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Michelle S (Murky)
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About Myself: I like to write. In college I used to crack people up. I'm looking for someone who would be interested in either paying me or publishing me for free. But I'm not paying to be published.

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Sep 23, 2008Existentialist mime storyMiscellaneous Stories 466
Sep 23, 2008college magazine articlesHumor 324

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Total number of comments: 14

Title article: Poppy Appeal
Date: 2008-09-24 18:02:06
Cats
My name is Miss Michelle and I give this a ten because ... I ... 
LOVE...CATS!

Title article: Existentialist mime story
Date: 2008-09-24 17:49:51
Holy Guacamole.
Holy Guacamole! I didn't think this would get ten hits. I mean, who on earth wants to read existential mime stories. But thank you for all your nice comments.

Title article: Two Profound Words
Date: 2008-09-24 14:01:28
riveting
Al ot of people can't write stuff like this without coming across as looking for shock value. You pulled it off. It was easy to focus on this because it stayed interesting the whole time. Some people insist forgivness helps a victim. Other people say prosecutuin helps the victim psychologically.

Title article: They are the Dead
Date: 2008-09-24 13:53:13
Neat-o-Rama
I think this would be better if you cut out the pop singer and replaced it with something more cryptic. Good rhythm and meter and all that poetry stuff. Good theme.

Title article: Peanut Butter and Doom
Date: 2008-09-23 20:33:20
Silly
This is a very silly story. I think kids would love it. This would be a great incentive for them to get into bed. Promise to read them the silly peanut butter story. This would be much better for a bedtime story than the stuff kids are supposed to like.

Title article: You Want What?
Date: 2008-09-23 20:27:02

That was hilarious! I had a phone job!

Title article: Mr. Cook
Date: 2008-09-23 20:23:47

That's what I used to think of some teachers in high school. Then, I realized when I grew up they were no where near that bad and they all just wanted to help me grow up to be a good person. It looks like people here are down on teacher haters. This would do great with a younger audience.

Title article: The Matriarchy
Date: 2008-09-23 20:18:35
Good beginning
I wish you had stuck with women ruling the world and making it a perfect place. But, I guess that wouldn't be fair to the men.

Title article: Going Home
Date: 2008-09-23 18:51:39
This story was really sad.
This story made me sad. The ending was supposed to be happy but it made me sad. I know lots uf people love stories like this, but it just made me cry.

Title article: falling apart
Date: 2008-09-23 18:44:22
Cool death poem
Poetry people always love death poems. It's clear cut, concise and has a point. I like that in a poem. It's distressing because it seems real, as if it really happened to you. But, poems are supposed to cause the reader to feel emotion. So, it's cool.

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