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Member Since	06/30/2008
Last Online	11/15/2008
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About Myself:

Student, writer, hooker killer. I'm educated but im vulgar, i'm cynical but optimistic, i'm blunt but articulate, i'm an asshole but I have a good heart, im disliked by many but really really loved by a few. I wouldn't want it any other way. I was introverted in my youth, and very extroverted in my adolescence. I have been a geek and a jock, a nerd and a frat boy. I have a twisted sense of humor and i love horror. My influences are Chuck Palahniuk, H.P. Lovecraft, Kurt Vonnegut and Ray Bradbury. I love my schools UC Riverside and Arizona State University.

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Jul 9, 2008	Confession	Horror	260
Jul 8, 2008	The Gift	Miscellaneous Stories	193
Jul 2, 2008	Corruption	Horror	218
Jul 1, 2008	Growth	Horror	633
Jul 1, 2008	The Weight	Horror	195

Comments

Title article: Unwanted Praise
Date: 2008-07-02 02:38:05

haha
i thoroughly enjoyed this. had me hooked immediately, although i'm not much for poetry to be honest.

Title article: How To Lose Weight And Make Friends With Proper Diet.
Date: 2008-07-01 21:41:55

nice
this is truly wonderful satire. I can totally imagine some has been celebrity touting this efficient way of losing weight. great story considering i just recently wrote about struggling with weight myself.

Title article: DOG
Date: 2008-07-01 14:23:00

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the story is there but it is a little rambling. There is much you can cut from it without losing the overall story. The open end is a little anticlimactic.

Title article: Test + Torture = Testure
Date: 2008-07-01 13:57:32

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The ending was a little predictable but overall the narrative was excellent. The morality of the story is quite clear, further discussion would serve to flesh it out more.

Title article: Growth
Date: 2008-07-01 12:22:12

Author
thanks for the comments guys. The paragraphs got all messed up when i copied the story last night,I was also kind of lazy to fix it. Thank you for reading and commenting. it means a lot

Title article: The Weight
Date: 2008-07-01 12:20:08

Growth
hey guys, thank you very much for all the comments. I feel i have to clarify some things though, first off i'm a guy. But i am glad that you couldn't tell because my personality didn't come through the character. I did struggle a little with weight in high school but football helped to clear all of that. thank you very much for reviewing my story.