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Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)
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Last Online 07/18/2008
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About Myself: Look, I just don't swing that way, okay?






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DateTitleCategoryHits
May 13, 2008Do You Love Me Still?Poetry 385
Apr 29, 2008Nutty AbbotPoetry 307
Mar 6, 2008InsideMiscellaneous Stories 350
Jan 25, 2008InsanePoetry 1321

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05/14/2008 08:49:48Re:What's inside your noggin?Off-Topic29382
05/06/2008 21:30:01Re:What's inside your noggin?Off-Topic29382
05/06/2008 21:24:03Re:What's inside your noggin?Off-Topic29382
05/06/2008 17:08:48Re:What's inside your noggin?Off-Topic29382
04/17/2008 16:01:24Re:What's inside your noggin?Off-Topic29382
04/17/2008 15:45:05Re:What's inside your noggin?Off-Topic29382
03/31/2008 09:24:47Re:What's inside your noggin?Off-Topic29382
03/27/2008 10:53:57Re:The idea of poetry....Off-Topic520
03/22/2008 16:13:21Re:1800's ThreadOff-Topic12604
03/20/2008 21:44:15Re:What's inside your noggin?Off-Topic29382

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OFFLINE jesse (jesse2008)
OFFLINE Daniel Van Werkhoven (DoozerDan)
OFFLINE Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom)
OFFLINE Patrick O. (Roadkill315)
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Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

tied up and gagged in someone's basement!
Created On: 07/05/2008 23:43:04
Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 07/06/2008 14:54:17


ahhh, you're red! red scares me because red reminds me of blood, which reminds me of revenge, which reminds me of christmas, which reminds me of serial killing hippies! who are you? who am I? i need to know these questions or i'm going to go insane...oopps, too late.

I was going through my comments and i wanted to thank you for reading and leaving such good comment on my story, Dog.

so, umm ... thanks


jesse (jesse2008)

How rude of me
Created On: 07/05/2008 20:23:06

I should have signed your Profile Book, well I did it. YAY! You keep on writing Cell, yes I am calling you by your old name. Question where did that name come from, I know it's not from DBZ.
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): ^^"cell" came from those itty bitty microscopic things.. the ones with a nucleus... i dunno, i like the sound of what makes up a cell, and the fact that a cell is the basic structural unit of all organisms.
thank you for signing my profile book^^.


Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

Created On: 06/18/2008 07:47:59

You forgot to add fanny pack to your about me.
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): No, I dumped you just a few days ago... don't you remember? It was for a coin purse.

Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

Created On: 06/13/2008 12:50:17


BATGIRL.
FANNYPACK.
CHOOSE ONE. OR BOTH.

Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): eh, i refuse to take this multiple-choice test.
it is bias.


Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

Cali.
Created On: 06/12/2008 14:35:47

>>>>>>>>>>>CELL wrote (RE):
>>>>>>>>>>>>Yes, I'd love to be your fanny pack. In fact, can I be a fanny pack and your sidekick, at different times, when I'm in different moods? I implore you!
>>>>>>>>>>>>cookingWine wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>You are more like a fanny pack or a sidekick than a landlady.
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): Funny, I remember the conversation going more like this:


>>>>>>>>>>CELL wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>Eh, I'm bored. Goodbye.

>>>>>>>>>> cookingWine wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>Of course Juttabell, and you know that they only go "peuw peuw" for you!

>>>>>>>CELL wrote:
>>>>>>>>>> Fanny Pack (i.e. you), not unless you have some lasers inside you.

>>>>>>>>cookingWine wrote:
>>>>>>>>>> You are so gracious Juttabell, please, may I compliment you on your anatomy?

>>>>>CELL wrote:
>>>>>>>> Eh, sure you can be my fanny pack.

>>>>cookingWine wrote:
>>>>> Please Juttabell!


Mugen (Dirkin)

Australia-izzle
Created On: 06/05/2008 17:52:59

Just dropping a line! heres a cat =^;^=
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): Ahaha, how cute! =^;^=

Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

Created On: 05/28/2008 13:53:08

JEZEBEL!
SHUT UP!
YOU STINK!

Er.
Forgive me. Superman was overtaken by the hulk of bad insults.
Juttabell, write something new.
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): Juttabell, heh, that's so cute^^;
I will write something new in due time; I'm swamped.


Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom)

Created On: 05/24/2008 08:08:22

how sweet. Ai Shite Imasu right back!!


Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

Created On: 05/13/2008 17:57:57

Hello, Jezebel.

Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom)

Created On: 05/06/2008 15:11:27

Boo!!!!!!!! haha.
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^): Eep!

(haha)


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Comments

Title article: Do You Love Me Still?
Date: 2008-05-28 13:49:37

Well, first of all, I was describing a common sort of woman. 
 
And second, oh yeah, fiddling with plastic dolls (i.e. you) is so much better. 
 
Toodles.

Title article: The Attack
Date: 2008-05-25 21:45:24

You know, I found it interesting how we usually refer to the one that sweeps us off our feet as Prince Charming, or our Knight in Shining Armor. Made me think of a very misleading facade (in the way you employed it here). Very good once again.

Title article: The Attack
Date: 2008-05-25 21:37:25
Really liked it.
You strung along the knight metaphor very well. The guard to represent this woman's usual defensive ways when it came to men's approaches... and then her allowing herself to become vulnerable for someone that apparently was no good (very aware of his bad intentions no less, and probably knitting all kinds of costumes for this man). A very relatable piece; a trap many of us have fallen into. 
Nice rhythm, good structure, and you wrote this 5-6 years ago, that's pretty impressive.

Title article: Money: A life's worth
Date: 2008-05-23 14:02:23
Excellent
Wow... this is some story. The core of it all is unbelievably intense, but the story is simple-worded making it easy to digest. I'm always so very impressed by the amount of insight you possess. I'm seriously just wowed.  
Excellent selflessness vs. self indulgence piece. 
And there were so many other facets to this, you've no idea how much it made me think, and realize there just isn't a politically correct answer (not that I want there to be), and that there's a huge gray area... 
 
Just wow Dirk.

Title article: The locked door/ intro
Date: 2008-05-23 09:38:33

Yeah, the ending was rather abrupt, but I understand that there will be a continuation. You've definitely, I think, captured your reader's attention. Personally, you've swayed this mind of mine into curiosity. Did a real good job with imagery too.  
Will read the next part.

Title article: Coma Twins Ch1 (revised)
Date: 2008-05-22 16:00:48

You integrated all of these neat descriptions, so ya that does make this 'fuller.' You should have kept some of the old stuff though, it made it more morbid, but I mean just continue on to the next chapter. I've got the concept you're going for here, so now expand. 
 
Good job. Oh and some of your words are glued onto others (likethis); I would fix that.

Title article: they say
Date: 2008-05-21 06:14:59

Ha, it just came to me, why I like this poem so much I mean: it reminded me of Gnarls Barkley's "Crazy"^^.

Title article: they say
Date: 2008-05-20 14:02:32

Ya, I was just going to say that the picture fits perfectly with the concept you have here, because it's just so absurd^^ (I really like the picture too, it's adorable, ha).  
 
You made writing this seem effortless. And it actually made me think quite a bit especially the third and seventh stanza. Surprisingly, I liked this one a lot!

Title article: Jen the Pirate
Date: 2008-05-20 09:40:24
Very entertaining
Heheh, this was adorably funny.

Title article: Youtopia, Ch. 19
Date: 2008-05-19 13:37:56

A different setting... that's nice. 
Truthfully I saw this coming, but to me, in this case, it means that you've made me want to get involved with the story.  
I'm still here, and still anxious to read the rest^^.

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