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Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Jan 2, 2009	Alone	Poetry	97
Sep 20, 2008	Blue Room	Horror	611
Sep 10, 2008	Confessions of a Teenage Psyche Case	Humor	778

Comments

Total number of comments: 20

Title article: Alone
Date: 2009-01-04 19:33:58

give us this day our daily mask
is a line from rosencrantz and guildenstern are dead, so i cant take credit for it. amazing play, by the way!

Title article: Alone
Date: 2009-01-02 18:57:55

thanks
for finding the hidden meaning! i'm glad you got it!

Title article: Confessions of a Teenage Psyche Case
Date: 2008-11-19 15:07:21

thank ya
Thanks to all of you guys for leaving comments!

but i guess i should clarify. the "blue room" is that magical place inside any mental institution that is basically solitary confinement. if you act up you typically get a timeout in the blue room which gets that name because the walls are usually painted blue because it is a calming colour. anyway, its a punishment. it is also usually soundproof with a small window in the door. its great for naps lol

Title article: Tell Me That You Love Me
Date: 2008-09-21 20:00:41

i absolutely loved the second one. beautiful and sincere. had a sort of innocence that you don't really see much these days. the first part was very good, but the second is much more my style.

Title article: Highly Decorated
Date: 2008-08-29 10:45:50

very nice
wondefully done. beautiful personification, loved the satire. my favorite part was the standing for parliament bit. hilarious! simply amazing, i really loved this one

Title article: From Stagnant Water
Date: 2008-08-24 16:56:06

very nice
short sweet and to the point.

"Soon enough an entire platoon had engaged me swooping in for quick aggressive attacks"

i liked the use of the word platoon. works very well.

it had its moments of being very funny, but for me, i liked it for the imagery

Title article: Upstream Looking Down (Completed)
Date: 2008-08-10 22:54:57

good
sad, but written in a calming way if that makes any sense to anyone but me. a little more development would have been nice, but overall i thought it was quite good. keep writing and i'll keep reading!

Title article: The Beast and the Wicked Witch
Date: 2008-08-10 22:49:55

fun to read
i thought it was fun to read if nothing more. a little abstract and hard to follow at the beginning, but it came together and it was just a fun story to read

Title article: Bicycle
Date: 2008-08-10 22:35:40

heart wrenching
Very emotional. it made me tear up a little bit. this is one of my favorites out of what i have read. i love raw emotion and this is a perfect example. keep up the amazing work!

Title article: The Elephant Dance, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-08-10 22:15:57

not too shabby
i liked it. the ending threw me a little bit. i'm not sure if it is that i didnt like it or that it just came a little bit to soon. the elephant was pretty boss though, i have to admit.

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