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Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Sep 3, 2008Social Retard-Nation, Chapter 4Miscellaneous Stories 43
Aug 26, 2008Social Retard-Nation, Chapter 3Miscellaneous Stories 79
Aug 12, 2008Social Retard-Nation, Chapter 2Miscellaneous Stories 106
Jul 25, 2008Social Retard-Nation, Chapter 1Miscellaneous Stories 213
May 13, 2008Do You Love Me Still?Poetry 457
Apr 29, 2008Nutty AbbotPoetry 370
Mar 6, 2008InsideMiscellaneous Stories 399
Jan 25, 2008InsanePoetry 1405

Comments

Title article: Youtopia, Ch. 12
Date: 2008-04-28 12:22:31

Haha, I thought this was funny, "She sighs, and struggles to keep her eyes level with mine. 'How...um, how are you?'" 
 
I love your similes and metaphors; they're always so different, and they help me get the picture. I didn't feel like reading inside this genre today (romance, drama), but I did it just to read your tweaked up word gluing. Ahh, I am satisfied, yet again! 
 
Love you Sneh!

Title article: ...And She Dreams Of A Better Man....
Date: 2008-04-28 11:21:39

Ha, oh man, I have been in almost her exact position... had me reminiscing... 
 
Liked how you paired up narrative and poetry... this was nice. Good job.

Title article: Just Like Her
Date: 2008-04-28 10:44:28

This I think, was intentionally made to be paired with Egoist's "Incredible."

Title article: You Create
Date: 2008-04-25 17:56:00

Ah, crud, I was going to go with that, but I second thought it. I was close though^^, keep up the good work!

Title article: Alcohol
Date: 2008-04-25 14:03:37
Very good!
This flowed very nicely... the rhythmic pattern, I mean. 
 
As seen through the eyes of a loving/worried spectator... I can also relate. It's very difficult to get rid of an addiction, especially one like this one; it's not only emotionally/mentally challenging, it is also physically straining and painful (it's not like they can go cold turkey y'know)... I try to be understanding, but there's only so much 'understanding' I can give until it becomes enabling... so I liked what this line conveyed,  
 
"I've done what I can, I've nothing left to say 
 
It's in her hands now, she needs to find her own way" 
 
Ah, one can only do so much, they must pull in some initiative as well. 
 
Hopefully things will turn out how you'd like them to.

Title article: Found In Space
Date: 2008-04-25 13:06:43

Ha!  
 
Another great one. 
 
This wasn't only funny and well-written, it was gripping as well; though thinking of human nature, it shouldn't have been, huh? 
 
Anyways, liked this one too. I think I'll put it in my favorites^^.

Title article: Youtopia, Ch. 11
Date: 2008-04-25 12:48:33

“Wait,” I interrupt. “Morgue’s here?” That doesn’t make any sense. Morgue doesn’t work today, and if Morgue is here there is no way in hell I’m going to be. 
 
The above excerpt was especially funny to me, ha, great job again, keep it up!^^

Title article: Youtopia, Ch. 11
Date: 2008-04-25 12:44:58

In regards to the story, ahh, excellent! excellent! excellent! 
 
Very unexpected, what Morgue thought and said to Derek about their little uh, slumber party (heh)... very good dramatic twist. 
 
I'm lovin' it Sneh, and if it's not too much trouble I hope you post some more of 'Far Out' I really like that one too!

Title article: Odour Of A Clown
Date: 2008-04-24 10:20:41

Ha, what an abrupt ending. 
 
The entire thing was very funny!  
 
Haha, you didn't burn out the whole "sexy" thing, it was just right, haha, man this was funny. 
 
Will definitely read any future writings. 
 
*thrusts a thumb's up^^

Title article: Why I Don't Write Romance
Date: 2008-04-24 09:50:30
Great job.
haha, did some ravenous and butt-hurt Ex shoot Samantha?  
 
The (intentional) cliche of the whole thing was pretty funny (cliche, of course, until the mind-blowing twist), and this was actually also very well-written. 
 
I liked this.

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OFFLINE Kasi (Kasi Elaborated)
OFFLINE JD Kelly (Juda)
OFFLINE Nate Stanford (nick711)
OFFLINE jesse (jesse2008)
OFFLINE Daniel Van Werkhoven (DoozerDan)
OFFLINE Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom)
OFFLINE Patrick O. (Roadkill315)
 
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Name Entry
jesse (jesse2008)

JUTTA TIME!
Created On: 08/03/2008 20:21:23

EKK, IT'S JUTTA, RUN! or as I like to call her Cell. Cell Motrin?

Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

Created On: 07/20/2008 07:45:29

Call me a spaz, do you. While you sport old lady glasses, you call me a spaz? While you toss verbal garbage at the king, you call me a spaz?

Well.
I like the glasses, anyway. Watch yo mouf.

Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

tied up and gagged in someone's basement!
Created On: 07/05/2008 23:43:04
Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 07/06/2008 14:54:17


ahhh, you're red! red scares me because red reminds me of blood, which reminds me of revenge, which reminds me of christmas, which reminds me of serial killing hippies! who are you? who am I? i need to know these questions or i'm going to go insane...oopps, too late.

I was going through my comments and i wanted to thank you for reading and leaving such good comment on my story, Dog.

so, umm ... thanks


jesse (jesse2008)

How rude of me
Created On: 07/05/2008 20:23:06

I should have signed your Profile Book, well I did it. YAY! You keep on writing Cell, yes I am calling you by your old name. Question where did that name come from, I know it's not from DBZ.
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): ^^"cell" came from those itty bitty microscopic things.. the ones with a nucleus... i dunno, i like the sound of what makes up a cell, and the fact that a cell is the basic structural unit of all organisms.
thank you for signing my profile book^^.


Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

Created On: 06/18/2008 07:47:59

You forgot to add fanny pack to your about me.
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): No, I dumped you just a few days ago... don't you remember? It was for a coin purse.

Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

Created On: 06/13/2008 12:50:17


BATGIRL.
FANNYPACK.
CHOOSE ONE. OR BOTH.

Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): eh, i refuse to take this multiple-choice test.
it is bias.


Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

Cali.
Created On: 06/12/2008 14:35:47

>>>>>>>>>>>CELL wrote (RE):
>>>>>>>>>>>>Yes, I'd love to be your fanny pack. In fact, can I be a fanny pack and your sidekick, at different times, when I'm in different moods? I implore you!
>>>>>>>>>>>>cookingWine wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>You are more like a fanny pack or a sidekick than a landlady.
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): Funny, I remember the conversation going more like this:


>>>>>>>>>>CELL wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>Eh, I'm bored. Goodbye.

>>>>>>>>>> cookingWine wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>Of course Juttabell, and you know that they only go "peuw peuw" for you!

>>>>>>>CELL wrote:
>>>>>>>>>> Fanny Pack (i.e. you), not unless you have some lasers inside you.

>>>>>>>>cookingWine wrote:
>>>>>>>>>> You are so gracious Juttabell, please, may I compliment you on your anatomy?

>>>>>CELL wrote:
>>>>>>>> Eh, sure you can be my fanny pack.

>>>>cookingWine wrote:
>>>>> Please Juttabell!


Mugen (Dirkin)

Australia-izzle
Created On: 06/05/2008 17:52:59

Just dropping a line! heres a cat =^;^=
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): Ahaha, how cute! =^;^=

Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

Created On: 05/28/2008 13:53:08

JEZEBEL!
SHUT UP!
YOU STINK!

Er.
Forgive me. Superman was overtaken by the hulk of bad insults.
Juttabell, write something new.
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): Juttabell, heh, that's so cute^^;
I will write something new in due time; I'm swamped.


Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom)

Created On: 05/24/2008 08:08:22

how sweet. Ai Shite Imasu right back!!


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