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Member Since	06/25/2008
Last Online	10/11/2008
Connections	15
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About Myself:

Truth only exists within an individuals personal experience. If I believe I am a pitcher of orange juice and if you come near me I scream because I think that you will spill me, who are you to tell me I'm wrong? There are many John Wayne's that are locked in insane asylums because they believe they are something that other's say they are not. So my writing is my truth, regardless how insane some of them may be regarded, projected the way I intrepret it. I have travelled the world and have hitchiked across America. I've made my home in tents, drain tunnels, cars, and an occasional apartment. I've been married for seven years, in fact, I met my wife (Scooby on this site) as I was hitchiking down a lone highway in Georgia. But that's another story. Anyway, life is short then we die. I can't change the world, but maybe, just maybe, I can make a difference.

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Oct 10, 2008	Feast Of Worms, Chapter 7	Horror	101
Oct 8, 2008	Feast Of Worms, Chapter 6	Horror	130
Oct 7, 2008	Feast Of Worms, Chapter 5	Horror	150
Oct 5, 2008	Feast Of Worms, Chapter 4	Horror	149
Oct 4, 2008	Feast Of Worms, Chapter 3	Horror	148
Oct 3, 2008	Feast Of Worms, Chapter 2	Horror	186
Oct 3, 2008	Feast Of Worms, Chapter 1	Horror	195
Sep 24, 2008	Why, Daddy?	Poetry	218
Sep 22, 2008	Please, Come Home. Please.	Miscellaneous Stories	273
Sep 21, 2008	Run Katy Run	Miscellaneous Stories	567
Sep 20, 2008	An Undeniable Truth	Non-Fiction	410
Sep 13, 2008	What Goes Around. . . Well, You Know The Rest	Miscellaneous Stories	731
Sep 12, 2008	Comforting Memories	Poetry	266
Sep 11, 2008	The Descent	Poetry	105
Sep 9, 2008	A Faithful Sail	Poetry	185
Sep 8, 2008	Two Profound Words	Non-Fiction	261
Sep 8, 2008	A Haiku Mystery	Poetry	204
Sep 6, 2008	The Lighthouse	Poetry	171
Sep 5, 2008	Rendition Of A Rose	Poetry	246
Sep 4, 2008	Wisdom Is For The Birds	Miscellaneous Stories	500

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Comments

Total number of comments: 581

Title article: Waiting on Time
Date: 2008-10-10 19:34:17

Not bad.
A good snapshot into the last moments of a person't life. Tragic, yet relieving.
Death can be a lover to some and a murderer to others.

Title article: Feast Of Worms, Chapter 7
Date: 2008-10-10 13:53:24

Thanks all for the feedback- I had an awsome time writing this story. Chances are I'll continue, but not right now.

Title article: Feast Of Worms, Chapter 7
Date: 2008-10-10 00:21:42

I'm thinking that I could go further with this. What's on my mind is for the first seven chapters to be a prelude to an intense zombie-like novel. I don't know.

Title article: May
Date: 2008-10-09 22:28:26

Hey this is good poetry. I understand that you are from a foreign land, so English is most likely not your first language. Is this what you meant:
May
May the rain wash your name from my land
Or
May the dust cover your photos inside my room
Or may death take you or I
Yet
None of these things can take you away from my heart.

Title article: Her Magic Touch, Chapter 3
Date: 2008-10-09 11:20:38

The flow is moving along rather quickly now that the character attains confidence.
The plot thickens a little, leading the reader to want more.
Good job.

Title article: Ripples
Date: 2008-10-09 10:57:40

Very good.
The poem was smooth and crisp, the flow was good.
I like the use of the color, it seemed to set a mood for the tone of the words. I liked, "Knowing the answer, but still wondering why."
Good job.

Title article: Pennies, Chapter 2
Date: 2008-10-09 10:48:06

Keeps going- I'm still waiting for a hook or a point; yet, maybe that's the point. I still found a large amount of grammatical errors that will tear readers away from the story. This needs a lot of cleaning up, but it could have potential.

Title article: Pennies, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-10-09 10:43:39

So far I'm waiting for a hook- something to guide me to the next chapter, however, the mystery of what is happening can lead a reader to the next step. I found a lot of grammatical errors: run-on sentences, poor sentence structure, misspelled words.
Keep up the good work.

Title article: Her Magic Touch, Chapter 2
Date: 2008-10-09 10:32:20

This is getting interesting.
I like the color layout, add a bit of flavor to the text.
They don't even ask her name, how rude! I guess the men are only in if for one thing.
Good job.

Title article: It-Mom
Date: 2008-10-08 11:24:11

Pretty good.
You led the story well with quick descriptions, involving and getting to know the character. I almost thought at one time he might have been delusional and "thought" his mom was different and killer her in his delusional state- hey, that sounds like a good idea for a story. You've inspired me.
Good job.

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Forum

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10/09/2008 12:07:58	Re:Proclaim Your Royalty	Off-Topic	314372
10/08/2008 22:41:12	Re:Proclaim Your Royalty	Off-Topic	314372
09/29/2008 11:37:52	Re:Proclaim Your Royalty	Off-Topic	314372
09/28/2008 14:02:27	Re:Proclaim Your Royalty	Off-Topic	314372
09/25/2008 12:00:20	Re:Proclaim Your Royalty	Off-Topic	314372
09/25/2008 11:53:24	Re:Proclaim Your Royalty	Off-Topic	314372
09/25/2008 11:48:44	Re:Proclaim Your Royalty	Off-Topic	314372
09/25/2008 11:43:29	Re:Proclaim Your Royalty	Off-Topic	314372
09/25/2008 11:36:51	Re:Proclaim Your Royalty	Off-Topic	314372
09/25/2008 11:08:19	Re:Proclaim Your Royalty	Off-Topic	314372

Connection

Matthew Daniel Carter (Pilgrim)'s connections

Noof F. Al-Ashjaai (Noof Fahd)

J. Dane Tyler (DarcKnyt)

Roy Hahne (Synchronicity)

Dipankar Dasgupta (d.dasgupta)

Michelle Huff (allmine)

Ashutosh Ghildiyal (Ashutosh)

Jessie Masoner (Behind_the_Mask)

Helen Moore (HelentheCelt)

Gore And Blood (gore_and_blood)

J Schilling (Ruby Whispers)

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Guestbook

Name	Entry
Michelle Huff (allmine) In the bathroom	Created On: 10/06/2008 10:12:08 Thanks for that picture..now I have no reason to want to eat lunch
Amy Carter (scooby)	Created On: 10/04/2008 14:43:37 Hey babe, I guess I will sign your guestbook now. Love ya
Michelle Huff (allmine) Right here...	Created On: 09/25/2008 09:36:44 You owe me a box of Kleenex. That and my make-up is running...
Gone (So long!) Warwick, Rhode Island	Created On: 09/02/2008 18:40:59 Matthew, Good to hear from you. Indeed you can make a difference! Darrin
Philip Neale (philneale1952) Derbyshire	Created On: 07/04/2008 03:25:36 I'll sign, I'll sign...........Oh bugger, Annie got there first......... Phil
Amie Kerlin (lemon) somewhere in time	Created On: 07/02/2008 20:50:52 hey! you need someone to sign your guestbook.. oh wait.. I just did keep up the great work with your writing!

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