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Last Online	07/05/2008
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About Myself:

Flickering screens.
Convulsions.
Enamorment. My Boyfriend.
Unconventionality & Quirkiness.
clever word play. the dictionary.
word pronunciations and the
word "pronunciation."
gesticulatory exaggeration &
emphasis where there need be.
your shortcomings. your attributes and Jubilation.
contortionists. absolute justice.
thunderstorms and puissant wind.
naiveness and profundity. smooth surfaces.
Japanese Animation & gritting Electronica.
Anecdotes and their incongruous unravellings. Also,
possessed by Phlegmaticness.

Juttabell (a cookingWine Production)

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
May 13, 2008	Do You Love Me Still?	Poetry	365
Apr 29, 2008	Nutty Abbot	Poetry	284
Mar 6, 2008	Inside	Miscellaneous Stories	335
Jan 25, 2008	Insane	Poetry	1300

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Last 10 Forum Posts

Date	Subject	Category	Hits
05/14/2008 08:49:48	Re:What's inside your noggin?	Off-Topic	27169
05/06/2008 21:30:01	Re:What's inside your noggin?	Off-Topic	27169
05/06/2008 21:24:03	Re:What's inside your noggin?	Off-Topic	27169
05/06/2008 17:08:48	Re:What's inside your noggin?	Off-Topic	27169
04/17/2008 16:01:24	Re:What's inside your noggin?	Off-Topic	27169
04/17/2008 15:45:05	Re:What's inside your noggin?	Off-Topic	27169
03/31/2008 09:24:47	Re:What's inside your noggin?	Off-Topic	27169
03/27/2008 10:53:57	Re:The idea of poetry....	Off-Topic	488
03/22/2008 16:13:21	Re:1800's Thread	Off-Topic	12148
03/20/2008 21:44:15	Re:What's inside your noggin?	Off-Topic	27169

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Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)'s connections

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Kasi (Kasi elaborated)

JD Kelly (Juda)

Nate Stanford (nick711)

jesse (jesse2008)

Daniel Van Werkhoven (DoozerDan)

Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom)

Patrick O. (Roadkill315)

retrocious.[/sneh] (hxc inc.)

Alamo St-Jean (The_Gimp)

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Guestbook

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Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) tied up and gagged in someone's basement!	Created On: 07/05/2008 23:43:04 Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 07/05/2008 23:44:13 ahhh, you're red! red scares me because red reminds me of blood, which reminds me of revenge, which reminds me of christmas, which reminds me of serial killing hippies! who are you? who am I? i need to know these questions or i'm going to go insane...oopps, too late. I was going through my comments and i wanted to thank you for reading and leaving such good comment on my story, Dog. so, umm ... thanks
jesse (jesse2008) How rude of me	Created On: 07/05/2008 20:23:06 I should have signed your Profile Book, well I did it. YAY! You keep on writing Cell, yes I am calling you by your old name. Question where did that name come from, I know it's not from DBZ.
Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)	Created On: 06/18/2008 07:47:59 You forgot to add fanny pack to your about me. Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): No, I dumped you just a few days ago... don't you remember? It was for a coin purse.
Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)	Created On: 06/13/2008 12:50:17 BATGIRL. FANNYPACK. CHOOSE ONE. OR BOTH. Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): eh, i refuse to take this multiple-choice test. it is bias.
Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine) Cali.	Created On: 06/12/2008 14:35:47 >>>>>>>>>>>CELL wrote (RE): >>>>>>>>>>>>Yes, I'd love to be your fanny pack. In fact, can I be a fanny pack and your sidekick, at different times, when I'm in different moods? I implore you! >>>>>>>>>>>>cookingWine wrote: >>>>>>>>>>>>You are more like a fanny pack or a sidekick than a landlady. Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): Funny, I remember the conversation going more like this: >>>>>>>>>>CELL wrote: >>>>>>>>>>>>>Eh, I'm bored. Goodbye. >>>>>>>>>> cookingWine wrote: >>>>>>>>>>>>Of course Juttabell, and you know that they only go "peuw peuw" for you! >>>>>>>CELL wrote: >>>>>>>>>> Fanny Pack (i.e. you), not unless you have some lasers inside you. >>>>>>>>cookingWine wrote: >>>>>>>>>> You are so gracious Juttabell, please, may I compliment you on your anatomy? >>>>>CELL wrote: >>>>>>>> Eh, sure you can be my fanny pack. >>>>cookingWine wrote: >>>>> Please Juttabell!
Mugen (Dirkin) Australia-izzle	Created On: 06/05/2008 17:52:59 Just dropping a line! heres a cat =^;^= Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): Ahaha, how cute! =^;^=
Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)	Created On: 05/28/2008 13:53:08 JEZEBEL! SHUT UP! YOU STINK! Er. Forgive me. Superman was overtaken by the hulk of bad insults. Juttabell, write something new. Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): Juttabell, heh, that's so cute^^; I will write something new in due time; I'm swamped.
Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom)	Created On: 05/24/2008 08:08:22 how sweet. Ai Shite Imasu right back!!
Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)	Created On: 05/13/2008 17:57:57 Hello, Jezebel.
Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom)	Created On: 05/06/2008 15:11:27 Boo!!!!!!!! haha. Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): Eep! (haha)

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Comments

Total number of comments: 332

Title article: Wordsmith
Date: 2008-06-25 16:19:05

Your personal efforts to be unconventional strongly come through in this. I like your writing because I don't have to ever offer any real constructive criticism. It's professional writing that I can just placidly enjoy. Excellent.

Title article: I Need to Talk to You
Date: 2008-06-19 13:09:58

VERY funny!
Sure captures the nonsensical garbage they throw at you. Just great.

Title article: For you
Date: 2008-06-12 12:51:08

Ya ya, definitely stimulating!
Really liked how it seemed that you were addressing us, the readers. In other words, the reader is almost made to believe that it was written especially for him/her (it's how it made me feel anyway, aha ^^;). This also had a Lewis Carol feel to it, especially towards the end. Nice.

Title article: Spent The Day With An Angel
Date: 2008-06-03 13:15:49

Liked how this embodied some sort of epiphany; one that steers closer to mending things, than staying glued to the same self-destructive spot.

Title article: Purple Haze
Date: 2008-06-01 23:09:20

The climax, wow.
How depraved; and it's far more dismal to think about what
you've written because it's
a truth that lies adjacent to
war. It's sickening to think
about how much a person is willing to degrade him/herself to
humiliate another and ease an absurd urge... agh, I am angry.
A very good piece that made
me think about how inhumane
'humanity' is.

Title article: The Three Women
Date: 2008-05-29 12:14:26

Davesshearer (the first commentator) said it better than I ever could; I completely agree with his input.

Title article: His Favorite Chords.
Date: 2008-05-29 09:44:56

The rude (though totally justified) person that wrote the following comment was me:

I really shouldn't have read the comments before posting my own (but I'll try to ignore the voices in my head).
Ahh, I didn't like this. It was insipid. Bland. And above all unoriginal (especially for your potential). Though I understand the trademark sentence structure (as in the 2nd sentence), it was horrid; it left a bad taste in my mouth. This person was daydreaming and the best you could come up with was some overrated scenery of the wilderness? Oh, and when his half-conscious excursion comes to a close a "whirlpool" (hmm, haven't heard of THAT before...) sucks in the painted landscape to a blank; what is this, The Poltergeist?

Title article: Coma twins ch2
Date: 2008-05-29 08:47:47

I've read this before...

No I know, this had to be inserted somewhere.

Good, I'll read the rest.

Title article: The locked door Ch 2
Date: 2008-05-29 08:43:30

Ya, did a pretty decent job here. I especially liked the house ad, and the imagery in general. Haven't lost interest; will continue reading.

Title article: Do You Love Me Still?
Date: 2008-05-28 13:49:37

Well, first of all, I was describing a common sort of woman.

And second, oh yeah, fiddling with plastic dolls (i.e. you) is so much better.

Toodles.