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Fallat (Fallat)
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Jul 10, 2008GibsonHorror 193

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Total number of comments: 6

Title article: The Adventures Of Pugswallow, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-12-12 18:32:25

i liked it

Title article: Confession
Date: 2008-07-10 17:19:20

you know what i think.

Title article: Gibson
Date: 2008-07-10 17:15:48

thanks. when arn't there any typos.

Title article: Growth
Date: 2008-07-10 16:51:22

well, here is a really good story. i liked it, but the thing i will comment is that you need to fix the layout. your a writer, have some pride in your work. it is really good.

Title article: SHADOW OF THE FALLEN, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-07-10 16:27:58

It's not bad. I like the idea, but I think it is a little short for a chapter. But if you are going to make all the chapters that long, then I applaud you. I also think you could have given more atmosphere and description of your characters.

Title article: Test + Torture = Testure
Date: 2008-07-10 16:17:38

I like the story. I did see the ending coming, but very, very instresting. I don't think there is anything that I can say that you have not heard already.

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