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Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)
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Member Since 06/12/2007
Last Online 09/05/2008
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About Myself: Adaptive.



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Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Sep 3, 2008Social Retard-Nation, Chapter 4Miscellaneous Stories 42
Aug 26, 2008Social Retard-Nation, Chapter 3Miscellaneous Stories 76
Aug 12, 2008Social Retard-Nation, Chapter 2Miscellaneous Stories 104
Jul 25, 2008Social Retard-Nation, Chapter 1Miscellaneous Stories 211
May 13, 2008Do You Love Me Still?Poetry 453
Apr 29, 2008Nutty AbbotPoetry 369
Mar 6, 2008InsideMiscellaneous Stories 398
Jan 25, 2008InsanePoetry 1405

Comments

Title article: our dying america
Date: 2008-05-03 16:49:52
GREAT.
Man. Great poem.  
Never could stand this mainstream, fit the mold 
or else setting we've established ... 
It's the stupidest thing ever. 
Damn power-hungry, self-absorbed bigots.  
 
Self-interest, that's about all you see nowadays... 
 
Way to clearly put this out. 
 
Excellent once again.  
Personally thought this was inspirational as well. 
 
that one negative comment must have 
come from a very close-minded and easily 
manipulated dumb ass.

Title article: Insane
Date: 2008-05-03 16:20:14

wow. thank you so very much 
for your kind comment^^

Title article: That Lonely Syllable.
Date: 2008-05-01 13:18:27

And actually I believe she's  
thinking of this while canoodling.

Title article: That Lonely Syllable.
Date: 2008-05-01 13:16:05
Wow.
Just wow. 
Powerful. 
Virtually disturbing 
BUT, 
I think this isn't as ugly 
as it seems. 
My guess is this is 
about a woman who 
wished she didn't have  
to grow up. 
Sigh, much like myself; I 
seriously couldn't have expressed  
myself better than how you've  
it done here. 
 
Loved it.

Title article: Youtopia, Ch. 14
Date: 2008-05-01 12:58:36

I hope you don't take offense, but 
you seem like someone who'd excel 
in writing novels like "Vampire Academy." 
I haven't read it myself, but I looked  
up a summary for it. Stuff like that 
flies off the shelves you know. 
But not only that, I'm sure you could 
even write up more serious stuff. 
There's I think much versatility in  
your talent. 
 
Excellent once again Sneh.

Title article: Youtopia, Ch. 13
Date: 2008-05-01 11:05:28

"only form of entertainment it seems I have left is counting exactly how many brave little hairs are still clinging, however futilely, to Mr. Cellian’s head."  
 
Loved that line, ha. 
 
Pretty cool, that you implemented notes between Morgue and Derek into the story. Boosted up the level of entertainment.  
 
"And what if she had been a lesbian...would’ve she have been weirded out by my liking her? " 
 
And this one line, interesting way of putting things. Made me think. 
 
Great job once again! I'm heading on to the next chapter now.

Title article: Smoke, Steel, and Innuendo
Date: 2008-05-01 08:43:46

A gun is most commonly used 
as a phallic symbol... I sort of  
have that impregnated in my 
mind... it was a good attempt, I'll  
give you that.

Title article: By Myself
Date: 2008-04-30 15:16:20

Damn, 'bout 5 minutes to type this up?? 
Loony O.o 
That is fast. 
This actually helps me understand  
the reason behind why some people 
immediately assume they are being 
targeted or attacked. 
 
Impressive how you can channel 
emotion into poetry so quickly!

Title article: For the Teacher
Date: 2008-04-29 13:45:20
Very good!
Wow (subject is a bit fluffy but wow). 
 
I really liked this poem (the pattern, everything in general). It's extremely well written and thought out. I really like teachers too^^. They can have a very strong impact on their students, and seeing their students gradually mold into good adults (with what they've learned from their teacher) is quite rewarding.

Title article: Prologue
Date: 2008-04-28 12:41:53
Great Job!
Ahh, I'm all hyped up! 
Great prologue. 
I could of sworn I heard a deep manly voice reading this out loud.

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Last 10 Forum Posts
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05/14/2008 08:49:48Re:What's inside your noggin?Off-Topic37125
05/06/2008 21:30:01Re:What's inside your noggin?Off-Topic37125
05/06/2008 21:24:03Re:What's inside your noggin?Off-Topic37125
05/06/2008 17:08:48Re:What's inside your noggin?Off-Topic37125
04/17/2008 16:01:24Re:What's inside your noggin?Off-Topic37125
04/17/2008 15:45:05Re:What's inside your noggin?Off-Topic37125
03/31/2008 09:24:47Re:What's inside your noggin?Off-Topic37125
03/27/2008 10:53:57Re:The idea of poetry....Off-Topic626
03/22/2008 16:13:21Re:1800's ThreadOff-Topic15466
03/20/2008 21:44:15Re:What's inside your noggin?Off-Topic37125

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Name Entry
jesse (jesse2008)

JUTTA TIME!
Created On: 08/03/2008 20:21:23

EKK, IT'S JUTTA, RUN! or as I like to call her Cell. Cell Motrin?

Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

Created On: 07/20/2008 07:45:29

Call me a spaz, do you. While you sport old lady glasses, you call me a spaz? While you toss verbal garbage at the king, you call me a spaz?

Well.
I like the glasses, anyway. Watch yo mouf.

Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

tied up and gagged in someone's basement!
Created On: 07/05/2008 23:43:04
Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 07/06/2008 14:54:17


ahhh, you're red! red scares me because red reminds me of blood, which reminds me of revenge, which reminds me of christmas, which reminds me of serial killing hippies! who are you? who am I? i need to know these questions or i'm going to go insane...oopps, too late.

I was going through my comments and i wanted to thank you for reading and leaving such good comment on my story, Dog.

so, umm ... thanks


jesse (jesse2008)

How rude of me
Created On: 07/05/2008 20:23:06

I should have signed your Profile Book, well I did it. YAY! You keep on writing Cell, yes I am calling you by your old name. Question where did that name come from, I know it's not from DBZ.
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): ^^"cell" came from those itty bitty microscopic things.. the ones with a nucleus... i dunno, i like the sound of what makes up a cell, and the fact that a cell is the basic structural unit of all organisms.
thank you for signing my profile book^^.


Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

Created On: 06/18/2008 07:47:59

You forgot to add fanny pack to your about me.
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): No, I dumped you just a few days ago... don't you remember? It was for a coin purse.

Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

Created On: 06/13/2008 12:50:17


BATGIRL.
FANNYPACK.
CHOOSE ONE. OR BOTH.

Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): eh, i refuse to take this multiple-choice test.
it is bias.


Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

Cali.
Created On: 06/12/2008 14:35:47

>>>>>>>>>>>CELL wrote (RE):
>>>>>>>>>>>>Yes, I'd love to be your fanny pack. In fact, can I be a fanny pack and your sidekick, at different times, when I'm in different moods? I implore you!
>>>>>>>>>>>>cookingWine wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>You are more like a fanny pack or a sidekick than a landlady.
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): Funny, I remember the conversation going more like this:


>>>>>>>>>>CELL wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>Eh, I'm bored. Goodbye.

>>>>>>>>>> cookingWine wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>Of course Juttabell, and you know that they only go "peuw peuw" for you!

>>>>>>>CELL wrote:
>>>>>>>>>> Fanny Pack (i.e. you), not unless you have some lasers inside you.

>>>>>>>>cookingWine wrote:
>>>>>>>>>> You are so gracious Juttabell, please, may I compliment you on your anatomy?

>>>>>CELL wrote:
>>>>>>>> Eh, sure you can be my fanny pack.

>>>>cookingWine wrote:
>>>>> Please Juttabell!


Mugen (Dirkin)

Australia-izzle
Created On: 06/05/2008 17:52:59

Just dropping a line! heres a cat =^;^=
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): Ahaha, how cute! =^;^=

Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

Created On: 05/28/2008 13:53:08

JEZEBEL!
SHUT UP!
YOU STINK!

Er.
Forgive me. Superman was overtaken by the hulk of bad insults.
Juttabell, write something new.
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): Juttabell, heh, that's so cute^^;
I will write something new in due time; I'm swamped.


Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom)

Created On: 05/24/2008 08:08:22

how sweet. Ai Shite Imasu right back!!


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