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ello dere!
well lets just say i have a sick sense of humor. i love reading beckett and stoppard and that sort of thing and it comes out a little bit in my writing. i absolutely loath grammar and spelling so there are lots of typos in my stories. anyway, thats about it thanks for stopping by!

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Title article: Open Your Eyes
Date: 2008-07-08 23:09:56
nice
i'd like to see more of this character, maybe another story with him? very well developed showing a soldiers remorse for the crimes he has committed, but brings in an extra level with the wife. 
 
beautiful

Title article: Life is Beau-ti-ful
Date: 2008-07-05 14:30:37
a little bit mixed
i thought the overall message of the story was done very well, but there were a few awkward parts that didnt seem quite as realistic as the message it was putting up

Title article: Today Is The Day
Date: 2008-07-05 14:19:18

very nice. i dont think i've read anything so detailed from that point of view. excellent subject to write on. i've personally always been fascinated with the idea that the criminals redemption came only from condemnation

Title article: The Darkness of Daylight
Date: 2008-07-05 14:12:04
pure
i thought the raw emotion of the story was beautifully conveyed. the world is a tough place for anyone and i was very impressed by this snapshot of it. 
 
i wouldn't change the content of the story at all, but if i could make one suggestion i would say that there are a few places where a slightly more vivid word could have been used 
 
over all though, pretty wicked

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