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Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)
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Last Online 07/08/2008
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About Myself: Flickering screens.
Convulsions.
Enamorment. My Boyfriend.
Unconventionality & Quirkiness.
clever word play. the dictionary.
word pronunciations and the
word "pronunciation." gesticulatory exaggeration &
emphasis where there need be.
your shortcomings. your attributes and Jubilation.
contortionists. absolute justice.
thunderstorms and puissant wind.
naiveness and profundity. smooth surfaces.
Japanese Animation & gritting Electronica.
Anecdotes and their incongruous unravellings. Phlegmaticness and Courage. stainless reason and good judgment. Selflessness and Humility. Hope that is undeniably dependable. Dislike those that are only skin-deep,
and make the conscious decision
to remain ignorant and fester
in vanity.

Juttabell (a cookingWine Production)

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Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
May 13, 2008Do You Love Me Still?Poetry 370
Apr 29, 2008Nutty AbbotPoetry 296
Mar 6, 2008InsideMiscellaneous Stories 340
Jan 25, 2008InsanePoetry 1307

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05/14/2008 08:49:48Re:What's inside your noggin?Off-Topic27935
05/06/2008 21:30:01Re:What's inside your noggin?Off-Topic27935
05/06/2008 21:24:03Re:What's inside your noggin?Off-Topic27935
05/06/2008 17:08:48Re:What's inside your noggin?Off-Topic27935
04/17/2008 16:01:24Re:What's inside your noggin?Off-Topic27935
04/17/2008 15:45:05Re:What's inside your noggin?Off-Topic27935
03/31/2008 09:24:47Re:What's inside your noggin?Off-Topic27935
03/27/2008 10:53:57Re:The idea of poetry....Off-Topic499
03/22/2008 16:13:21Re:1800's ThreadOff-Topic12334
03/20/2008 21:44:15Re:What's inside your noggin?Off-Topic27935

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OFFLINE Kasi (Kasi elaborated)
OFFLINE JD Kelly (Juda)
OFFLINE Nate Stanford (nick711)
OFFLINE jesse (jesse2008)
OFFLINE Daniel Van Werkhoven (DoozerDan)
OFFLINE Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom)
OFFLINE Patrick O. (Roadkill315)
OFFLINE retrocious.[/sneh] (hxc inc.)
OFFLINE Alamo St-Jean (The_Gimp)
 
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Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

tied up and gagged in someone's basement!
 Created On: 07/05/2008 23:43:04
Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 07/06/2008 14:54:17
ahhh, you're red! red scares me because red reminds me of blood, which reminds me of revenge, which reminds me of christmas, which reminds me of serial killing hippies! who are you? who am I? i need to know these questions or i'm going to go insane...oopps, too late.

I was going through my comments and i wanted to thank you for reading and leaving such good comment on my story, Dog.

so, umm ... thanks

jesse (jesse2008)

How rude of me
 Created On: 07/05/2008 20:23:06
I should have signed your Profile Book, well I did it. YAY! You keep on writing Cell, yes I am calling you by your old name. Question where did that name come from, I know it's not from DBZ.
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): ^^"cell" came from those itty bitty microscopic things.. the ones with a nucleus... i dunno, i like the sound of what makes up a cell, and the fact that a cell is the basic structural unit of all organisms.
thank you for signing my profile book^^.
Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

 Created On: 06/18/2008 07:47:59
You forgot to add fanny pack to your about me.
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): No, I dumped you just a few days ago... don't you remember? It was for a coin purse.
Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

 Created On: 06/13/2008 12:50:17

BATGIRL.
FANNYPACK.
CHOOSE ONE. OR BOTH.
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): eh, i refuse to take this multiple-choice test.
it is bias.
Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

Cali.
 Created On: 06/12/2008 14:35:47
>>>>>>>>>>>CELL wrote (RE):
>>>>>>>>>>>>Yes, I'd love to be your fanny pack. In fact, can I be a fanny pack and your sidekick, at different times, when I'm in different moods? I implore you!
>>>>>>>>>>>>cookingWine wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>You are more like a fanny pack or a sidekick than a landlady.
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): Funny, I remember the conversation going more like this:


>>>>>>>>>>CELL wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>Eh, I'm bored. Goodbye.

>>>>>>>>>> cookingWine wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>Of course Juttabell, and you know that they only go "peuw peuw" for you!

>>>>>>>CELL wrote:
>>>>>>>>>> Fanny Pack (i.e. you), not unless you have some lasers inside you.

>>>>>>>>cookingWine wrote:
>>>>>>>>>> You are so gracious Juttabell, please, may I compliment you on your anatomy?

>>>>>CELL wrote:
>>>>>>>> Eh, sure you can be my fanny pack.

>>>>cookingWine wrote:
>>>>> Please Juttabell!
Mugen (Dirkin)

Australia-izzle
 Created On: 06/05/2008 17:52:59
Just dropping a line! heres a cat =^;^=
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): Ahaha, how cute! =^;^=
Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

 Created On: 05/28/2008 13:53:08
JEZEBEL!
SHUT UP!
YOU STINK!

Er.
Forgive me. Superman was overtaken by the hulk of bad insults.
Juttabell, write something new.
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): Juttabell, heh, that's so cute^^;
I will write something new in due time; I'm swamped.
Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom)

 Created On: 05/24/2008 08:08:22
how sweet. Ai Shite Imasu right back!!
Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

 Created On: 05/13/2008 17:57:57
Hello, Jezebel.
Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom)

 Created On: 05/06/2008 15:11:27
Boo!!!!!!!! haha.
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): Eep!

(haha)
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Comments

Title article: 23rd Century Digital Girl: Chapter 1
Date: 2008-05-14 09:27:37
Good.
Ha, what a cool title. That's what drew me to reading 
it. Reminds me of a series I wrote on here (Tomo's  
Guns), but I deleted it. Anyway, 'nuff about me, this was 
not so bad. I am certainly curious enough to read 
any continuations. I like all the robot, genetically 
engineered parts, digital systems crap (all that 
pretty sci-fi, futuristic stuff) so of course I had to read this. I think I will read the 2nd part now.

Title article: Predators of the Night
Date: 2008-05-14 09:10:53

Not too much to say... was descriptive and 
quite vivid. For an eerie effect, I guess you  
added the line, "The pack thirsts for warm blood." 
But I was like, 'They aren't werewolves you know?' 
But, be at ease, it was good. Still dunno  
why this is written in poem format, but if  
it weren't I probably would not have read it.  
Also dunno if you'd like this to be digested as 
symbolic or not.  
 
Adieu.

Title article: My World
Date: 2008-05-14 08:58:23

K, this needn't have been a poem. 
Read more like a narrative.  
It was, to me, in no sense, poetic. 
Luck.

Title article: Howard
Date: 2008-05-14 07:57:13
Was drawn into the story.
Good. Several grammar and spelling errors, but I 
dealt. You did a decent job of taking us through the 
mind of this cynic... this sexual predator. What you  
came up with in the end was good, thought it was 
suitable.

Title article: Do You Love Me Still?
Date: 2008-05-14 06:25:34

Ha, o.k!^^

Title article: Youtopia, Ch. 16
Date: 2008-05-12 10:58:04

S-E-X... has the mere enunciation of the word 
lost it's head-rotating effect? No, I don't think it 
has quite yet (ha).  
Hmm, I see where this is going... oi, how very 
tragic. 
This one seemed to lack a bit of the effort you 
usually put into each chapter, but ya, lethargy 
must be the explanation. No worries, still liked it.

Title article: Youtopia, Ch. 15
Date: 2008-05-12 10:37:30

Ah, sorry, I had read this already, but  
couldn't comment. Thought I'd raise your 
writing disposition to broiling degrees, well 
at least to a full 100. 
Ha, these new 'jock-type' characters are 
something; good leverage. 
I can hardly if ever find any 'holes' in your 
storyline, you have everything under control; 
you seem to fully understand the function of minor 
characters, setting, plot, main characters, motif,  
mood, etc. 
Ah, what a stress-inducing hanger. Great job.

Title article: Messenger of Hope
Date: 2008-05-10 23:41:45

I thought this one would be different 
from your other most recent poems, but 
it isn't. it's a bit more subtle, but it is  
expressing much of the same emotion 
the others are... this is weird, but it's almost  
as if you'd like this to be true, but it's not,  
it's reaching towards breaking past some 
hardship, but it is not succeeding... 
it is really good though. as I've said  
before, you are quite agile with pulling 
stanzas together (and even in rhyming format).

Title article: Insane
Date: 2008-05-10 23:24:01

haha, ^^. 
thank you.

Title article: A Night with the Babysitter
Date: 2008-05-06 13:42:49
Really liked it!
Ha, ya, pretty deranged for an eight 
year old kid, but eh, I liked this very much.  
The cutting her up into smaller pieces seemed 
way out of place to me... and I really didn't  
think you would take it so far as to make the 
boy self-inflict an injury at the end, but you didn't 
limit yourself (that's good), and 
I guess this is just how your humor rolls... I would 
have drawn the line at making her seem drunk (that 
was good, ha). 
 
This was adorably funny to me: 
 
"'She’s a Miss,' I say aloud as I dig with my one good hand, 'that means she doesn’t have a husband. If she doesn’t have a husband then she can’t have any/a family!'" 
 
Even if this was kept a bit more "G" (because technically it should have been [it's a humor piece and your main character is an 8-year old child] but nowadays, I understand that people are creating new trends) it would have been just as great. This was very well written as well! Thought you did a good job with imagery and similes.

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