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Member Since	05/29/2007 17:07:19
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Total number of comments: 6

Title article: Peace be with You
Date: 2007-07-06 18:54:03

it was a very interesting story... i enjoyed reading it because it reminded me of a crush i had... 8)

Title article: Conundrum with the Double X Chromosome
Date: 2007-05-29 19:46:10

sweet!
:) nice it seems this person is some what of a stalker. These emotions would be better writen as a poem

Title article: In The Moment
Date: 2007-05-29 19:42:51

nice
its has very good word choice. The only down side to this story is that fact that there is only feeling. I was confued because you continued to repet yourself. The feeling expressed here would be beter in a poem. not a story. Because a story involves: DDT
D= diolog
D= discription
T= thought

In this you have minimal discription. :sigh :x :roll :upset

Title article: Rotting Away
Date: 2007-05-29 19:33:56

um...
don't want to be rude ...but this wasn't that great. i liked it because it was short and quick unlike the other stories. I think you need to put more emotion into it. A good story starts with a good idea; which you have,but you made the story very undescriptive. I couldn't picture any of it. Because it had very little descriptoin, i could not picture or find intrest in this story. You should also make it more scarrier. :x :roll

Title article: Victim of Memory
Date: 2007-05-29 19:25:55

amazing! :eek

Title article: First Kiss Outdone
Date: 2007-05-29 19:22:03

it's sweet but it need a more interesting conflict. It's what makes the story interesting to read.

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