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Cyraus Foldger (Cyraus Foldger)
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Website/Blog: robinttgo.proboards105.com/index.cgi
About Myself: I am a gothic Christian.
Yes, there is such a thing. Gothic does not mean you worship Satan or are an atheist or whatever. It just means that you are not afraid to show that you like dark things and black. I like gloominess and darkness, but that does not mean I don't love God. I do. This is my second year of confirmation. Need I explain more?

I like anime, a lot. I usually go for the adventurous, horrorish, suspense anime (Like: Blood+, Bleach, Elfen Lied, Full Metal Alchemist, Avatar: The Last Airbender (I consider it anime, also Teen Titans) and Death Note). I also like Medium with Patricia Arquette and Hell's Kitchen (GORDAN RAMSAY! ^^).

I like to read, a lot. I like to read the same type of anime I watch. My favorites are: Harry Potter, Twilight, The Unseen (series), Carrie, Spooksville, Alosha (series), To Catch A Theif (series), Audrey Rose, and The Beast of Noor.

I like vampires and werewolves, a lot.
I like to roleplay, a lot.
My Three Favorite Words:
Nothingness- When I think about the word, it's just nothing. To some, it may seem like it's a bad thing. A world full of emptiness is nothingness. But I believe that nothingness can be filled with everything. I just like nothingness.
Empathy- When I think about this word, it just satisfies me. Empathy is when you understand and be considerate to people's feelings. In my life, I have a scarcity of that. It is one of my life's desires. Is people to have empathy for me and everyone else. I like the definition of empathy.
Abyss- It's a pretty word, I think. A bottomless pit... a void... It's kind of like nothingness, but when I think of a bottomless pit, I think of a heart. Or how a heart should be. I like to say the word abyss, because I think it's very pretty.

But there are many things that I do not like.
Arrogant people.
Snotty people.
Oblivious people.
Heartless people.
Selfish people.
Vindictive people.
Whiny people.
Girly (meaning 'omg! that is so grossss!') people.
People that are against homosexuality (Gay/lesbian/bisexuality).
Pink.
That's pretty much it.

I am currently working on a book called My Blue Rose. It is about this one girl who is seduced by a demon trying to get her to become evil. On her side is a demon hunter, Seth Donahue, who dearly hopes he can help Lorna Foldger (Larizer) before it's too late.

*yawn* Okay, I think that's it...

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Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Oct 2, 2008Death Dance, Chapter 4Horror 125
Sep 21, 2008Death Dance, Chapter 3Horror 100
Sep 9, 2008Death Dance, Chapter 2Horror 111
Sep 1, 2008Death Dance, Chapter 1Horror 304

Comments

Total number of comments: 22

Title article: HOUSE.
Date: 2008-10-03 14:45:14
I am Speechless
I am utterly speechless. This was an amazing story. It was short, but I could feel all the emotions bleeding out in that piece. It was like it was lengthly in my mind. I could see it... I could see all these people, summoning her to the life of hell. It was brutal, and disturbing... An utter torment to the reader. But yet, it is a blessing... 
Well done. 
-Cyraus

Title article: A Healing ©
Date: 2008-10-02 18:22:43
Impressive
I apsolutely loved the vivid details. It was very interesting, and I can tell that you have an extended vocabulary. The dialogue in this is very impressive and engrossing. I thoguht the twist at the end was brilliant and clever, but I wish that you told what Elrod was going to do with the vaccine. But other than that, it was awesome! ^^ Great job. 
-Cyraus

Title article: Hallowed Be Thy Name
Date: 2008-09-22 21:27:40
Genius!
I wasn't surprised at the brilliance of this piece, as all your other ones are. You are a real writer who can process and translate these emotions into words like no one else can. The vivid descriptions of mixed feelings, the abnormal passion and those powerful worlds. So entrancing. So much suspense! I was hooked within the first paragraph. It was an amazing story. Again, you are on my favorites! ^^ 
Sincerest grattitude, 
Cyraus

Title article: Fifty-One
Date: 2008-09-22 20:58:50
Twisted
That was a very creepy ghost story. I loved the twist at the end and it is very clever. A perfect story to be told at a campfire!  
I thought it was very enjoyable. Great job. 
-Cyraus

Title article: Suggestion
Date: 2008-09-21 19:48:11
Different
I thought it was a very chilling and twisted piece. Not a typical plot, and that's what I like about it. The hypothetical twist at the end is great and a surprise. I enjoyed it very much!

Title article: Light from the tree of Life
Date: 2008-09-14 19:35:56
Creative
How entrancing! You are clearly a talented person. What a way with words you have with this charming poem! It reminds me of the song "You Raise Me Up" by Josh Groban. It is very vivid and deluctible. A great poem.

Title article: A New Beginning
Date: 2008-09-14 19:24:23
Colorful
I adore how this piece of artwork has vivid details and colorful rhymes. I thought it was so sweet and enjoyable. It is a poem that I would like to read over and over again whenever I feel lonely.

Title article: If The Sun Didn't Rise
Date: 2008-09-14 19:18:36
Poetic
An amazing story. I loved the compassion and suspense between Maria and him. The memory slowly receding from him made my heart ache and I felt like crying. The words were so poetic and I just love it so much. Mere words cannot express the emptiness he felt with the lost memories.  
What a sensational piece of artwork. The words can just paint a picture of rain, an endless sunrise, and Maria and him.  
God, I love this! Sorry, for my outburst. Okay, I'm going to stop writing now before I go insane. Alright? See ya...  
(Guess what? My name is Maria! Unfortunately I am not Spanish, but I have raven hair. Finally a reason that I am glad to have the name.)

Title article: Whore
Date: 2008-09-14 18:36:13
Truthful
I thought it was a little depressing, but it had emotion it it. Her desperation to find out who she really is is perpective. I thought it was a depressingly truthful piece. I wish that you added more, like her background and how she became to be a prostitute, but it is great as it is. 
Emotionally brilliant. Great job.

Title article: A Dish Served Cold
Date: 2008-09-14 18:26:17
Compelling
I thought it was a very gripping story and I enjoyed it very much. I also loved the descriptive murders. I've always enjoyed pieces from the murderer's point of view and it was very clever. 
The last sentence was a keeper. With just the right words at the right time. Of course, I'm sure you've heard of that many times. 
Brilliant job.

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Warwick, RI
 Created On: 09/14/2008 19:23:54
Hey Cyraus,
I too am a Christian. And while I am drawn to the light, I have a past that demands my pen dabble in the issues of the dark. Thanks for your "James" catch in "Window to Hell." I made the correction. I was not offended by your comment at all. In fact, I agree that this first submission is somewhat milquetoast, undeveloped, and short. It seems stories have a hard time getting reviews on this site if they are of the long variety or deep. After reading your profile, I would love to point you to a couple of my other pieces. When you get a chance check out "The Possessor of All" and "Bitten." Hope you dig them. Either way, nice to have you on board. -D

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