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Member Since	10/04/2007
Last Online	10/11/2008
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Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Oct 9, 2008	Teddy	Horror	177
Oct 7, 2008	The Purple Beneath, Chapter 4	Mystery	129
Sep 27, 2008	The Purple Beneath, Chapter 3	Mystery	111
Sep 27, 2008	The Purple Beneath, Chapter 2	Mystery	127
Sep 24, 2008	They are the Dead	Poetry	307
Sep 22, 2008	The Purple Beneath, Chapter 1	Mystery	272
Sep 19, 2008	Jericho, Chapter 15	Miscellaneous Stories	177
Sep 10, 2008	Jericho, Chapter 14	Miscellaneous Stories	148
Sep 5, 2008	Jericho, Chapter 13	Miscellaneous Stories	142
Sep 4, 2008	Jericho, Chapter 12	Miscellaneous Stories	170
Sep 2, 2008	Jericho, Chapter 11	Miscellaneous Stories	148
Sep 1, 2008	Jericho, Chapter 10	Miscellaneous Stories	312
Aug 30, 2008	Jericho, Chapter 9	Miscellaneous Stories	173
Aug 27, 2008	Pretty Fly for a Russian Guy	Humor	1139
Aug 26, 2008	Jericho, Chapter 8	Miscellaneous Stories	171
Aug 25, 2008	Trained to Kill	Poetry	222
Aug 25, 2008	Jericho, Chapter 7	Miscellaneous Stories	173
Aug 22, 2008	Jericho, Chapter 6	Miscellaneous Stories	212
Aug 19, 2008	Jericho, Chapter 5	Miscellaneous Stories	191
Aug 16, 2008	Jericho, Chapter 4	Miscellaneous Stories	196

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Comments

Total number of comments: 1363

Title article: It's a Matter of Importance
Date: 2008-10-10 17:17:00

It's a Matter of Importance
Yeah, darcknyt pretty much expressed my thoughts on the story. It was definetly well worded ... way better than some of the shit porn posted on here by a couple people I could name, but they choose to remain anonymous (ha!). But yeah...good piece of flash fiction you have here. The story flowed quite well.

Title article: Feast Of Worms, Chapter 7
Date: 2008-10-10 05:34:12

Feast Of Worms (Final?), Chapter 7
Alright, dude ... you have to continue. I don't know how it's possible, but this could be so much more awesome than it already is. Yeah, I really like this chapter -- one of my favorites of the story, but there are so many possibilities you could spin this into. One that comes to mind is similar to this graphic novel, 30 Days of Night; the basic premise is a small group of survivals are trapped in this town, being held hostage by (in this case) sadistic eyeless Dobermans and strange humanoid worm type of creatures. I would definetly read each chapter...

Well, if you decide to end it here let me just say this was a really cool awesomely detailed story that I really enjoyed.

Congrats on a job well done, man.

Title article: The World Next Door
Date: 2008-10-09 19:44:18

The World Next Door
I have one word ... wow. I mean...well shit, just wow! I really wish I could write the review that this Poem deserves, but I wouldn't know where to start on this one. Literally every line was phenomenal. How long did this one take you? It seems so epic, but so short and unfolding at the same time. Now I'm in the mood to write a poem ... thanks. Oh yeah, not really sure how I helped with the title ... but oh well. Yer welcome.

Title article: Dank Pasta
Date: 2008-10-09 10:05:58

Dank Pasta
Yeah, wasn't too humorous but it did had it's amusing parts -- but it's okay since it's not under humor. I'm not really sure I want to know the outcome of the moldy sauce, do I?

Good 'adventure' story, it has some great descriptions as always. I enjoyed it, and that's all that matters, doesn't it?

Odd thing about pasta, all of it -- any kind -- always smells like bleach to me.

Title article: Palin Fever
Date: 2008-10-09 00:11:46

Palin Fever
Ha! Good stuff. These conversation pieces are awesome, and you always pull them off well. I almost suspected when he mentioned McCain that he would think John McClane from Die Hard.......I always get the two mixed up at least.

Title article: The Nag
Date: 2008-10-08 18:56:24

The Nag
Weird, it was silly, that's for sure. The details are amazing and the end is so silly, (especially the last line). I always love a story with a cannibal in it ... just ask somebody called Lemon, she'll tell ya ;)

Title article: Her Magic Touch, Chapter 4
Date: 2008-10-08 18:39:29

Her Magic Touch, Chapter 4
The whole story's kind of farfetched, but that what makes it funny to me. A little quirky. Anyways, you started sliding on this chapter, though. You're rushing, aren't you? Calm down and don't hurry the story. It'll finish itself when it's tired of being cut open. The stiches will heal at the right time. Just be careful. Anyways, of course this one had its funny moments, too. Just this is the least effective chapter. Still looking forward for the next installment, though.

Cheers!

Title article: Hanging Tree
Date: 2008-10-08 11:53:36

Hanging Tree
Awesome story, loved the descriptions and the originality. Will definetly be reading more of your stories later on -- I'm hoping they're as good as the two I've already read (grizzled old warrior being my favorite). Well, kudos on some great writing.

Title article: Her Magic Touch, Chapter 3
Date: 2008-10-08 11:47:03

Her Magic Touch, Chapter 3
I'm still hooked. Where are you taking this? Will there be more? Because it could end right here if you chose to, but I hope you don't. Also, I was kind of expecting him to buy her a car -- good job giving that hint in one of the previous chapters. Well ... I'm waiting to read more.

Cheers!

Title article: Grizzled Old Warrior
Date: 2008-10-08 11:39:37

Grizzled Old Warrior
Wow! This is really good, man. And yeah, this is the first western I've read on this site, and your pulled it off so well. So easy to read, awesome descriptions, and a nice western vocabulary. You definetly got me wanting to read more from you, because I REALLY enjoyed this one. You also got me in the mood to write ... but I think I'll read another one of yours first. Good word indeed.

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Guestbook

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Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)	Created On: 10/10/2008 20:30:50 Hey if you could e-mail me that prologue outside of the attachment that'd be greaaaaat. Thanks a bunch Milton.
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)	Created On: 10/09/2008 02:48:10 HA! For once YOUR internet sucks. Or computer. Whatever. I'm ruining my own moment. Later.
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)	Created On: 10/09/2008 02:14:25 I don't think it's that funny but its a nonfiction piece. I don't know. I think I'll post it before I get off so I don't have to retype it. Then later today I'll work on sharpening it. Haven't you been writing that thing all night? Aren't you done yet addict? You're slacking. I'll have to give it a read during my 9 1/2 hour shift.
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)	Created On: 10/09/2008 01:47:06 Yeah it's totally going to be a rape van. Take out the back seat, put in some bonds and a gag, and tint the windows. Nobody would be the wiser. Oh come on Max I know you like N'Sync. You practice the dances when nobody's in the room don't you?
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)	Created On: 10/09/2008 01:31:24 They're going slow. We haven't done 'em in a while. I should make it a point to do it this weekend. Dan's getting a minivan on saturday. We're gonna beat the shit out of that ride! Let me guess. You're listening to........N'Sync? Oh I love those guys.
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)	Created On: 10/09/2008 01:10:16 Oh I've had her for 10 years. I took her to a school dance and got our picture in the yearbook. I got in a fight and the cops showed up so I had to do community service. I chose Salvation Army and when our eyes made contact I was hers. And for $17.86 she was mine.
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)	Created On: 10/09/2008 00:54:50 lol I took my mannequin to the mall when i was younger and the security gaurd thought I was stealing it from a store. He gave me an even weirder look when I told him she was mine and we were going for a walk. God I love how brutal Metalacolypse is.
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)	Created On: 10/09/2008 00:30:27 You can go and play in the lobby with the night clerk. I'm sure they'd love to sit and listen to you. No robot sex!? Man what a jip. If dolls can come alive then robots can have sex. I can't wait for morning either when I can finally crawl in bed with my mannequin and.........sleep.
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)	Created On: 10/09/2008 00:14:50 Psh. Childs Play. Is it horror or what? Doll coming alive? Robot sex? What's going on?
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)	Created On: 10/08/2008 23:59:32 Oh yeah I forgot you were going to do different monsters and shit. That's cool. It's only 2 and a half pages but I didn't break anything into paragraphs so its just a big clump of words. Almost done with the first page. They put out a dvd a couple years ago and the I think the singer smoked too much crack or something. In between songs all he says is 'yeah.' Fucking weird dudes.