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Member Since	10/05/2008
Last Online	01/03/2009
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Website/Blog:	raymondgatchalian.blog.friendster.com/
About Myself:	i love poetry.. i love reading fictional novels.. my favorite author is nicholas sparks and my favorite book of him is a walk to remember.. i've read the harry potter series also.. and now my next target is the twilight saga by stephenie meyer.. i love writing poems and short stories.. i love music and movies..

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Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Dec 15, 2008	Again?	Poetry	81
Nov 19, 2008	I Was There.....Where Are You?	Poetry	82
Nov 7, 2008	If I Could I would	Poetry	138
Oct 10, 2008	Have Conscience	Poetry	176
Oct 6, 2008	If Only	Poetry	146
Oct 5, 2008	It's Only Life	Poetry	159

Comments

Total number of comments: 23

Title article: you let me die
Date: 2008-12-15 05:35:43

thank you...
i didn't really understand it until I saw your post which explains the content of this poem...

I think this one is quite effective..so thank you for the explanation..ahhahahah

well...

write on...

write whatever you want...

smile..

-out-

Title article: Elijah
Date: 2008-11-19 01:34:45

I hate it...

I hate it for making me cry..haahah

it's such a painful story...

I can feel the emotions....

great job.....

shocking and touching....

well written and has a good flow.....

continue creating stories like this....

i loved it...

Title article: It Doesn't Take Much: Contest, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-11-19 01:22:47

it was fantastic....

but i didn't have an ending too..hahah

But I promise I would make an ending..

I liked it so much...

Title article: Plastic
Date: 2008-11-19 01:17:20

I liked this poem....

I love imagery in this....

I think this poem is all about faking or not showing your real self.....

good job.....

it was a fun read.....

keep on writing....

smile....

-out-

Title article: Have Conscience
Date: 2008-11-07 22:41:31

hafwit..tnx for reminding.. I didn't notice it before..haah

Title article: Her Magic Touch, Chapter 2
Date: 2008-10-10 03:04:35

great..
the story is getting better..

i love the i love the dialogue and the narration..

this is awesome..

it has a lot of potential..

i will read the next chapter..

i saw it..

it is posted already..

i'll go and visit your profile..heheh

great job..

keep on writing..

bye2x..

smile..

-out-

Title article: Misery
Date: 2008-10-10 02:54:30

awesome..
it is short but direct to the point..

i think this would be more beautiful if you made it longer..

but otherwise..

it's a good poem..

i enjoyed reading it..

it took me less than a minute..heheh

great..

keep on writing..

Title article: Poppy Appeal
Date: 2008-10-06 07:50:34

great..
this is so funny..hahahah

i loved your work so much..

it made me forget about the others..heheh

just continue writing..

you're talented..

it was a great read..

i will definitely read your ather works..

bye2x..

-0ut-

Title article: Love Crawls Down the Drain
Date: 2008-10-06 07:47:54

wonderful
worth reading..

it was not a waste of time..

i really liked how you described the break-up..

the methapor you used was just awesome..

i will definitely pay attention on your other works..

im going to read them..

i really loved this one..

smiles..

keep on writing,,

bye..

-out-

Title article: Belle Reve, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-10-06 07:37:07

i loved it..
i'd like to see the next chapter..

as a series, this is a good opening chapter..

I think there is a big story ahead..

i will definitely read the second chapter..

keep on writing okay..

you have a talent..

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