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J. J. White (whitj310)
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Member Since 05/25/2007
Last Online 01/07/2009
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Website/Blog: www.jjwhite.org
About Myself: I'm a new writer from Florida. I've finished two novels, "Earned Inheritance" and "The Lesbian Murders." I've written 40 short stories.
Surf (in ocean not computer) tennis, golf. Love writing.

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Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Dec 27, 2008She Dances on Her ToesMiscellaneous Stories 86
May 27, 2008Suicide ChronicleMiscellaneous Stories 138
Apr 29, 2008New Writing Prompt #5- KaleidoscopeHorror 232
Apr 8, 2008Writing Prompt "The Gambler and the Bum"Miscellaneous Stories 216
Mar 24, 2008Kat's Simple ThingsPoetry 202
Mar 10, 2008The Prodigious WriterMiscellaneous Stories 224
Feb 29, 2008Topic 2 tooMystery 388
Feb 19, 2008Larry topic 14?Humor 368
Jan 28, 2008Dead Puppies in a PillowcaseHorror 459
Jan 11, 2008Space AssassinScience Fiction 498
Jan 1, 200810-12-06Adventure 367
Dec 23, 2007Happy F----ing HolidaysHumor 524
Nov 17, 2007The Bethlehem BiblesMiscellaneous Stories 748
Nov 6, 2007SandcastleMiscellaneous Stories 447
Oct 23, 2007The Chinese UndertakerHorror 709
Oct 14, 2007She’ll Be the Death of HimHorror 902
Sep 28, 2007Double DragonsHorror 605
Sep 18, 2007Frog head biting CoachMiscellaneous Stories 947
Sep 10, 2007Lost Twilight Zone Episode …WishScience Fiction 848
Aug 10, 2007Chicken Eating SpidersHorror 2052
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Title article: A Clown's Life
Date: 2008-03-04 06:48:16
A Clown's Life
This is my favorite of your stories. It reads very much like a poem and could be expanded to a 5-7000 word short story. Your command of the language and syntax is flawless, much advanced for your age. 
JJ

Title article: Why I Shaved My Head
Date: 2008-03-04 06:33:48
Why I Shaved My Head
Excellent writing. Grammatically perfect. At first I thought it was a piece of non-fiction -- maybe it is. Your very gifted. This story is a good example of both skilled writing and interesting storyline, 
JJ

Title article: Topic 2 - 3/3/08
Date: 2008-03-03 15:53:17
Nice
It's funny, I have that same dream of that damn donkey every night. Eddie Murphy killed the husband. Except for the stretch segue with the donkey, the story was marvelous. Good plot line and character emotion. 
Keep it up. 
JJ

Title article: Topic 2 too
Date: 2008-02-29 19:19:10
Topic 2 too
Thanks guys. Lori comes up with great prompts. It's a lot of fun to write and good practice. 
JJ

Title article: Larry topic 14?
Date: 2008-02-20 10:06:26
Larry Topic 14?
Thanks, 
It might have been more appropriate if it had started out "It was a dark and stormy night" 
Snoopy JJ

Title article: Dead Puppies in a Pillowcase
Date: 2008-02-18 15:59:45
Dead Puppies in a Pillowcase
Thanks, Christian, 
I 'm the product of a mixed marriage. my wife likes cats and I like dogs. Since I write the stories, I get to kill the cats. Yea! 
JJ

Title article: Loneliness
Date: 2008-01-17 19:46:09
Hopefully not autobiographical
Lori 
"Foreboding" is a noun so, I don't think you need to add "looking" to it. This feels like a novel chapter since it leaves you wanting to read more. Very well written. 
JJ

Title article: Satine's Musings On Her Love
Date: 2008-01-04 12:52:00
Well Written
Rachel, 
I normally don't enjoy reading fan fiction but I was impressed with this interpretation. You use quite a few metaphors, but again I assume your projecting the character's thoughts. I hope to read more of your writing.  
JJ

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Last 10 Forum Posts
DateSubjectCategoryHits
06/23/2008 14:38:49Re:What Happened to Storiesville?Off-Topic8724
04/29/2008 16:32:20Re:New Topic # 5...i thinkOff-Topic2611
04/20/2008 15:58:51Re:Any writers from Vermont?Off-Topic282
03/06/2008 19:25:43Re:The 13th.Off-Topic9578
03/05/2008 09:24:01Re:The 13th.Off-Topic9578
02/29/2008 22:37:45Re:TOPIC 2Off-Topic3150
02/20/2008 01:03:21Re:Write A Quick One!Off-Topic1090

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