J. Grimm (J. Grimm)
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Created On: 02/24/2008 23:42:49  
Hey. What's the deal? I just read your story along with all of the comments and I'm curious as to why you haven't published anymore.
I thought it was a neat little story. It was fun to read.
Who gives a shit what others say about "story structure" and crap like that?! Those are just pompous assholes who hope other people will find them intelligent by using phrases like that.
What you did was give us a brief look into the mind of a man who died and doesn't know it. BAM! It's that simple! If the pompous assholes discouraged you, shame on you! Keep pushing on. I've read countless stories on this site... some by the very people who criticize and even they put out a number of stinkers.
I'd like to see you post more just to see how you've progressed in your story telling abilities.
KEEP ON WRITING!
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Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)
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Created On: 10/16/2007 12:35:21
Edited By Elephant (Yahaira Nunez) On: 10/16/2007 12:35:46
I hope you've gotten a chance to read the last part to Tomo's Guns.
Take care.
Feedback from Tommy Lee (Yfcomp): I sure did! That was great.
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