gone was the girl

gone was the girl once innocent of love, heartaches...

Thirteen Years Of Gray, Chapter 1

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About Myself: Look, I just don't swing that way, okay?






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05/14/2008 08:49:48Re:What's inside your noggin?Off-Topic30154
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Name Entry
Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

Created On: 07/20/2008 07:45:29

Call me a spaz, do you. While you sport old lady glasses, you call me a spaz? While you toss verbal garbage at the king, you call me a spaz?

Well.
I like the glasses, anyway. Watch yo mouf.

Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

tied up and gagged in someone's basement!
Created On: 07/05/2008 23:43:04
Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 07/06/2008 14:54:17


ahhh, you're red! red scares me because red reminds me of blood, which reminds me of revenge, which reminds me of christmas, which reminds me of serial killing hippies! who are you? who am I? i need to know these questions or i'm going to go insane...oopps, too late.

I was going through my comments and i wanted to thank you for reading and leaving such good comment on my story, Dog.

so, umm ... thanks


jesse (jesse2008)

How rude of me
Created On: 07/05/2008 20:23:06

I should have signed your Profile Book, well I did it. YAY! You keep on writing Cell, yes I am calling you by your old name. Question where did that name come from, I know it's not from DBZ.
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): ^^"cell" came from those itty bitty microscopic things.. the ones with a nucleus... i dunno, i like the sound of what makes up a cell, and the fact that a cell is the basic structural unit of all organisms.
thank you for signing my profile book^^.


Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

Created On: 06/18/2008 07:47:59

You forgot to add fanny pack to your about me.
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): No, I dumped you just a few days ago... don't you remember? It was for a coin purse.

Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

Created On: 06/13/2008 12:50:17


BATGIRL.
FANNYPACK.
CHOOSE ONE. OR BOTH.

Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): eh, i refuse to take this multiple-choice test.
it is bias.


Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

Cali.
Created On: 06/12/2008 14:35:47

>>>>>>>>>>>CELL wrote (RE):
>>>>>>>>>>>>Yes, I'd love to be your fanny pack. In fact, can I be a fanny pack and your sidekick, at different times, when I'm in different moods? I implore you!
>>>>>>>>>>>>cookingWine wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>You are more like a fanny pack or a sidekick than a landlady.
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): Funny, I remember the conversation going more like this:


>>>>>>>>>>CELL wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>Eh, I'm bored. Goodbye.

>>>>>>>>>> cookingWine wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>Of course Juttabell, and you know that they only go "peuw peuw" for you!

>>>>>>>CELL wrote:
>>>>>>>>>> Fanny Pack (i.e. you), not unless you have some lasers inside you.

>>>>>>>>cookingWine wrote:
>>>>>>>>>> You are so gracious Juttabell, please, may I compliment you on your anatomy?

>>>>>CELL wrote:
>>>>>>>> Eh, sure you can be my fanny pack.

>>>>cookingWine wrote:
>>>>> Please Juttabell!


Mugen (Dirkin)

Australia-izzle
Created On: 06/05/2008 17:52:59

Just dropping a line! heres a cat =^;^=
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): Ahaha, how cute! =^;^=

Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

Created On: 05/28/2008 13:53:08

JEZEBEL!
SHUT UP!
YOU STINK!

Er.
Forgive me. Superman was overtaken by the hulk of bad insults.
Juttabell, write something new.
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): Juttabell, heh, that's so cute^^;
I will write something new in due time; I'm swamped.


Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom)

Created On: 05/24/2008 08:08:22

how sweet. Ai Shite Imasu right back!!


Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

Created On: 05/13/2008 17:57:57

Hello, Jezebel.

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Comments

Total number of comments: 333

Title article: Apples and Crows
Date: 2008-07-15 16:14:25

"In Portsmouth and Southsea" is overused.  
And it's beyond evident that you handpicked words just for the sake of rhyming. 
Personally didn't like the oddities. There's simply too much canvas when you write of the absurd.

Title article: Wordsmith
Date: 2008-06-25 16:19:05

Your personal efforts to be unconventional strongly come through in this. I like your writing because I don't have to ever offer any real constructive criticism. It's professional writing that I can just placidly enjoy. Excellent.

Title article: For you
Date: 2008-06-12 12:51:08

Ya ya, definitely stimulating! 
Really liked how it seemed that you were addressing us, the readers. In other words, the reader is almost made to believe that it was written especially for him/her (it's how it made me feel anyway, aha ^^;). This also had a Lewis Carol feel to it, especially towards the end. Nice.

Title article: Spent The Day With An Angel
Date: 2008-06-03 13:15:49

Liked how this embodied some sort of epiphany; one that steers closer to mending things, than staying glued to the same self-destructive spot.

Title article: Purple Haze
Date: 2008-06-01 23:09:20

The climax, wow. 
How depraved; and it's far more dismal to think about what 
you've written because it's  
a truth that lies adjacent to  
war. It's sickening to think 
about how much a person is willing to degrade him/herself to 
humiliate another and ease an absurd urge... agh, I am angry. 
A very good piece that made 
me think about how inhumane 
'humanity' is.

Title article: The Three Women
Date: 2008-05-29 12:14:26

Davesshearer (the first commentator) said it better than I ever could; I completely agree with his input.

Title article: His Favorite Chords.
Date: 2008-05-29 09:44:56

The rude (though totally justified) person that wrote the following comment was me: 
 
I really shouldn't have read the comments before posting my own (but I'll try to ignore the voices in my head). 
Ahh, I didn't like this. It was insipid. Bland. And above all unoriginal (especially for your potential). Though I understand the trademark sentence structure (as in the 2nd sentence), it was horrid; it left a bad taste in my mouth. This person was daydreaming and the best you could come up with was some overrated scenery of the wilderness? Oh, and when his half-conscious excursion comes to a close a "whirlpool" (hmm, haven't heard of THAT before...) sucks in the painted landscape to a blank; what is this, The Poltergeist?

Title article: Coma twins ch2
Date: 2008-05-29 08:47:47

I've read this before... 
 
No I know, this had to be inserted somewhere. 
 
Good, I'll read the rest.

Title article: The locked door Ch 2
Date: 2008-05-29 08:43:30

Ya, did a pretty decent job here. I especially liked the house ad, and the imagery in general. Haven't lost interest; will continue reading.

Title article: Do You Love Me Still?
Date: 2008-05-28 13:49:37

Well, first of all, I was describing a common sort of woman. 
 
And second, oh yeah, fiddling with plastic dolls (i.e. you) is so much better. 
 
Toodles.

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