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Member Since	09/16/2008
Last Online	11/17/2008
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About Myself:

My name's Sophie, believe it or not..
I'm in my second year of an aerospace engineering/science degree at Monash University in Clayton, Melbourne, Australia. I work as a waitress at a Mexican restaurant, and as such, I can make a mean enchilada (which are so much tastier than burritos!).

I've been writing short stories and poems in my spare time for years and I've never really shown anyone before. So i really don't have any idea of how they rate against other people's work (I like to think they're pretty awesome, but I'm probably biased lol jk).

So hit me with your comments, good or bad, and I'll try not to cry too much!

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Nov 6, 2008	Never Parted	Poetry	97
Oct 29, 2008	I Am the Moon	Poetry	173
Oct 23, 2008	The Fault is Mine	Poetry	99
Oct 20, 2008	Magic	Poetry	120
Oct 18, 2008	Tears	Poetry	90
Oct 13, 2008	Falling	Poetry	131
Oct 7, 2008	Internet Love	Poetry	147
Oct 4, 2008	Regret	Poetry	85
Oct 3, 2008	Death By Silence	Poetry	73
Oct 1, 2008	Painting Walls	Poetry	139
Sep 30, 2008	Offering	Poetry	98
Sep 28, 2008	Gone	Poetry	114
Sep 26, 2008	Night Prisoner	Poetry	127
Sep 24, 2008	The Island	Poetry	142
Sep 21, 2008	Verloren	Miscellaneous Stories	127
Sep 18, 2008	When There's No Other Choice	Mystery	223
Sep 17, 2008	Breaking the Silence	Miscellaneous Stories	163

Comments

Total number of comments: 43

Title article: Plastic
Date: 2008-11-13 01:06:23

loved the imagery in this.. i especially like "carving a smile out of that frown"..brilliant!!

it didn't seem to flow as well as some of your other poems for me, but still really good

Title article: The Rainstorm
Date: 2008-11-06 22:12:15

this was excellent! you have captured the despair of depression..
i particularly liked the last line..
'the rain is washing me away too quickly' - great finish

Title article: The Poet: An Introduction, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-11-06 04:18:57

i was very confused as well.. i guess you were trying to create mystery to draw the reader in.. but it was just a little to disjointed!!
i'm interested to know where this story goes though!

Title article: Metamorphosis
Date: 2008-11-01 06:18:00

so this is probably just because my brain has imploded from studying, but i didn't even notice the change in person. i liked this a lot.. especially on the second read through, and i thought the change to first person made the story more personal and moving
anyways.. nice work

Title article: Who are You?
Date: 2008-10-24 19:39:35

yeah, i really liked this a lot.. like darcknyt, i didn't get it at first, but the second read through made the whole piece more amazing!
very interesting

Title article: The Dark Soul
Date: 2008-10-24 19:35:51

i liked this... it was very dark and raised valid points - why does society shun those that try to be a little different?! very nice writing... i hope you find your astronomer

Title article: THE TWO SIDE OF THE COINS
Date: 2008-10-23 20:31:11

i'm sorry.. it's probably just me, but i seemed to get very lost in some parts.. it didn't make much sense to me! but i gave you a 3 because main point that you made i thought was very true.. as in having an inner face that you never really show anyone fully, and a face you display to the world to be accepted..

Title article: Stronger Than Blood, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-10-23 17:38:13

Yeah, i enjoyed this immensely. i have to say that my knowledge of regency is very lacking.. so as far as i could tell, it was perfect! didn't realise that she was a vampire until your note at the end, but it makes a whole lot of sense now.. i was wondering how she'd had time for all those husbands... i thought maybe they'd all met suspicious ends or something..
so yeah, goodjob, i'll be looking for ward to the next chapter

Title article: my poem
Date: 2008-10-23 17:22:11

Yeah, i agree with resistance about the rhyming pattern, it sort of dissolved into just random thoughts you were having, like a diary or something. but i have to say, this brings back memories haha!
and yes you should totally make the first move ;)

Title article: Magic
Date: 2008-10-20 15:52:27

uh i've changed the font, so hopefully it's not in symbols any more... i could read it fine.. not sure what's wrong with it...

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Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom)	Created On: 10/06/2008 17:21:22 oh no one has yet to sign your book. but i'm glad i will be the first. well, as you know, i am a fan of your work. and you are a great person as well. oh and hurry and reply to my message haha. later.

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