There Is Only One Star, Chapter 3

That was a little less than three years ago; yet it...

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About Myself: Im new here and i like posting stuff to get criticism

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Total number of comments: 63

Title article: the whole
Date: 2008-07-05 23:10:47
Wow
i really felt this poem my favorite line  
 
And now I know when you said you loved me, truly by me, you meant her. thats were i made the connection good job

Title article: Diary of a Fat Girl
Date: 2008-07-05 23:01:27
great
yes this would be a great book my input is go for i don't want to sound stupid so ill stop here

Title article: Love Ends
Date: 2008-07-05 22:58:17
good job
well they put it better than i could

Title article: Days of End (a journey of man)chapter 1 & 2
Date: 2008-07-05 22:57:21
more!more!
the story is so captivating

Title article: Mr. Wise, Where Are You
Date: 2008-07-05 17:46:49
Okay
try to get it but...

Title article: Killing Me Softly
Date: 2008-07-05 17:45:44
i think
it was a pretty nice one

Title article: Thoughts of an Lunatic.
Date: 2008-07-05 17:41:41
What I Think
is that that it was a good poem but you kinda lost the way in rhyming when you said Spat upon, a disease in everyone's eyes.

Title article: The Fairy's Retribution
Date: 2008-07-05 17:39:58
very good
this was very good my favorite line was when you said tht the witch had to die i thought it was a very good rhyme

Title article: Love's Appeal
Date: 2008-07-05 17:36:46
Man
amatayo please just shut up i know i am saying what everyone is thinking you try and promote yourself to much on other peoples poems just give your criticism like everyone else.....the flow was one i am proud of that i would like to have soon

Title article: Question of Love
Date: 2008-07-05 17:34:33
i liked it
good not much criticism to give

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