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Matthew Daniel Carter (Pilgrim)
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Member Since 06/25/2008
Last Online 10/11/2008
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About Myself: Truth only exists within an individuals personal experience. If I believe I am a pitcher of orange juice and if you come near me I scream because I think that you will spill me, who are you to tell me I'm wrong? There are many John Wayne's that are locked in insane asylums because they believe they are something that other's say they are not. So my writing is my truth, regardless how insane some of them may be regarded, projected the way I intrepret it. I have travelled the world and have hitchiked across America. I've made my home in tents, drain tunnels, cars, and an occasional apartment. I've been married for seven years, in fact, I met my wife (Scooby on this site) as I was hitchiking down a lone highway in Georgia. But that's another story. Anyway, life is short then we die. I can't change the world, but maybe, just maybe, I can make a difference.

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Oct 10, 2008Feast Of Worms, Chapter 7Horror 101
Oct 8, 2008Feast Of Worms, Chapter 6Horror 130
Oct 7, 2008Feast Of Worms, Chapter 5Horror 150
Oct 5, 2008Feast Of Worms, Chapter 4Horror 149
Oct 4, 2008Feast Of Worms, Chapter 3Horror 148
Oct 3, 2008Feast Of Worms, Chapter 2Horror 186
Oct 3, 2008Feast Of Worms, Chapter 1Horror 195
Sep 24, 2008Why, Daddy?Poetry 218
Sep 22, 2008Please, Come Home. Please.Miscellaneous Stories 273
Sep 21, 2008Run Katy RunMiscellaneous Stories 567
Sep 20, 2008An Undeniable TruthNon-Fiction 410
Sep 13, 2008What Goes Around. . . Well, You Know The RestMiscellaneous Stories 731
Sep 12, 2008Comforting MemoriesPoetry 266
Sep 11, 2008The DescentPoetry 105
Sep 9, 2008A Faithful SailPoetry 185
Sep 8, 2008Two Profound WordsNon-Fiction 261
Sep 8, 2008A Haiku MysteryPoetry 204
Sep 6, 2008The LighthousePoetry 171
Sep 5, 2008Rendition Of A RosePoetry 246
Sep 4, 2008Wisdom Is For The BirdsMiscellaneous Stories 500
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Comments

Total number of comments: 581

Title article: Waiting on Time
Date: 2008-10-10 19:34:17

Not bad.  
A good snapshot into the last moments of a person't life. Tragic, yet relieving.  
Death can be a lover to some and a murderer to others.

Title article: Feast Of Worms, Chapter 7
Date: 2008-10-10 13:53:24

Thanks all for the feedback- I had an awsome time writing this story. Chances are I'll continue, but not right now.

Title article: Feast Of Worms, Chapter 7
Date: 2008-10-10 00:21:42

I'm thinking that I could go further with this. What's on my mind is for the first seven chapters to be a prelude to an intense zombie-like novel. I don't know.

Title article: May
Date: 2008-10-09 22:28:26

Hey this is good poetry. I understand that you are from a foreign land, so English is most likely not your first language. Is this what you meant: 
May 
May the rain wash your name from my land 
Or 
May the dust cover your photos inside my room 
Or may death take you or I 
Yet 
None of these things can take you away from my heart.

Title article: Her Magic Touch, Chapter 3
Date: 2008-10-09 11:20:38

The flow is moving along rather quickly now that the character attains confidence.  
The plot thickens a little, leading the reader to want more. 
Good job.

Title article: Ripples
Date: 2008-10-09 10:57:40

Very good.  
The poem was smooth and crisp, the flow was good.  
I like the use of the color, it seemed to set a mood for the tone of the words. I liked, "Knowing the answer, but still wondering why." 
Good job.

Title article: Pennies, Chapter 2
Date: 2008-10-09 10:48:06

Keeps going- I'm still waiting for a hook or a point; yet, maybe that's the point. I still found a large amount of grammatical errors that will tear readers away from the story. This needs a lot of cleaning up, but it could have potential.

Title article: Pennies, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-10-09 10:43:39

So far I'm waiting for a hook- something to guide me to the next chapter, however, the mystery of what is happening can lead a reader to the next step. I found a lot of grammatical errors: run-on sentences, poor sentence structure, misspelled words.  
Keep up the good work.

Title article: Her Magic Touch, Chapter 2
Date: 2008-10-09 10:32:20

This is getting interesting.  
I like the color layout, add a bit of flavor to the text.  
They don't even ask her name, how rude! I guess the men are only in if for one thing. 
Good job.

Title article: It-Mom
Date: 2008-10-08 11:24:11

Pretty good.  
You led the story well with quick descriptions, involving and getting to know the character. I almost thought at one time he might have been delusional and "thought" his mom was different and killer her in his delusional state- hey, that sounds like a good idea for a story. You've inspired me. 
Good job.

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OFFLINE J. Dane Tyler (DarcKnyt)
OFFLINE Roy Hahne (Synchronicity)
OFFLINE Dipankar Dasgupta (d.dasgupta)
OFFLINE Michelle Huff (allmine)
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Name Entry
Michelle Huff (allmine)

In the bathroom
Created On: 10/06/2008 10:12:08

Thanks for that picture..now I have no reason to want to eat lunch

Amy Carter (scooby)

Created On: 10/04/2008 14:43:37

Hey babe, I guess I will sign your guestbook now. Love ya

Michelle Huff (allmine)

Right here...
Created On: 09/25/2008 09:36:44

You owe me a box of Kleenex. That and my make-up is running...

Gone (So long!)

Warwick, Rhode Island
Created On: 09/02/2008 18:40:59

Matthew,
Good to hear from you. Indeed you can make a difference!
Darrin

Philip Neale (philneale1952)

Derbyshire
Created On: 07/04/2008 03:25:36

I'll sign, I'll sign...........Oh bugger, Annie got there first.........

Phil

Amie Kerlin (lemon)

somewhere in time
Created On: 07/02/2008 20:50:52

hey! you need someone to sign your guestbook.. oh wait.. I just did

keep up the great work with your writing!

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