicely....

I submitted my name but it didn't work for me. I guess nobody wants to name me....

This new girl needs to get here so I can go home! Damn her ass kissing selfish attitude who doesn't care what other people try to do to save her job despite the illegality of murder and oh/ are you still here?

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 10/06/2008 06:49:36
Edited By Jason Haugh (Something Indecent) On: 10/06/2008 06:51:10
Oh come on! She's getting a bit ripe but you know she was a freak in college. I'm totally going to do this piece tomorrow so fuck your Peggy Hill bullshit.

I wanna carve a Z in your forehead.

Check out the Dwarves!!! Why can't you just do what I tell you to WHEN I tell you to. I swear, you and the rest of the world just need to listen to me. I am the answer. And not at all conceited or disillusioned with self importance.

A spider huh? I got nothing. You've been marked by the Indiana Insect. They're coming for you Barbara.....
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 10/06/2008 06:32:43
Kind of makes me think of.......Freaky! Outtie! Freaky! Outtie!

You gotta check out that band man. I can't believe I haven't recommended them to you yet.

On a side note I'd totally have sex with Palin. I'm almost tempted to make a conversation piece tomorrow about it. Damn Alaska temptations.....
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 10/06/2008 06:11:37
lol Everybody can play Smoke on the Water! But that's cool that you're picking up the guitar. Cheeky Fucker huh? What are you, English? Go play me some Dwarves. You've heard of them right? If not as your attorney I'd advise you to download 'The Crusifixtion Is now' and 'Fuck the World I Will Deny You' Great band. Excellent seafood.
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 10/06/2008 05:48:31
You've been busy with dick lately! Oh I'm so clever.

Okay so this lady in her 60's just came up to ask me a question and almost literally poured out her soul to me. I'm not joking. She told me about her battle with depression, her husband retiring and taking a side job leaving her by herself and lonely, and then we went on to talk about Boulder Colorado. Fucking crazy! The whole time I'm just clenching my toes and digging my finger under the desk. It was weird. Busy with dick hahahahahahaha!!!! And yes I'm still drunk. But no I'm not. If anybody asks.

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 10/06/2008 05:16:56
No I'm still with that tramp. I swear she's going to give me a disease and start demanding child support.

Couldn't find Meat Train or whatever at the video store. Bummer. I don't feel good. I think I need to start taking care of my body before it takes care of me........whatever that means.

So did you check out Demoni or Suspiria yet? Huh? Huh?

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 10/06/2008 02:59:21
lol that's what you get for making a story with colors!!! How dare you sir.

I'm gonna go lay down.......
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 10/05/2008 02:23:42
Alright well I'm gonna go finish some shit up and take off. Have fun scratchin yourself with Italian Demons and witches. I'll be back on Monday or something. I've got some other movies you might want to check out. Later dude.
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 10/05/2008 02:14:21
Yeah I thought you'd like that. I have both of them on DVD. Fuckin sweet.
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 10/05/2008 02:10:27
Scratch that. Dario Argento wrote and produced Demons but didn't direct.
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