A Toothy Tale

In most issues in life, it is ultimately the heart of...

Awakening of Minds (Part One)

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About Myself: Hangman.


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DateTitleCategoryHits
Aug 26, 2008Social Retard-Nation, Chapter 3Miscellaneous Stories 48
Aug 12, 2008Social Retard-Nation, Chapter 2Miscellaneous Stories 81
Jul 25, 2008Social Retard-Nation, Chapter 1Miscellaneous Stories 181
May 13, 2008Do You Love Me Still?Poetry 433
Apr 29, 2008Nutty AbbotPoetry 343
Mar 6, 2008InsideMiscellaneous Stories 383
Jan 25, 2008InsanePoetry 1381

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Title article: Do you ever play any games while you're driving?
Date: 2008-05-15 12:43:51

Eh, there were several grammar errors, a few  
spelling ones. Didn't find this funny, but that's just 
me; tastes vary. I really like the picture though.

Title article: Youtopia, Ch. 17
Date: 2008-05-14 10:43:00

Ahh, wow, this is great. 
That Morgue just will never give in; 
seems he's orchestrating something... 
Haha, oh man, I have a huge hunch that  
what Derek saw... well, wouldn't  
want to spoil it... dunno why I'm mentioning 
this, but just a few days ago I thought I saw 
two boys making out (it was practically my 
first time witnessing such a thing) and I  
could not unpaste my sight from them, it 
was weird, felt my insides start to float around... 
Good job again! Great cliffhanger.

Title article: 23rd Century Digital Girl: Chapter 2
Date: 2008-05-14 09:45:55

It's pretty hard to even find organs to transplant, and I assume the level of deaths has decreased, since that other Nicole lived to be 101 in 2068 (by the way is it Nicole Kidman? heh), and this Nicole was able to be salvaged after her car 'accident' so where are these organs coming from? Genetically engineered? Probably, right?  
 
One word sums this all up: BIONIC. 
 
Agh, I could picture her flimsy body. Oh, and good 
cliffhanger. 
 
Will read the next one.

Title article: 23rd Century Digital Girl: Chapter 1
Date: 2008-05-14 09:27:37
Good.
Ha, what a cool title. That's what drew me to reading 
it. Reminds me of a series I wrote on here (Tomo's  
Guns), but I deleted it. Anyway, 'nuff about me, this was 
not so bad. I am certainly curious enough to read 
any continuations. I like all the robot, genetically 
engineered parts, digital systems crap (all that 
pretty sci-fi, futuristic stuff) so of course I had to read this. I think I will read the 2nd part now.

Title article: Predators of the Night
Date: 2008-05-14 09:10:53

Not too much to say... was descriptive and 
quite vivid. For an eerie effect, I guess you  
added the line, "The pack thirsts for warm blood." 
But I was like, 'They aren't werewolves you know?' 
But, be at ease, it was good. Still dunno  
why this is written in poem format, but if  
it weren't I probably would not have read it.  
Also dunno if you'd like this to be digested as 
symbolic or not.  
 
Adieu.

Title article: My World
Date: 2008-05-14 08:58:23

K, this needn't have been a poem. 
Read more like a narrative.  
It was, to me, in no sense, poetic. 
Luck.

Title article: Howard
Date: 2008-05-14 07:57:13
Was drawn into the story.
Good. Several grammar and spelling errors, but I 
dealt. You did a decent job of taking us through the 
mind of this cynic... this sexual predator. What you  
came up with in the end was good, thought it was 
suitable.

Title article: Do You Love Me Still?
Date: 2008-05-14 06:25:34

Ha, o.k!^^

Title article: Youtopia, Ch. 16
Date: 2008-05-12 10:58:04

S-E-X... has the mere enunciation of the word 
lost it's head-rotating effect? No, I don't think it 
has quite yet (ha).  
Hmm, I see where this is going... oi, how very 
tragic. 
This one seemed to lack a bit of the effort you 
usually put into each chapter, but ya, lethargy 
must be the explanation. No worries, still liked it.

Title article: Youtopia, Ch. 15
Date: 2008-05-12 10:37:30

Ah, sorry, I had read this already, but  
couldn't comment. Thought I'd raise your 
writing disposition to broiling degrees, well 
at least to a full 100. 
Ha, these new 'jock-type' characters are 
something; good leverage. 
I can hardly if ever find any 'holes' in your 
storyline, you have everything under control; 
you seem to fully understand the function of minor 
characters, setting, plot, main characters, motif,  
mood, etc. 
Ah, what a stress-inducing hanger. Great job.

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03/27/2008 10:53:57Re:The idea of poetry....Off-Topic616
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jesse (jesse2008)

JUTTA TIME!
Created On: 08/03/2008 20:21:23

EKK, IT'S JUTTA, RUN! or as I like to call her Cell. Cell Motrin?

Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

Created On: 07/20/2008 07:45:29

Call me a spaz, do you. While you sport old lady glasses, you call me a spaz? While you toss verbal garbage at the king, you call me a spaz?

Well.
I like the glasses, anyway. Watch yo mouf.

Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

tied up and gagged in someone's basement!
Created On: 07/05/2008 23:43:04
Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 07/06/2008 14:54:17


ahhh, you're red! red scares me because red reminds me of blood, which reminds me of revenge, which reminds me of christmas, which reminds me of serial killing hippies! who are you? who am I? i need to know these questions or i'm going to go insane...oopps, too late.

I was going through my comments and i wanted to thank you for reading and leaving such good comment on my story, Dog.

so, umm ... thanks


jesse (jesse2008)

How rude of me
Created On: 07/05/2008 20:23:06

I should have signed your Profile Book, well I did it. YAY! You keep on writing Cell, yes I am calling you by your old name. Question where did that name come from, I know it's not from DBZ.
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): ^^"cell" came from those itty bitty microscopic things.. the ones with a nucleus... i dunno, i like the sound of what makes up a cell, and the fact that a cell is the basic structural unit of all organisms.
thank you for signing my profile book^^.


Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

Created On: 06/18/2008 07:47:59

You forgot to add fanny pack to your about me.
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): No, I dumped you just a few days ago... don't you remember? It was for a coin purse.

Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

Created On: 06/13/2008 12:50:17


BATGIRL.
FANNYPACK.
CHOOSE ONE. OR BOTH.

Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): eh, i refuse to take this multiple-choice test.
it is bias.


Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

Cali.
Created On: 06/12/2008 14:35:47

>>>>>>>>>>>CELL wrote (RE):
>>>>>>>>>>>>Yes, I'd love to be your fanny pack. In fact, can I be a fanny pack and your sidekick, at different times, when I'm in different moods? I implore you!
>>>>>>>>>>>>cookingWine wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>You are more like a fanny pack or a sidekick than a landlady.
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): Funny, I remember the conversation going more like this:


>>>>>>>>>>CELL wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>Eh, I'm bored. Goodbye.

>>>>>>>>>> cookingWine wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>Of course Juttabell, and you know that they only go "peuw peuw" for you!

>>>>>>>CELL wrote:
>>>>>>>>>> Fanny Pack (i.e. you), not unless you have some lasers inside you.

>>>>>>>>cookingWine wrote:
>>>>>>>>>> You are so gracious Juttabell, please, may I compliment you on your anatomy?

>>>>>CELL wrote:
>>>>>>>> Eh, sure you can be my fanny pack.

>>>>cookingWine wrote:
>>>>> Please Juttabell!


Mugen (Dirkin)

Australia-izzle
Created On: 06/05/2008 17:52:59

Just dropping a line! heres a cat =^;^=
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): Ahaha, how cute! =^;^=

Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

Created On: 05/28/2008 13:53:08

JEZEBEL!
SHUT UP!
YOU STINK!

Er.
Forgive me. Superman was overtaken by the hulk of bad insults.
Juttabell, write something new.
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): Juttabell, heh, that's so cute^^;
I will write something new in due time; I'm swamped.


Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom)

Created On: 05/24/2008 08:08:22

how sweet. Ai Shite Imasu right back!!


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