CS (cookingWine)
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Created On: 03/05/2008 09:35:10 
If guestbooks were made out of instruction manuals and do-it-yourself hardware stores I still wouldn't know what to do with them.
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Egoist (Egoist)
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Created On: 02/05/2008 12:48:54
Edited By Egoist (Egoist) On: 02/07/2008 16:01:41
Always enjoy your energy...IN YOUR STORIES AND COMMENTS...heheh
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (CELL): Thank you very much.
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Mugen (Dirkin)
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Created On: 01/28/2008 19:31:53
Hallo! Thanks for your kind comments! Keep writing
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Barbie Dorrough (Barbie)
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Created On: 01/17/2008 11:43:52
Edited By Barbie Dorrough (Barbie) On: 01/17/2008 11:44:07 
I live on the island of Okinawa...but Tokyo, wow, thats a sight to behold. If you can go there, at least once, in your lifetime. With your passion for dressing up in amime gear...you will fit right in. They really do that here.... 
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David Neve (Tarhead Mugwump)
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Created On: 12/19/2007 00:35:34
okay, times up...
you need to get your fingers back on the keyboard. we need another series!
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (CELL): On it.
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that tabithah person
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Created On: 09/17/2007 15:09:35
whens the next tomo coming out??? 
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (CELL): Ooo, I'm not so sure. Seems I've got writer's block. heh heh heh. I've also been swamped with work, and haven't had time. The next part to Tomo's Guns is the last, so I have to think of a decent ending. No worries, I should get to it before the end of this year(?). heh... uh, or before! I dunno. I tend to not finish what I start. But I need to see things through this time. I will try my best. Take care of yourself.
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Naragi
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Created On: 07/17/2007 07:33:20
Just finished reading all five of your tomo's gun stories. very nice
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (CELL): Thank you, Naragi. I'm glad you enjoyed them. I'm hoping the 6th part will be completed and published by this coming Sunday. (just in case you're interested ^-^)
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Tommy Lee (Yfcomp)
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Created On: 06/29/2007 12:41:11
I am not going to deny that I am looking forward to reading an action packed story when I click on Tomo's Gun. But I was actually expecting some kind of romance between Roberta and Marco. I definitely think it would add more values to your storyline. For series of multiple stories, like Tomo's Gun, it may be a good idea to have variation of themes here and there to keep it interesting. I can't wait to read your next one 
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (CELL): Thank you Tommy! You've helped me a great deal.
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Tommy Lee (Yfcomp)
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Created On: 06/29/2007 08:30:16
I definitely loved all of the Tomo's gun series. I am glad to hear that you are reconsidering to continue writing Tomo's Gun. 
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (CELL): Tommy, thank you so very much. Because of you and others that share your opinion I will definitely finish "Tomo's Guns"... Changing the subject, I have something I'd like to ask you. It's already been decided that I will add prolonged action scenes, but do you think that I should also add a bit of... uh, I'm lacking the word here... oh, I dunno, romance? This sort of thing appeals more to the female audience, I would think. As a boy, what is your opinion? I don't want to ruin "Tomo's Guns" by making it korny, I just want to make it understood that Roberta is human, and is capable of sharing human emotions. I'll be looking out for your answer. Thanks!
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Tabithah Laenkit (K.Y.)
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Created On: 06/28/2007 12:38:49
what? oh dont quit i loved your series and u r a very talented writer!! but if its wat u want 2 do no one can stop you...
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (CELL): You really think so? I was thinking it was a bit generic. Getting into all the details will take some effort... but I think, I'll continue the series. It's nice to know there are some that like "Tomo's Guns". Thank you Tabithah.
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