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Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)
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Member Since 06/12/2007
Last Online 08/21/2008
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About Myself: Hangman.


Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Aug 12, 2008Social Retard-Nation, Chapter 2Miscellaneous Stories 53
Jul 25, 2008Social Retard-Nation, Chapter 1Miscellaneous Stories 162
May 13, 2008Do You Love Me Still?Poetry 426
Apr 29, 2008Nutty AbbotPoetry 339
Mar 6, 2008InsideMiscellaneous Stories 382
Jan 25, 2008InsanePoetry 1371

Comments

Title article: Coma Twins Ch1 (revised)
Date: 2008-05-22 16:00:48

You integrated all of these neat descriptions, so ya that does make this 'fuller.' You should have kept some of the old stuff though, it made it more morbid, but I mean just continue on to the next chapter. I've got the concept you're going for here, so now expand. 
 
Good job. Oh and some of your words are glued onto others (likethis); I would fix that.

Title article: they say
Date: 2008-05-21 06:14:59

Ha, it just came to me, why I like this poem so much I mean: it reminded me of Gnarls Barkley's "Crazy"^^.

Title article: they say
Date: 2008-05-20 14:02:32

Ya, I was just going to say that the picture fits perfectly with the concept you have here, because it's just so absurd^^ (I really like the picture too, it's adorable, ha).  
 
You made writing this seem effortless. And it actually made me think quite a bit especially the third and seventh stanza. Surprisingly, I liked this one a lot!

Title article: Jen the Pirate
Date: 2008-05-20 09:40:24
Very entertaining
Heheh, this was adorably funny.

Title article: Youtopia, Ch. 19
Date: 2008-05-19 13:37:56

A different setting... that's nice. 
Truthfully I saw this coming, but to me, in this case, it means that you've made me want to get involved with the story.  
I'm still here, and still anxious to read the rest^^.

Title article: Broken Hearts
Date: 2008-05-19 13:20:13

not original, but it was a nice story. 
i liked it; but i was somewhat distracted by 
all of the grammar and spelling errors.

Title article: A Violent Passion
Date: 2008-05-19 11:47:00

I only like the emotion being evoked here. Though it's not the correct way to feel, it is how most would genuinely feel after having been deceived. 
 
It embodies REAL hate, though it wasn't very well written...

Title article: 23rd Century Digital Girl: Chapter 3
Date: 2008-05-16 11:48:04

I don't quite know what to say... eh, hmm... 
 
But I do wonder about what's wrong with her.

Title article: Youtopia, Ch. 18
Date: 2008-05-16 07:53:15
Excellent.
Hmm, was Morgue raped? Eh, it was almost 
consensual, so was this maybe borderline rape? 
Came off as some violent gay sex scene... but I 
dunno... I don't think he was just getting whipped 
by Shane...  
Anyway, this was great, stuck to the screen I was.

Title article: Do you ever play any games while you're driving?
Date: 2008-05-15 12:43:51

Eh, there were several grammar errors, a few  
spelling ones. Didn't find this funny, but that's just 
me; tastes vary. I really like the picture though.

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Last 10 Forum Posts
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05/14/2008 08:49:48Re:What's inside your noggin?Off-Topic34058
05/06/2008 21:30:01Re:What's inside your noggin?Off-Topic34058
05/06/2008 21:24:03Re:What's inside your noggin?Off-Topic34058
05/06/2008 17:08:48Re:What's inside your noggin?Off-Topic34058
04/17/2008 16:01:24Re:What's inside your noggin?Off-Topic34058
04/17/2008 15:45:05Re:What's inside your noggin?Off-Topic34058
03/31/2008 09:24:47Re:What's inside your noggin?Off-Topic34058
03/27/2008 10:53:57Re:The idea of poetry....Off-Topic599
03/22/2008 16:13:21Re:1800's ThreadOff-Topic14336
03/20/2008 21:44:15Re:What's inside your noggin?Off-Topic34058

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OFFLINE Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom)
OFFLINE Patrick O. (Roadkill315)
OFFLINE retrocious.[/sneh] (hxc inc.)
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Name Entry
jesse (jesse2008)

JUTTA TIME!
Created On: 08/03/2008 20:21:23

EKK, IT'S JUTTA, RUN! or as I like to call her Cell. Cell Motrin?

Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

Created On: 07/20/2008 07:45:29

Call me a spaz, do you. While you sport old lady glasses, you call me a spaz? While you toss verbal garbage at the king, you call me a spaz?

Well.
I like the glasses, anyway. Watch yo mouf.

Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

tied up and gagged in someone's basement!
Created On: 07/05/2008 23:43:04
Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 07/06/2008 14:54:17


ahhh, you're red! red scares me because red reminds me of blood, which reminds me of revenge, which reminds me of christmas, which reminds me of serial killing hippies! who are you? who am I? i need to know these questions or i'm going to go insane...oopps, too late.

I was going through my comments and i wanted to thank you for reading and leaving such good comment on my story, Dog.

so, umm ... thanks


jesse (jesse2008)

How rude of me
Created On: 07/05/2008 20:23:06

I should have signed your Profile Book, well I did it. YAY! You keep on writing Cell, yes I am calling you by your old name. Question where did that name come from, I know it's not from DBZ.
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): ^^"cell" came from those itty bitty microscopic things.. the ones with a nucleus... i dunno, i like the sound of what makes up a cell, and the fact that a cell is the basic structural unit of all organisms.
thank you for signing my profile book^^.


Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

Created On: 06/18/2008 07:47:59

You forgot to add fanny pack to your about me.
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): No, I dumped you just a few days ago... don't you remember? It was for a coin purse.

Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

Created On: 06/13/2008 12:50:17


BATGIRL.
FANNYPACK.
CHOOSE ONE. OR BOTH.

Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): eh, i refuse to take this multiple-choice test.
it is bias.


Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

Cali.
Created On: 06/12/2008 14:35:47

>>>>>>>>>>>CELL wrote (RE):
>>>>>>>>>>>>Yes, I'd love to be your fanny pack. In fact, can I be a fanny pack and your sidekick, at different times, when I'm in different moods? I implore you!
>>>>>>>>>>>>cookingWine wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>You are more like a fanny pack or a sidekick than a landlady.
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): Funny, I remember the conversation going more like this:


>>>>>>>>>>CELL wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>Eh, I'm bored. Goodbye.

>>>>>>>>>> cookingWine wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>Of course Juttabell, and you know that they only go "peuw peuw" for you!

>>>>>>>CELL wrote:
>>>>>>>>>> Fanny Pack (i.e. you), not unless you have some lasers inside you.

>>>>>>>>cookingWine wrote:
>>>>>>>>>> You are so gracious Juttabell, please, may I compliment you on your anatomy?

>>>>>CELL wrote:
>>>>>>>> Eh, sure you can be my fanny pack.

>>>>cookingWine wrote:
>>>>> Please Juttabell!


Mugen (Dirkin)

Australia-izzle
Created On: 06/05/2008 17:52:59

Just dropping a line! heres a cat =^;^=
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): Ahaha, how cute! =^;^=

Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

Created On: 05/28/2008 13:53:08

JEZEBEL!
SHUT UP!
YOU STINK!

Er.
Forgive me. Superman was overtaken by the hulk of bad insults.
Juttabell, write something new.
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): Juttabell, heh, that's so cute^^;
I will write something new in due time; I'm swamped.


Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom)

Created On: 05/24/2008 08:08:22

how sweet. Ai Shite Imasu right back!!


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