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Jutta Motrin (CELL)
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Online Status OFFLINE
Member Since 06/12/2007 13:53:12
Last Online 05/09/2008 14:25:12
Last Updated 05/09/2008 11:18:15
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Total Posts 72
Karma 2
Connections 31
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About Myself: Roughly, I wake up at 5:30 in the morning to arrive to work at 7:00. I'm victim to a computer screen and a telephone after that. I leave at 3:30 in the afternoon, and almost fall asleep on my way home. Once I'm home I stuff my face with junk and later take a nap.

Most of my education comes from the television...(-_-)

I like the Japanese and their stuff.

Put some hippie hoppie into life.

Many Happinesses!^^

Short Stories

DateTitleHitsRating
Tuesday, 29 April 2008Nutty Abbot168 / 5
Thursday, 06 March 2008Inside236 / 6
Friday, 25 January 2008Insane965 / 12

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05/06/2008 21:30:01Re:What's inside your noggin?Off-Topic14757
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03/20/2008 21:44:15Re:What's inside your noggin?Off-Topic14757
03/20/2008 21:34:05Re:What's inside your noggin?Off-Topic14757

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OFFLINE jesse (jesse2008)
OFFLINE Daniel Van Werkhoven (DoozerDan)
OFFLINE Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom)
OFFLINE Patrick O. (Roadkill315)
OFFLINE retrocious.[/sneh] (hxc inc.)
OFFLINE Alamo St-Jean (The_Gimp)
OFFLINE Billy (Vango)
OFFLINE Amanda (Theia of many names)
OFFLINE R.E.Potter (R.E.Potter)
OFFLINE George Saracen (gsaracen)
 
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Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom)
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Created On: 05/06/2008 16:11:27

Boo!!!!!!!! haha.
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (CELL): Eep!

(haha)


Mugen (Dirkin)
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Created On: 05/05/2008 01:22:57

Guestbook tag! You're it
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (CELL): Oh my god! What do I do, what do I do???!!

Mugen (Dirkin)
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that place between dreaming and awake, where you're kind of doing both
Created On: 05/02/2008 07:43:46

I just wanted to share a joke, via guestbook: Whats brown and sticky? A stick! Ahaha omg I'm lame
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (CELL): hahaha, try this for lame:

What do you call two Mexicans playing basketball?

= Juan on Juan.

Ha! That's actually kinda funny.^^


Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)
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Created On: 04/29/2008 22:57:27

haha i didn't have to get on here sooner or later. well the two entries you have on here i think are absolutely boring. really boring ideas. And your personality is just as boring. Thank you for making this site alot more boring. Oh yea and your name boring, just curious on what it means? is there a boring reason for Cell. i think it's pretty boring.
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (CELL): Hahaha, shut up Cole-Man!!
Or I'll have to serve you with my
mean, electric dance moves!


Lori Branson (lorislittlesecret)
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Here and there
Created On: 04/28/2008 06:54:02

Nice Wolf....
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (CELL): Haha, thanks.

I put it up there for my friend Cody... corny, but true (heh).


Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom)
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Created On: 04/21/2008 14:14:00

haha i had to get on here sooner or later. well the two entries you have on here i think are absolutely amazing. really interesting ideas. And your personality is just as amazing. Thank you for making this site alot more enjoyable. Oh yea and your name Cell, just curious on what it means? is there a specific reason for Cell. i think it's pretty cool.
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (CELL): You are too kind (heh).

I like your poetry, now that I've delved into it a little bit more; it's so thought-provoking; it's excellent, really!

Cell... I like it because of how intricate all of the words used to describe a cell's composition are... if that makes any sense, at all (???). And your screen name (resistanceisfreedom) tells me you have idealistic views, and are in many senses a liberal... that is very cool.

Many happinesses!

Yo.


David Neve (Tarhead Mugwump)
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Created On: 04/15/2008 02:47:00

your personalities bees multiplicating!
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (CELL): Ahh, yes... many forms have I.

Ha!


retrocious.[/sneh] (hxc inc.)
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Created On: 04/13/2008 07:57:53

D:
i am wondering
what happened to that chaptered story you had?
I was going to go read it today because I have time and -poof- it's not there.
i was going to leave such pretty comments, too.

Feedback from Jutta Motrin (CELL): Agh, that! Umm, I took it off because I wasn't satisfied with it (in general). It was really very bad... It only lasted what it did because so many people left such kind comments^^. The other two (Inside & Insane), I actually like. Heh, thanks anyway!

Adieu^^


retrocious.[/sneh] (hxc inc.)
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Created On: 04/10/2008 14:38:01

Ah, but I love thee more.


Feedback from Jutta Motrin (CELL): Tee-hee!

Mugen (Dirkin)
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infinity
Created On: 04/04/2008 05:01:49

Mugen lol. I shall name you megumi
Feedback from Jutta Motrin (CELL): ^O^ so cute.

Thank you!


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Comments

Total number of comments: 286

Title article: A Night with the Babysitter
Date: 2008-05-06 13:42:49
Really liked it!
Ha, ya, pretty deranged for an eight 
year old kid, but eh, I liked this very much.  
The cutting her up into smaller pieces seemed 
way out of place to me... and I really didn't  
think you would take it so far as to make the 
boy self-inflict an injury at the end, but you didn't 
limit yourself (that's good), and 
I guess this is just how your humor rolls... I would 
have drawn the line at making her seem drunk (that 
was good, ha). 
 
This was adorably funny to me: 
 
"'She’s a Miss,' I say aloud as I dig with my one good hand, 'that means she doesn’t have a husband. If she doesn’t have a husband then she can’t have any/a family!'" 
 
Even if this was kept a bit more "G" (because technically it should have been [it's a humor piece and your main character is an 8-year old child] but nowadays, I understand that people are creating new trends) it would have been just as great. This was very well written as well! Thought you did a good job with imagery and similes.

Title article: Nutty Abbot
Date: 2008-05-04 22:45:50

haha, damn you potter^^.

Title article: Nutty Abbot
Date: 2008-05-04 22:43:49

Thank you so much Mr. Neve! 
But I could never equal, much 
less top YOUR creativity! 
Thank you so very much once again^^.

Title article: our dying america
Date: 2008-05-03 16:49:52
GREAT.
Man. Great poem.  
Never could stand this mainstream, fit the mold 
or else setting we've established ... 
It's the stupidest thing ever. 
Damn power-hungry, self-absorbed bigots.  
 
Self-interest, that's about all you see nowadays... 
 
Way to clearly put this out. 
 
Excellent once again.  
Personally thought this was inspirational as well. 
 
that one negative comment must have 
come from a very close-minded and easily 
manipulated dumb ass.

Title article: Insane
Date: 2008-05-03 16:20:14

wow. thank you so very much 
for your kind comment^^

Title article: That Lonely Syllable.
Date: 2008-05-01 13:18:27

And actually I believe she's  
thinking of this while canoodling.

Title article: That Lonely Syllable.
Date: 2008-05-01 13:16:05
Wow.
Just wow. 
Powerful. 
Virtually disturbing 
BUT, 
I think this isn't as ugly 
as it seems. 
My guess is this is 
about a woman who 
wished she didn't have  
to grow up. 
Sigh, much like myself; I 
seriously couldn't have expressed  
myself better than how you've  
it done here. 
 
Loved it.

Title article: Youtopia, Ch. 14
Date: 2008-05-01 12:58:36

I hope you don't take offense, but 
you seem like someone who'd excel 
in writing novels like "Vampire Academy." 
I haven't read it myself, but I looked  
up a summary for it. Stuff like that 
flies off the shelves you know. 
But not only that, I'm sure you could 
even write up more serious stuff. 
There's I think much versatility in  
your talent. 
 
Excellent once again Sneh.

Title article: Youtopia, Ch. 13
Date: 2008-05-01 11:05:28

"only form of entertainment it seems I have left is counting exactly how many brave little hairs are still clinging, however futilely, to Mr. Cellian’s head."  
 
Loved that line, ha. 
 
Pretty cool, that you implemented notes between Morgue and Derek into the story. Boosted up the level of entertainment.  
 
"And what if she had been a lesbian...would’ve she have been weirded out by my liking her? " 
 
And this one line, interesting way of putting things. Made me think. 
 
Great job once again! I'm heading on to the next chapter now.

Title article: Smoke, Steel, and Innuendo
Date: 2008-05-01 08:43:46

A gun is most commonly used 
as a phallic symbol... I sort of  
have that impregnated in my 
mind... it was a good attempt, I'll  
give you that.

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