Layers of Innocence

"Emergency, which service do you require...

Lord Have Mercy #1+2

Chapter 1 The year was 2003, the country was killing...
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Crystal Weaver (Halios)
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Member Since 11/17/2008
Last Online 12/31/2008
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About Myself: I've loved writing since I was young. I have had several poems published in anthologies, but nothing else. For the last few years I seem to have lost my stream of ideas, so I haven't written much. My husband, Nathan Weaver, is also on StoriesVille, and he has encouraged me to get on here and finish some projects I've started.

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Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Nov 18, 2008Love For TomorrowPoetry 99
Nov 17, 2008The Wanderer (unfinished)-updated 11/18, 7:30pm CentralAdventure 99

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Total number of comments: 8

Title article: You, as I see It, Chapter 3
Date: 2008-11-19 10:06:37
hmm
A bit harder to read than the first two. The older brother incident was the hardest part to gather what was going on. But overall not too bad. Keep it up.

Title article: For as you judge, you will be judged
Date: 2008-11-18 20:27:29

Beautifully written. I just had to check out some of your work since my husband (Nathan Weaver) seems to like it so much. The flow of this was almost like music, like a dance. Excellent job. Definitely puts things in perspective.

Title article: The Crystal Ship
Date: 2008-11-18 20:14:30

Great story. I'm not sure what else to say about it. Nice job. I couldn't quit reading it...very easy to get wrapped up in. It would be a neat one to develop into a longer story.

Title article: You as I see It, Chapter 2
Date: 2008-11-18 16:01:54
Strange, but in a good way
A nice followup from the previous chapter. Smooth, easy to read flow. Very creative to have a story about nothing, but yet about everything. It's pretty trippy.

Title article: You, as I see It, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-11-18 15:55:45
Interesting...
This would be a great audition monologue. Not sure if that's what you intended or not. Nice little concise bits of wisdom. Some of it really makes you think.

Title article: Obsession, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-11-18 15:14:30
I'm hooked
I can't wait to read more! The story itself and the vivid descriptions really pulled me in. Twisted, of course, but I really like it and look forward to reading more.

Title article: The Westerner
Date: 2008-11-18 14:54:23
Not too shabby
Not too bad. Good story, but you may want to scan back through and correct some typos. Other than that, there were a few sentences that were a bit hard to read...I'm not sure if the tense switching is intentional or not. If it is, that's fine. Great job!

Title article: My Own Land
Date: 2008-11-18 14:46:17
Very nice
This has a really good flow to it. It has a very warm story-teller feel.

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J. Dane Tyler (DarcKnyt)

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 Created On: 11/18/2008 08:36:49
Welcome to StoriesVille, Crystal. I'm looking forward to seeing more of your work. What I've read so far has been amazing.

Enjoy.

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