An unexpected gift, Chapter 1

(Author's note: It's the first chapter to an attempt...

Broken Glass

The first thing Pamela noticed when she opened her...
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Website/Blog: www.myspace.com/indytagmusic
About Myself: My name is Eliot. I write stories.

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Jan 8, 2009TV NewsPoetry 21
Jan 1, 2009Lord Have Mercy #1+2Humor 590
Dec 28, 2008ChoicePoetry 152
Dec 19, 2008Lord have Mercy #1Humor 811
Nov 27, 2008ThirteenPoetry 147
Aug 9, 2008HeyPoetry 186
Jul 23, 2008The Meeting With the KingHumor 221
Jul 22, 2008Cigarettes and Cluster BombsMiscellaneous Stories 249
Jul 18, 2008Ant on a HillMiscellaneous Stories 230

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Total number of comments: 65

Title article: At Your Command
Date: 2009-01-08 09:57:13
amusing
I'd like a signed photo from god. 
 
Phil: 
Keep on truckin'! 
-God 
 
Yup, that would definitely earn a place on the fridge. Amusing stuff, keep on truckin'! :P

Title article: MELON COLLIE
Date: 2009-01-05 19:21:33
Melon Collie...
....taken from old joke/calvin and hobbes, 
 
mildly amusing premise.

Title article: TRUE LOVE
Date: 2008-12-31 03:37:44

good poem, wasn't blown away, but then again, who the hell am I :) 
 
good job, you're definitely talented! :) 
 
bte, completely unrelated, but that's a really cool profile pic. The fighter and the poet! hehe

Title article: Giuseppe Mahldolvi
Date: 2008-12-31 03:33:46

In a word, charming. 
My only complaint is that nothing really happens or develops, but that's just me, I hear that's not necessary in short stories, so I believe the people that tell me that. 
 
good job :)

Title article: Commutation
Date: 2008-12-29 20:29:56

I can relate 
 
mathematical logical assessment of unforced labor 
 
no job=no beer 
beer+no job=live with parents 
beer+job=happy 
 
good job...haha...pun

Title article: We the People
Date: 2008-12-28 15:35:47

good message, true, all very true. overall, good job

Title article: Writing Prompt "The Gambler and the Bum"
Date: 2008-12-28 15:04:19
Yes
Howard Hughes, haha of course Howard f-ing Hughes, who else could it be. 
 
Excellent, I'd give you a six if i could, but five, cause it don't go any higher.

Title article: She Dances on Her Toes
Date: 2008-12-28 14:55:35
man...
I thought i was in for a ballerina imp...oh my 
 
great story, although the wind got taken out of me million dollar baby style

Title article: Erotic Tranquility
Date: 2008-12-28 14:48:01
haha
I feel like I'm eleven all over again. Way to go woman!You must have brothers or something, cause this is too right!

Title article: Three little Questions
Date: 2008-12-28 10:58:13
Answers
1. Insanity is the poorly adjusted introverted man's escape, or just poor wiring of the brain 
 
2.insects squirm 
 
3.no, a square is a rectangle, a rectangle does not have to be a square

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Philip Neale (philneale1952)

Heanor, Derbyshire
 Created On: 12/20/2008 23:55:09
First one in the book? Yee Haa!

Best wishes now that we're back up and running.

Phil

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