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Member Since	10/07/2008
Last Online	01/04/2009
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About Myself:

I'm 26, have been writing for a bit. Wanted to share some of my writing with other writers.

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Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Nov 1, 2008	More Madness	Non-Fiction	192
Oct 27, 2008	The Wedding Party	Non-Fiction	202
Oct 7, 2008	The train that forgets to stop at every station	Non-Fiction	180

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Total number of comments: 19

Title article: Shattered Window
Date: 2008-11-25 16:23:43

Good, good story, I was never really sure which way it was going to go at many points, were you going to be discovered by Mr. Stites? Were you going to try and get away with it? Were you going to confess? Would your father beat you? and then a happy ending good stuff.

Title article: my first memory
Date: 2008-11-25 16:11:01

Hi,

Lovely story, descriptive and kinda comforting :) My only small criticism is the title, I feel it took some of the mystery away from the story. Other that that, good work!

Title article: ceramics, Chapter 00
Date: 2008-11-25 16:03:11

Love that line: I thought about going to see a prostitute, to further my life experience but I decided I couldn't be fucked.

Title article: about writing, Chapter 2
Date: 2008-11-24 17:23:53

Really liked your piece, it makes me think about why I started writing.

Title article: Fakesong
Date: 2008-11-07 19:17:39

I adore the last two lines,

without freedom,
we are nothing.

Beautiful.

Title article: It's Still Out There
Date: 2008-11-03 17:02:17

Very Cool
Ha Ha Ha, laughing my face off ; ) Loved it, one of the most original stories I'v heard on here. Just Brilliant.

Title article: café light
Date: 2008-11-01 11:01:33

It must must be shit to see your husband like that. But being able to write is a huge gift. Hope things work out ok for you msg me anyttime.

Title article: Ouch!
Date: 2008-11-01 10:49:32

Sorry, but this doesn't do anything for me.

Title article: Richards bad day
Date: 2008-11-01 10:42:07

he he he. Good Putting the cat under the neighbours car, brilliant idea! and good writing. Good light hearted story.

Title article: The Return
Date: 2008-11-01 10:30:41

Nice. Really twisted and dark like good horror should be. You took me into his mind and I loved how you inverted God with hate instead of love.

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