The Cosmonaut Avenger

Omar trudged through a purplish gold galaxy, slapping...

But Did He?

He said that he wanted her But did he?...

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DateTitleCategoryHits
Sep 27, 2008The Purple Beneath, Chapter 3Mystery 83
Sep 27, 2008The Purple Beneath, Chapter 2Mystery 116
Sep 24, 2008They are the DeadPoetry 296
Sep 22, 2008The Purple Beneath, Chapter 1Mystery 253
Sep 19, 2008Jericho, Chapter 15Miscellaneous Stories 154
Sep 10, 2008Jericho, Chapter 14Miscellaneous Stories 139
Sep 5, 2008Jericho, Chapter 13Miscellaneous Stories 134
Sep 4, 2008Jericho, Chapter 12Miscellaneous Stories 165
Sep 2, 2008Jericho, Chapter 11Miscellaneous Stories 146
Sep 1, 2008Jericho, Chapter 10Miscellaneous Stories 310
Aug 30, 2008Jericho, Chapter 9Miscellaneous Stories 171
Aug 27, 2008Pretty Fly for a Russian GuyHumor 1122
Aug 26, 2008Jericho, Chapter 8Miscellaneous Stories 164
Aug 25, 2008Trained to KillPoetry 210
Aug 25, 2008Jericho, Chapter 7Miscellaneous Stories 169
Aug 22, 2008Jericho, Chapter 6Miscellaneous Stories 205
Aug 19, 2008Jericho, Chapter 5Miscellaneous Stories 188
Aug 16, 2008Jericho, Chapter 4Miscellaneous Stories 193
Aug 14, 2008Jericho, Chapter 3Miscellaneous Stories 223
Aug 13, 2008Suburban HellMystery 338
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Title article: Jason Richard Wright: Morgan
Date: 2008-10-01 07:23:15
Morgan
I like this story -- just like the previous one. It definetly has its hints of mystery, and they're written extremely well. Good dialogue, BELIEVABLE dialogue. At first when the narrator kepte repeating Jason's entire name I found that annoying, but I'm already grown to the whole name, so anything else wouldn't seem right. Although, I must admit ... something seems missing in these stories. Not quite sure what it is, but something's off. Oh well ... off to the next.

Title article: Jason Richard Wright: Cassie
Date: 2008-10-01 07:09:42
Cassie
Little bit confused at the end there. Did he kill her? Rape her? Both? I guess that's why it's in the mystery category, though, right? But, there are more of these, aren't there. Oh yes, well, now I have to read on to find out what happens, don't I? I believe I do.

Title article: Blind Faith - Conclusion, Chapter 4
Date: 2008-10-01 06:56:32
Blind Faith, Chapter 4
Now, to me, the ending was sort of a let down. I'm not talking about the happy hospital scene -- I'm talking about the chase. Just a 'poor unfortunate individual'? Really? Man, I don't know ... I was expecting some kind of final showdown between Brian and Michael, but that could just be me overthinking everything -- I tend to do that alot. Anywhoo.......great story, Phil! As always, the story was very entertaining and has the markings of a true professional. Looking forward for more series from you (hopefully some more Marks). Keep these great stories up, man. 
 
Cheers!

Title article: Blind Faith, Chapter 3
Date: 2008-10-01 06:45:31
Blind Faith, Chapter 3
I gotta say, I'm enjoying this Michael Benson character to some extent. He's a regular ole, stereotypical wiseguy. I'm left wondering what exactly you have pulled up your sleeve for the conclusion. Obviously you'll have to explain what exactly happened to Mrs. Drake ... but who knows what you'll cookin' in that devious mind of yours. On to the finale .........

Title article: Blind Faith, Chapter 2
Date: 2008-10-01 06:25:17
Blind Faith, Chapter 2
Ooooh, the plot thickens, eh? Good stuff for sure. Sort of reminds me of that Kevin Bacon movie, "Death Sentence". Pretty good movie, you should check it out. 
 
Also, the two officers in the beginning of this chapter must dislike their jobs. Imagine, everybody they come across, "Hello, we're Nottinghamsire Constabulary." That has to be a pain to say all day I bet. 
 
I'm left amazed at your skill as I anxiously click on the 'next chapter' link. Moving on ..........

Title article: Blind Faith, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-10-01 06:07:08
Blind Faith, Chapter 1
You know, there are too many comments too read, so I'm skipping them. Hope I don't repeat someting another commenter has already said........... 
 
Anyways, you've got me hooked once again, man. Very interesting and VERY entertaining. I'm always fond how you can store so much information in each paragraph and not make it seem rushed. Also, is 999 the same as 911? 
 
On to the next for me.......

Title article: A Dish Served Cold
Date: 2008-09-30 01:47:42
A Dish Served Cold
Nice piece of revenge you have here, Phil. Greatly written and I was hooked the whole way through. Like another commenter has already stated, I thought the ending line was classic. Very cool sounding. Keep these stories up. 
 
Cheers!

Title article: Marks On the Wall
Date: 2008-09-30 01:20:37
Marks On the Wall
Yes, your mystery stories do have resemblences to CSI, and that's why I love reading your work. This one was no exception. Nice quick story of murder and invesigation. As always, it was written with extreme talent and it shows heavily. No wonder you're getting published ... 
 
Cheers!

Title article: Oh my God Brian what did you do to your dog?
Date: 2008-09-29 21:52:25

i have never heard the name biz quick till this story. nonetheless for the name of a dog. i feel smarter.

Title article: Improbable Improv. Take #
Date: 2008-09-29 21:47:06

Great picture to go along with a great story. another one you just have to listen to on audio. especially the whole FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK part.

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Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

Created On: 10/06/2008 07:03:18

Yeah well I'll just have to point our your pathetic........uuuuhhhhh face! Yes I covered that up nicely....

I submitted my name but it didn't work for me. I guess nobody wants to name me....

This new girl needs to get here so I can go home! Damn her ass kissing selfish attitude who doesn't care what other people try to do to save her job despite the illegality of murder and oh/ are you still here?

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

Created On: 10/06/2008 06:49:36
Edited By Jason Haugh (Something Indecent) On: 10/06/2008 06:51:10


Oh come on! She's getting a bit ripe but you know she was a freak in college. I'm totally going to do this piece tomorrow so fuck your Peggy Hill bullshit.

I wanna carve a Z in your forehead.

Check out the Dwarves!!! Why can't you just do what I tell you to WHEN I tell you to. I swear, you and the rest of the world just need to listen to me. I am the answer. And not at all conceited or disillusioned with self importance.

A spider huh? I got nothing. You've been marked by the Indiana Insect. They're coming for you Barbara.....

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

Created On: 10/06/2008 06:32:43

Kind of makes me think of.......Freaky! Outtie! Freaky! Outtie!

You gotta check out that band man. I can't believe I haven't recommended them to you yet.

On a side note I'd totally have sex with Palin. I'm almost tempted to make a conversation piece tomorrow about it. Damn Alaska temptations.....

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

Created On: 10/06/2008 06:11:37

lol Everybody can play Smoke on the Water! But that's cool that you're picking up the guitar. Cheeky Fucker huh? What are you, English? Go play me some Dwarves. You've heard of them right? If not as your attorney I'd advise you to download 'The Crusifixtion Is now' and 'Fuck the World I Will Deny You' Great band. Excellent seafood.

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

Created On: 10/06/2008 05:48:31

You've been busy with dick lately! Oh I'm so clever.

Okay so this lady in her 60's just came up to ask me a question and almost literally poured out her soul to me. I'm not joking. She told me about her battle with depression, her husband retiring and taking a side job leaving her by herself and lonely, and then we went on to talk about Boulder Colorado. Fucking crazy! The whole time I'm just clenching my toes and digging my finger under the desk. It was weird. Busy with dick hahahahahahaha!!!! And yes I'm still drunk. But no I'm not. If anybody asks.

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

Created On: 10/06/2008 05:16:56

No I'm still with that tramp. I swear she's going to give me a disease and start demanding child support.

Couldn't find Meat Train or whatever at the video store. Bummer. I don't feel good. I think I need to start taking care of my body before it takes care of me........whatever that means.

So did you check out Demoni or Suspiria yet? Huh? Huh?

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

Created On: 10/06/2008 02:59:21

lol that's what you get for making a story with colors!!! How dare you sir.

I'm gonna go lay down.......

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

Created On: 10/05/2008 02:23:42

Alright well I'm gonna go finish some shit up and take off. Have fun scratchin yourself with Italian Demons and witches. I'll be back on Monday or something. I've got some other movies you might want to check out. Later dude.

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

Created On: 10/05/2008 02:14:21

Yeah I thought you'd like that. I have both of them on DVD. Fuckin sweet.

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

Created On: 10/05/2008 02:10:27

Scratch that. Dario Argento wrote and produced Demons but didn't direct.

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