There Is Only One Star, Chapter 3

That was a little less than three years ago; yet it...

The Beast and the Wicked Witch

tale as old as time true as it can be She turn...

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About Myself: Hangman.


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DateTitleCategoryHits
Aug 12, 2008Social Retard-Nation, Chapter 2Miscellaneous Stories 53
Jul 25, 2008Social Retard-Nation, Chapter 1Miscellaneous Stories 162
May 13, 2008Do You Love Me Still?Poetry 426
Apr 29, 2008Nutty AbbotPoetry 339
Mar 6, 2008InsideMiscellaneous Stories 382
Jan 25, 2008InsanePoetry 1371

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Title article: Smoke, Steel, and Innuendo
Date: 2008-05-01 08:43:46

A gun is most commonly used 
as a phallic symbol... I sort of  
have that impregnated in my 
mind... it was a good attempt, I'll  
give you that.

Title article: By Myself
Date: 2008-04-30 15:16:20

Damn, 'bout 5 minutes to type this up?? 
Loony O.o 
That is fast. 
This actually helps me understand  
the reason behind why some people 
immediately assume they are being 
targeted or attacked. 
 
Impressive how you can channel 
emotion into poetry so quickly!

Title article: Nutty Abbot
Date: 2008-04-29 19:27:18

Wait whaaat??? 
Get out! Ha^^.

Title article: For the Teacher
Date: 2008-04-29 13:45:20
Very good!
Wow (subject is a bit fluffy but wow). 
 
I really liked this poem (the pattern, everything in general). It's extremely well written and thought out. I really like teachers too^^. They can have a very strong impact on their students, and seeing their students gradually mold into good adults (with what they've learned from their teacher) is quite rewarding.

Title article: Prologue
Date: 2008-04-28 12:41:53
Great Job!
Ahh, I'm all hyped up! 
Great prologue. 
I could of sworn I heard a deep manly voice reading this out loud.

Title article: Youtopia, Ch. 12
Date: 2008-04-28 12:22:31

Haha, I thought this was funny, "She sighs, and struggles to keep her eyes level with mine. 'How...um, how are you?'" 
 
I love your similes and metaphors; they're always so different, and they help me get the picture. I didn't feel like reading inside this genre today (romance, drama), but I did it just to read your tweaked up word gluing. Ahh, I am satisfied, yet again! 
 
Love you Sneh!

Title article: ...And She Dreams Of A Better Man....
Date: 2008-04-28 11:21:39

Ha, oh man, I have been in almost her exact position... had me reminiscing... 
 
Liked how you paired up narrative and poetry... this was nice. Good job.

Title article: Just Like Her
Date: 2008-04-28 10:44:28

This I think, was intentionally made to be paired with Egoist's "Incredible."

Title article: You Create
Date: 2008-04-25 17:56:00

Ah, crud, I was going to go with that, but I second thought it. I was close though^^, keep up the good work!

Title article: Alcohol
Date: 2008-04-25 14:03:37
Very good!
This flowed very nicely... the rhythmic pattern, I mean. 
 
As seen through the eyes of a loving/worried spectator... I can also relate. It's very difficult to get rid of an addiction, especially one like this one; it's not only emotionally/mentally challenging, it is also physically straining and painful (it's not like they can go cold turkey y'know)... I try to be understanding, but there's only so much 'understanding' I can give until it becomes enabling... so I liked what this line conveyed,  
 
"I've done what I can, I've nothing left to say 
 
It's in her hands now, she needs to find her own way" 
 
Ah, one can only do so much, they must pull in some initiative as well. 
 
Hopefully things will turn out how you'd like them to.

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jesse (jesse2008)

JUTTA TIME!
Created On: 08/03/2008 20:21:23

EKK, IT'S JUTTA, RUN! or as I like to call her Cell. Cell Motrin?

Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

Created On: 07/20/2008 07:45:29

Call me a spaz, do you. While you sport old lady glasses, you call me a spaz? While you toss verbal garbage at the king, you call me a spaz?

Well.
I like the glasses, anyway. Watch yo mouf.

Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

tied up and gagged in someone's basement!
Created On: 07/05/2008 23:43:04
Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 07/06/2008 14:54:17


ahhh, you're red! red scares me because red reminds me of blood, which reminds me of revenge, which reminds me of christmas, which reminds me of serial killing hippies! who are you? who am I? i need to know these questions or i'm going to go insane...oopps, too late.

I was going through my comments and i wanted to thank you for reading and leaving such good comment on my story, Dog.

so, umm ... thanks


jesse (jesse2008)

How rude of me
Created On: 07/05/2008 20:23:06

I should have signed your Profile Book, well I did it. YAY! You keep on writing Cell, yes I am calling you by your old name. Question where did that name come from, I know it's not from DBZ.
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): ^^"cell" came from those itty bitty microscopic things.. the ones with a nucleus... i dunno, i like the sound of what makes up a cell, and the fact that a cell is the basic structural unit of all organisms.
thank you for signing my profile book^^.


Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

Created On: 06/18/2008 07:47:59

You forgot to add fanny pack to your about me.
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): No, I dumped you just a few days ago... don't you remember? It was for a coin purse.

Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

Created On: 06/13/2008 12:50:17


BATGIRL.
FANNYPACK.
CHOOSE ONE. OR BOTH.

Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): eh, i refuse to take this multiple-choice test.
it is bias.


Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

Cali.
Created On: 06/12/2008 14:35:47

>>>>>>>>>>>CELL wrote (RE):
>>>>>>>>>>>>Yes, I'd love to be your fanny pack. In fact, can I be a fanny pack and your sidekick, at different times, when I'm in different moods? I implore you!
>>>>>>>>>>>>cookingWine wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>You are more like a fanny pack or a sidekick than a landlady.
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): Funny, I remember the conversation going more like this:


>>>>>>>>>>CELL wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>Eh, I'm bored. Goodbye.

>>>>>>>>>> cookingWine wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>Of course Juttabell, and you know that they only go "peuw peuw" for you!

>>>>>>>CELL wrote:
>>>>>>>>>> Fanny Pack (i.e. you), not unless you have some lasers inside you.

>>>>>>>>cookingWine wrote:
>>>>>>>>>> You are so gracious Juttabell, please, may I compliment you on your anatomy?

>>>>>CELL wrote:
>>>>>>>> Eh, sure you can be my fanny pack.

>>>>cookingWine wrote:
>>>>> Please Juttabell!


Mugen (Dirkin)

Australia-izzle
Created On: 06/05/2008 17:52:59

Just dropping a line! heres a cat =^;^=
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): Ahaha, how cute! =^;^=

Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

Created On: 05/28/2008 13:53:08

JEZEBEL!
SHUT UP!
YOU STINK!

Er.
Forgive me. Superman was overtaken by the hulk of bad insults.
Juttabell, write something new.
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): Juttabell, heh, that's so cute^^;
I will write something new in due time; I'm swamped.


Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom)

Created On: 05/24/2008 08:08:22

how sweet. Ai Shite Imasu right back!!


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