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Member Since	07/11/2008
Last Online	01/08/2009
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About Myself:

Salesman, 27, budding writer. Not yet married I live with my partner, 23, accountant.

Last year, I spent 4 months in UK (Canterbury)in a host family. During that period I worked as a teacher assistant at the infant departement in a private school 'Vernom Holme' in Kent.

Coming back to France I was addicted to English Language and start writing.
I recently achieved my distance writing short stories courses.

Short story published:

The Demon Diary online and in print in 'Down in the Dirt' magazine and online on Jameshumig.com.

'A strange way toward a tragic truth' online and in print in 'Down in the Dirt'.

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Jan 7, 2009	A Trick or Not	Mystery	59
Jan 2, 2009	An unexpected gift, Chapter 1	Mystery	130
Dec 18, 2008	A strange way toward a tragic truth (the final one)	Mystery	78
Dec 15, 2008	The Malefic House	Horror	112
Nov 28, 2008	A strange way toward a tragic truth, Chapter 2	Mystery	107
Nov 25, 2008	A strange way toward a tragic truth, Chapter 1	Mystery	114
Oct 28, 2008	The Malefic House (The Final one), Chapter 2	Horror	328
Oct 21, 2008	A Desire for vengeance	Romance	320
Oct 1, 2008	The Malefic House, Chapter 1	Horror	320
Sep 2, 2008	Criminal Machination, Chapter 1	Mystery	156
Jul 30, 2008	The Demon Diary	Mystery	475

Comments

Total number of comments: 144

Title article: Red Handed
Date: 2009-01-08 11:29:55

So traumatized by this man, Mr Redman that he's completely lost his mind. It caught all my attention and the twist at the end is quite surprising.

I enjoyed it.
Good stuff,
Seb.

Title article: Estranged
Date: 2009-01-08 04:52:41

I also enjoyed this story. It caught my attention.
The emotion builds up to a dramtic tension. It well-expressed and the storyline moves at a good pace.

Good story.

Title article: Archangel/Island, Chapter 3
Date: 2009-01-07 11:34:40

It was good. With your description, the tension through the story was almost palpable.
It moves at nice pace and you keep well the mystery in suspense.

I enjoyed it and wait for the next one.
Keep on, Jess.
Seb.

Title article: At Your Command
Date: 2009-01-07 11:18:20

I found this story interesting and enjoyed reading it, although I'm not a real believer.

The storyline is handed with obvious knowledge on the subject and well structured.

Well done, Phil.
Seb.

Title article: QUEER.
Date: 2009-01-05 12:35:24

A great Read.It was beautifully written. The beginning attracts my interest and was quite surprised by the unexpected ending.

Seb.

Title article: Rookie, Chapter One
Date: 2009-01-05 12:15:37

A great read.
With your great and full description, a powerful atmopshere run through the story which is almost palpable.

I enjoyed it and will more about this story.
Seb.

Title article: Lullaby
Date: 2009-01-05 11:33:02

It was a lovely story. It flows very well as the plotline unfolds.
The ending is quite unexpected.

I enjoyed it.
Seb.

Title article: A Dance in the Rain
Date: 2009-01-05 11:14:38

It was a wonderful love story. With your great description, a lovely and romantic atmopshere run through the story although the sadness is there.

I enjoyed it. A delightful story.
Seb.

Title article: Kallisa's Creed, Chapter 1
Date: 2009-01-05 10:26:22

I think it's a good start. You gave a great and vivid description of the setting. The story moves at good pace as the plot unfolds.

I just noticed to what I believe are just some typos. This first chapter gripped me and I'll be back to see where all this is going.

Write on!
Seb.

Title article: Secret Admirer
Date: 2009-01-03 22:39:36

An enjoyable story which flows nicely.I woudn't have expected muderers in this kind of story.

Wow, a great admirer she had there. Honestly, I would be scared to have an admirer of that kind. Kill for his beloved.

Overall good!
Seb.

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Philip Neale (philneale1952) Derbyshire, England	Created On: 07/30/2008 09:13:06 J'ai pensee qu'il faut m'introduire dans votre livre. Bonjour. Philippe

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