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Website/Blog: raymondgatchalian.blog.friendster.com/
About Myself: i love poetry..

i love reading fictional novels..

my favorite author is nicholas sparks and my favorite book of him is a walk to remember..

i've read the harry potter series also..

and now my next target is the twilight saga by stephenie meyer..

i love writing poems and short stories..

i love music and movies..


Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Dec 15, 2008Again?Poetry 81
Nov 19, 2008I Was There.....Where Are You?Poetry 82
Nov 7, 2008If I Could I wouldPoetry 138
Oct 10, 2008Have ConsciencePoetry 176
Oct 6, 2008If OnlyPoetry 146
Oct 5, 2008It's Only LifePoetry 159

Comments

Total number of comments: 23

Title article: you let me die
Date: 2008-12-15 05:35:43
thank you...
i didn't really understand it until I saw your post which explains the content of this poem... 
 
I think this one is quite effective..so thank you for the explanation..ahhahahah 
 
well... 
 
write on... 
 
write whatever you want... 
 
smile.. 
 
-out-

Title article: Elijah
Date: 2008-11-19 01:34:45

I hate it... 
 
I hate it for making me cry..haahah 
 
it's such a painful story... 
 
I can feel the emotions.... 
 
great job..... 
 
shocking and touching.... 
 
well written and has a good flow..... 
 
continue creating stories like this.... 
 
i loved it...

Title article: It Doesn't Take Much: Contest, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-11-19 01:22:47

it was fantastic.... 
 
but i didn't have an ending too..hahah 
 
But I promise I would make an ending.. 
 
I liked it so much...

Title article: Plastic
Date: 2008-11-19 01:17:20

I liked this poem.... 
 
I love imagery in this.... 
 
I think this poem is all about faking or not showing your real self..... 
 
good job..... 
 
it was a fun read..... 
 
keep on writing.... 
 
smile.... 
 
-out-

Title article: Have Conscience
Date: 2008-11-07 22:41:31

hafwit..tnx for reminding.. I didn't notice it before..haah

Title article: Her Magic Touch, Chapter 2
Date: 2008-10-10 03:04:35
great..
the story is getting better.. 
 
i love the i love the dialogue and the narration.. 
 
this is awesome.. 
 
it has a lot of potential.. 
 
i will read the next chapter.. 
 
i saw it.. 
 
it is posted already.. 
 
i'll go and visit your profile..heheh 
 
great job.. 
 
keep on writing.. 
 
bye2x.. 
 
smile.. 
 
-out-

Title article: Misery
Date: 2008-10-10 02:54:30
awesome..
it is short but direct to the point.. 
 
i think this would be more beautiful if you made it longer.. 
 
but otherwise.. 
 
it's a good poem.. 
 
i enjoyed reading it.. 
 
it took me less than a minute..heheh 
 
great.. 
 
keep on writing..

Title article: Poppy Appeal
Date: 2008-10-06 07:50:34
great..
this is so funny..hahahah 
 
i loved your work so much.. 
 
it made me forget about the others..heheh 
 
just continue writing.. 
 
you're talented.. 
 
it was a great read.. 
 
i will definitely read your ather works.. 
 
bye2x.. 
 
-0ut-

Title article: Love Crawls Down the Drain
Date: 2008-10-06 07:47:54
wonderful
worth reading.. 
 
it was not a waste of time.. 
 
i really liked how you described the break-up.. 
 
the methapor you used was just awesome.. 
 
i will definitely pay attention on your other works.. 
 
im going to read them.. 
 
i really loved this one.. 
 
smiles.. 
 
keep on writing,, 
 
bye.. 
 
-out-

Title article: Belle Reve, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-10-06 07:37:07
i loved it..
i'd like to see the next chapter.. 
 
as a series, this is a good opening chapter.. 
 
I think there is a big story ahead.. 
 
i will definitely read the second chapter.. 
 
keep on writing okay.. 
 
you have a talent..

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