Primal Need, Chapter 1

Primal Need - Chapter 1 Blood. The metallic...

Elijah

The distant door closed shut behind him with a click....
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DateTitleCategoryHits
Nov 13, 2008Belle Reve, Chapter 2Romance 57
Sep 27, 2008Belle Reve, Chapter 1Romance 274
Sep 27, 2008Twice in Two Years, Chapter 6Romance 127
Sep 27, 2008Twice In Two Years, Chapter 5Romance 126
Sep 23, 2008Twice in Two Years, Chapter 4Romance 147
Sep 18, 2008Twice in Two Years, Chapter 3Romance 182
Sep 14, 2008Twice in Two Years, Chapter 1Romance 247
Sep 13, 2008Twice in Two Years, Chapter 2Romance 243

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Total number of comments: 23

Title article: Belle Reve, Chapter 2
Date: 2008-11-13 18:50:18

im just trying to get back into the swing of things, i haven't written properly in about a month or so. 
the next chapter will be much longer, i promise.

Title article: Tuousrol-Voan, Chapter 0
Date: 2008-11-13 16:52:29

Not normally into this genre of fiction, but very good writing. A bit more detail would have made the story a bit more enjoyable, as well as more of a backstory. But overall, very nice work.

Title article: LIFE OF GRIEF
Date: 2008-11-11 22:10:20

Wow...just wow. You have this amazing high diction with your words, it shows how sophisticated your piece is. And as for the writing itself, it was true, in a slightly morbid/twisted sense. I'll be looking for more of your work later on.

Title article: It Doesn't Take Much, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-11-11 22:07:37

beautifully written. not a huge fan of how the spacing worked out, but i did enjoy your writing style. keep up the fabulous work.

Title article: Belle Reve, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-09-29 16:31:38

I will say that originally, I wanted to add more to this but I was rushed getting it up. The next chapter should be posted by Thursday, at the latest

Title article: Belle Reve, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-09-27 22:33:26

Thanks. I've had this idea in my head for a while, but this will hopefully turn out to be a very big story.

Title article: A Healing ©
Date: 2008-09-27 20:49:40

Your vocabulary and diction are quite impressive here. Your story is pieced together very nicely, my attention was held throughout the entire piece. Well done. I'll be sure to look out for more from you.

Title article: Pretty China
Date: 2008-09-27 20:47:39

I actually really enjoyed this, and this sort of format for a story can easily bore me. I'll be looking for more of your work in the future.

Title article: Losing Him
Date: 2008-09-27 20:46:26

Some words were a bit repititive and some puncuation could be better. But overall, very nice.

Title article: Twice in Two Years, Chapter 6
Date: 2008-09-27 20:40:20

Thank you. 
 
I hope there's more, it depends on my muse. 
 
But right now, the girl's done. The message she sent to him was kind of a last straw deal, and although she wants him to take the chance and be with her, she knows he wont and accepts it.

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r.e.potter (r.e.potter)

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 Created On: 09/27/2008 20:10:55
Hey, welcome to storiesville and thanks for the comment on my story the Healing. I look forward to reading your story and series. Like I say in my profile. I like to read, so Ill get around to yours eventually.
Cute pic by the way.

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